virman ff: Burning in Passion part 13 page 81 (6 Dec oct 2014) *NEW*

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GOOGLU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

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It's wonderful update dear. ..
U made me speechless. ...
Frst love the way u portrayed virat .. maya n rohan. ...
And bt can say abt MJ grand entry...
Love her style n her attitude. ...
Raunak ...its sweet name ..let's see how his role progressed???
But ts means...there is tough competition for virat...
Love virman phone conversation n manvi's way of answering. ..
Only the name of manvi shocked virat..
Let's see how will he react on face to face encounter wd manvi.????
Egrly waiting for next chapter. ...
Plzzz try to continue soon. ..
Thanks alot for pm dea. ..
Keep rocking
Love you sidhrah. ..
Love you sarah. ..
Tc dears...

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Abqurah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Awesome update appi and Di

Truely amazing and we'll executed

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

Update soon

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pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#473

nice update all are feel guilty and
what happen when she come front
of every one update soon

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Angelic-Catty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Issshhh m sooo late again sorry haan.. but deir aaye durust aaye ;) wats say?? :p

Comment for chappy 09:

All the things were cleared itself in the starting everyone was sad n dey were right at their places..

Oh Rose aunty is really nyc .. she gave maanvi the luv whch she lost month bck.. really in dis cruel world people lyk her r really hard to find <3

OMG Maya is there ufff.. she will defo insult her so mch.. urrrghhh jst hate dat annoying soul 😡 Urrrgghhh she is jst ufff 😡

Wht ??? really VSV N Rohan r buddies den wht waz all dat.. really.. 😲 m still in shock OMG oh my god yr really it was all jst coz of one bet so cheap yr.. dey hurted her broke her jst cox of mere bet 😭

Means Rohan's luv waz fake.. 😡 Isshhh maanvi listened.. but m happy dat she did so ... otherwise she wud hve nvr cum to knw bout their bet😭 Virat really wants her to listen.. if i wud b at her place i wud surely had given him 2 tight slaps 😡 he broke her heart n still wants her to listen..

Wht accident.. 😭 Nooo maanvi dead.. nooo... 😭😭😭

But really luvd dis updt.. n eagerly waiting for next..

P.S: Will post the comment of chappy 10 after reading it.. after iftar :*

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kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#475

Wonderful update

Loved it

Maanvi is back

Liked new maanvi

Plz cont soon

Thanks for the pm

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Angelic-Catty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Its true dat all of their lives changed but wht to do nw frm it.. Maanvi paid widout any mistake n dat too wid her lyf.. daz seriously so sad 😭

The song selection was as always mindblowing .. S a new journey.. new thing gonna cum next.. New family new twist ahhannn maza aane waala hai..😆 Maya is same dat rude n all.. all trio same in guilt.. So straight forward family dey r,.. interesting..

OH so MJ.. Ahhannn "M" stands fr Maanvi. may b 😛.. Haaye kudi saturday saturday kar di rehndi hai.. one of my fav song.. wao yr song selection is again amazing.. Maanvi luvs white colour n MJ hates it.. so finally a turing point of dis story has came..

waoo dis twist is seriously gonna b amazing.. continue soon.. :)))

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Jannat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#477

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virmanfan013

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Posted: 11 years ago

#478

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oye u don't need to say sorry..i understand so chillax ❤️
acha now coming to the update it was really outstanding yaar..the way u portray this new manvi her character her attitude was beyond awesome n am loving it

awww poor rohan got embarrass feeling sad for him bt he really deserve that..

oh ho so virat has already start thinking abt her..i know he is regretting for his bet but its rule that you cant hold time n horrible mistakes of your past never let u live in peace n ab toh ek new manvi aa gyi hai

raunak n manvi's relation is very sweet n really like that guy..

now ball is in my court n m really excited to write next part

urs princess
love u

Edited by virmanfan013 - 11 years ago

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panamaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#479

oh my god i will comment naa di

i will not take your notes sereiously

nd coming to the update i got another mind blowing update

loved it

i love that mj's attitude

but wat about these virat...?

i know he willl do some thing

but manvi is so lucky really she is

nd love htat ranauq(spelling is rite naa)

update soon

keep rocking😊

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

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Posted: 11 years ago

#480

Awesome update..
Loved it...
Virat,Rohan,Maya and Manvi finally comes face to face...
Feel sad how Manvi shouted on Rohan infront of all the people..
Is Manvi making Virat jealous with Raunak???
But Manvi is totally changed...
Feel really sad for everyone...
Loved Manvi speech...
Hope that soon the truth will be come out..
Why she is changed and how she ended up in that family...
Update soon...
Thanks for the PM..
And i always will comment on all your storys...