virman ff: Burning in Passion part 13 page 81 (6 Dec oct 2014) *NEW*

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

awesome update
loved it
new entry's
and new manvi completely opp of old manvi
waiting for their meeting
continue soon
thanks foe the pm

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GOOGLU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Res
Happy to see ur wrk. .

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mira shrestha

@NIVILOV

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Awsum princess realy loved whole update 😲 manvi is dead omg realy poor virat 😲 now [:@] who is this MJ AHHH MANVI JINDAL sound intersting hu arggg bt who is new boy 😡 runak i don't like him bt shivi ❤️ N SHARDHA ❤️ U Both r great update is great n plz 😭 plz shardha dear ur r my one of fav writer plz update ur all story in forum plz princess cz i can't read in blog cz i haven,t blog id so i can't comment plz plz update here take ur time bt plz update

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Aenna

@Aenna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

It would be more interesting if
This manvi wud be d same manvi
Plz try to do that...

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bubbles666

@bubbles666

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

wow
maanvi is back
but is she the same one?
or she is a different person.
but i want mj to be our maanvi,
so that payback to them will be justified.
thanks for pm
update soon.

Edited by VIRMANVIAN - 11 years ago

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Polo_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

nice like akways! Waiting for next!

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Sidrah 🤗.. Glad to see your update 😃.. Awesome!! ⭐️ Liked the beginning especially the way you described Virat, Rohan and Maya's guilt and grief.. But sometimes feeling guilty is not enough.. Liked the new entries.. MJ sounds cool 😎.. I hope she is our old Manvi only.. Eagerly waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care 😃