Two Shots: Be My Only Guiding Light *UPDATED* - Page 5

awesome update! loved the story!

OMG! What a BEAUTIFUL ending! Loved how you wrote your own version of the aftermath of the "Infamous Slap!" Needless to say, I liked yours better - it made logical sense. 😆 And the confession - it really was flawless! 😳 I hope you will definitely write more on these two!

Great update dear!!!Loved totally!!!Thanks for sharing and PM!!!!

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

OMG! What a BEAUTIFUL ending! Loved how you wrote your own version of the aftermath of the "Infamous Slap!" Needless to say, I liked yours better - it made logical sense. 😆 And the confession - it really was flawless! 😳 I hope you will definitely write more on these two!

Hehehehhhe... Honestly, I was so overpowered by the overwhelming rage, couldn't help not being a Sadist and making Aastha become one too, in my version of the story! 😆
But needless to say, if we see it other way round, if it was one of my best friend and he or she would have reacted that ways, I would have not minded at all, for they would have been concerned. The only thing I couldn't digest was Aastha being so calm and composed.

Thank you so much for your kind words rey. I hope to write sooner and make you smile, yet again. 😊

Love,
Radhika

Originally posted by: sparikh

what a showdown!

The Mandir scene was awesome...making Shlok feel his wrong-doings.

the guy had to grovel - somewhat - to get his woman. Beautiful ending, Fin.

-Sona

Thank you so much Sona, I'm so very happy could justify your expectations.
Keep in touch.

Love,
Radhika

Originally posted by: LuvStrk-001

Great update dear!!!Loved totally!!!Thanks for sharing and PM!!!!

Pleasure's all mine dear ^_^ 😊

Originally posted by: geneliataarey

now ths is wt we call A WONDERFUL UPDT!!! I mst say it ws worth waiting!!

aah I loved astha her audacity man!!!!

n vn she fainted... haayee...

uv xactly written wt I wnted to see in d show... n tht too beautifully!!!!😳👏👏

thank u 4 writing it!!!

aww d end is cute...😳

loved it!!

thnx 4 d PM!!

hope u r goin to write more stuff!!!

I was so overwhelmed with your response woman.
Thank you for believing in the story I threaded in my head. I will surely try to write more.

Hugs & Love
Radhika

Originally posted by: fire_whisky

I was so overwhelmed with your response woman.
Thank you for believing in the story I threaded in my head. I will surely try to write more.

Hugs & Love
Radhika

awww really?? im pleased to hear ths!!!

It was so damn awesome!!!! I hope you are continuing it soon!! ;)

I simply adored their screaming names at each other. Your different take on the slap was interesting. Do write more dear.