virman ff: Burning in Passion part 13 page 81 (6 Dec oct 2014) *NEW*

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Jannat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#451

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virmanfan013

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Posted: 11 years ago

#452

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unress

hayee tussi update kar ditti 🤣

its superb nd worth reading it..i really loved it

starting was super good nd the way u wrote each n everyone's pov and how they all are regretting was wonderfull

i truly want them to suffer for their deeds coz they had played with an innocent life who was not at fault n what she got in the end death that too without any fault

ahan these zindal n mittals are really intresting person nd ofcourse MJ

the way u describe her attitude it seem like she is a tough nut to crack..
now waiting eagerly for the next part

plz update soon
thanks for the pm
n ressing for me
tc love u ur princess ❤️

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swathin

@swathin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#453

wonderful update
with a new manvi...
with full of attitude n arrogance
loved their point of views...
waiting to c their reaction.

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#454

great part,
i loved the way you wrote all the regrets of them...

i have to admit that normally i dont like it to show a person again alive when they showed them dead in shows...because there is everytime a nice person opposite the person whom everybody think is dead and in the end teh nice person dont gets her/ his love back..because the "dead" person goes everytime to the person who hurts them in the beginning, and im just worried to think that the same will happen here with raunak...
( I hope i have wrote it so that you can understand me)

thanks for pm

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panamaa

@panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#455

awesome awesome

loved it

i know that u wull not kill our manvi

nd these ff become more intresting di

loved it

but our new manvi is so much of attitude naa

but i am loving these new avathar of manvi

nd i want her to be the same manvi in past something like lost memory nd all

update soon😊

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

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Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Awesome update...
I really feel sad for Virat,Rohan and Maya..
Thank god Manvi is not dead..
She is only changed..
But she is really changed fully...
Awww Virat heard her name..
Hope Virat,Rohan,Maya and Manvi come face to face soon...
Pleaseee update soon...
Thanks for the PM...

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aparnalokam

@aparnalokam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#457

Superb update dear
Manvi is back in new avatar dats gud
Aww virat feels dat he had heard her voice b4 and he cme 2 knw her name
I am waiting dat virat nd manvi shld cum face to face
And virats reaction at dat tym
Update d nxt part soon dear

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#458

it was an amazing update Yar...amazing twist indeed.. I really liked it. update soon

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#459

😊AWESOME UPDATE SHIVI AND JANNAT. U BOTH ROCKED. UPDATE IS SUPERB. FEEL GOOD FOR VIRAT,MAYA AND ROHAN BECOZ AFTER ALL WHAT THEY DO THEY DESERVE THAT SUFFERING AND GUILT. NOW ENTRY OF NEW MANVI AS MJ LIKES IT VERY MUCH.LIKES HER ATTITUDE VERY MUCH. I THINK IT IS THE OLD MANVI.NOW IT IS THE TURN TO TAKE REVENGE. AB NEW MANVI GIN GIN KAR BADLE LEGI SABI SE I THINK THAT.NOW WAITING FOR VIRAT AND MANVI FACE TO FACE MEETING AND VIRAT SHOCKING EXPRESSION. SO UPDATE NEXT PART SOON. TAKE CARE😊

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Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#460

Awesome update!!!!

Liked d new phase in d story..all 3 in regret n guilt n den comes d entry of maanvi whoz d complete opposite to what d character was in d past...like it...its like karma is bk to show d taste of deir own medicine . Sumtimes regret isn't enuf...waitin for next n thanks for the PM Sidrah!!!!