Two Shots: Be My Only Guiding Light *UPDATED*

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

That literally made shivers ran through my body. The simplicity with which you wrote each and thought was nothing less then beautiful, great work. Do continue and do write more on these two. :)

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-Genelia-

@-Genelia-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

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nope im not a LKG studnt 😆 nor am I learning to write numbers...🤣

bt d thing is I ws couting d days sinc u hv updtd...😆 n its bin sooo long...

10 DAYS!!!!!!

please don tadpaaaofy moore dea ...n updt it please...😳

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Radhika

@TheInkMistress

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

what a showdown!

The Mandir scene was awesome...making Shlok feel his wrong-doings.

the guy had to grovel - somewhat - to get his woman. Beautiful ending, Fin.

-Sona

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Wow great update, thank you

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Briliaaant stooory yaaar Loveeed it 👏

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

loved loved loved it...fantastic👏

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-Genelia-

@-Genelia-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

now ths is wt we call A WONDERFUL UPDT!!! I mst say it ws worth waiting!!

aah I loved astha her audacity man!!!!

n vn she fainted... haayee...

uv xactly written wt I wnted to see in d show... n tht too beautifully!!!!😳👏👏

thank u 4 writing it!!!

aww d end is cute...😳

loved it!!

thnx 4 d PM!!

hope u r goin to write more stuff!!!

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dmgomg

@dmgomg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

I got a little confused with the flashback and current timeline of the story but later caught on :P the last part was pretty hot ;D please do write more!