LTL Written Update
Episode~ 10
January 8th 2010
Naku's Home
The episode continues from where Gapat raises his voices and shuts everyone, particularly a stark raving mad Babi. He reminds her, told you so this issue can exposed any time! see its out in the open now! from how many people will you protect her? and for how long? being born in a poor family sealed her fate! but your brain, doesn't work! you don't understand! yells Ganpat.. Naku listens full of sadness. Babi defends, yeah you are the wise guy! so you tell me what should I have done then? let her have the same fate as Rupa?. Naku and Sethji suffer under reminders. Ganpat tries to reason , this is not in our hands, we can't control any thing! why don't you get it that god gives people what he thinks is right, their beauty, money ,family! you think you can change that? who asked you to be god? now handle the consequences! he shouts. Babi challenges weeping, yes I will handle this! I will change her fate! I will not let her be ruined like Rupa! An annoyed Ganpat argues ,so what will you do? come on tell me! pick up a gun and shoot every one? who do you think you are Phoolan Devi, bandit queen ! idiot.. he takes a swig and then turns on his son, what are you doing here ? get upstairs and go to bed!
Babi looks sadly at both her children ,and weeps, I, couldn't save my older daughter.. she was ruined..
Babi recalls FB how she used to plait Rupa's hair.. who complained, hurry up aye! and Babi hugged her ,with a word of motherly advice, you have such lovely hair.. never cut it. Babi recalls, she was not just Rupa by name, but in looks too, my beautiful Rupa! where she went people simply stared at her ... and she would laugh and give in, she was unfamiliar with the ways of the world, couldn't tell the difference between good and bad.. FB. young man calls out hey Madhuri how about a movie?.. get lost you fool! she replied coquettishly ..and he yells I'll come for you in the evening , he says happily and then goes to his friends and jests looks like she's hooked! she's fallen for me .. Babi recalls, with sweet talk the thugs ensnared her and led her on the wrong track.. same guy says to her, you look lovely in your new hair cut.. tell you what ,I have found a great job for you. She asks what kind of a job is this? the man replies, oh just to escort people and make money! he said.
The shine and tinkle of money trapped my daughter.. Rupa dancing in a night club , being showered by money!. shown coming home getting out of a cab. Babi saying, whether you tell me or not , I can sense every thing... I as her mother would stay awake, till she returned in the wee hours of the morning..she wouldn't tell me any thing, but I could see that my daughter was drifting away, riding the waves of greed. she would offer me the money but I would say, no don't want your money..said Babi retrospectively .. then that day arrived that I dreaded, she was offered a job in Dubai, offering a vast sum of money, a place to live in and an empty room on the top floor. Babi remembered, I begged her not to be mad! not to go my girl !you'll destroy your life.. but she was hell bent, no aye I don't want to live my life in this basti! I want to make it big in life and that too in no time.. and she left me and my house forever! my daughter left our lives, [ Naku remembers too] .. Babi recalls, the gleaming world of money snatched my daughter from me! cried Babi .. FB shows a cab leaving.. and Naku sleeping beside Babi.. she is haunted by her Rupa's words, just look at me! I have goods looks, love! what is it that I don't have! no money! I'll put to use my gorgeous looks to earn money.. Babi stirs from a nightmare, that night I decided I would not let my second daughter become another Rupa..
FB.. Babi in a hurry brings soot in a newspaper , Naku get up! get up! . Naku looks on horrified, as her mother rubs black ashes on her exposed arms, face... Babi cries, yes! with my own two hands, I buried Naku's beauty under black ashes! Ganpat in bed, from above watches, as a witness to his wife's actions... Babi comes back to reality exhausted and, addresses a weeping Naku standing in the room behind her.. I wanted to protect you from the evil eyes of this world Naku! forgive me my child..
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BASTI
Day break at the quay. Sethji roams around, goes past tea stall. Potia, sounding tough with someone, look due to you I have to come down here! can't you do a small job? do it! otherwise I'll bury you alive!. Potia suddenly notices , Sethji walking past and he calls him warmly, hey Sethji! come sit by me he says laughing heartily. He gets friendly, and asks, how come you never turn up for work?.. don't tell me you scared of the police?. Sethji remains quiet and Potia, bucks him , oyee come on you are Potia's man! a special team member, yes special! now look you need me Sethji, after all who will give protection to your sister?, Sethji ponders on these words. Potia carries on, look you will make it big in life, you have the winning streak! Guts to take risks , dare devil!, and if you stay with Potia seth your life will be made! don't take tension, just have your tea go on ..allures Potia Seth , who wants to keep his grip on Sethji.. and the scene between them ends..
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Naku's Home
In the outside kitchen, Naku like a dutiful daughter tends to chopping and preparing vegetables ,for her mother to cook. The great big wok was set on flame .. Naku turns to her exhausted mother, aye come on you know this one is a big order, best start cooking get up . A tired Babi , agrees and attempts to splash her face with water to freshen her self up.There is knock at the door and Babi calls out must be Mangla.. I'll catch her later.. the knock repeats louder this time and Naku offers to open the door. But Babi ,wiping her face says, no you carry on with what you're doing I'll check.
Meanwhile , Ganpat heads towards his front door, opens it, and before him stands much to his amazement .. Inspector Morey, eyes lowered, only to be raised up slowly giving Ganpat a cheeky smile and he slowly steps into the house moving towards him , holding a pooja thalli with parsad which he looks at. Ganpat greatly afraid says, I haven't done any thing saheb! Morey raises his right palm in almost comic fashion and then bends to touch the ground under a cowered Ganpat's feet who moves back and says, saheb what are you doing?...Morey then turns to Babi, who too comes to open the door, but is stopped in her tracks shell shocked at the sight of Morey's presence in their house.. touching her husbands feet.
Slowly with the parsad thalli held between his hands he proceeds towards her, while Naku watches from behind a curtain, in the inner quarters.. full of respect, he bends again to touch a shocked cum frightened Babi's feet, and says as he straightens himself up.. Aye, how are you? I went to the temple today, got you this offering, and this scared garland, tell you the truth ,its all Bappa's blessings ,am I right? he says cunningly joining his palms and looking to the heavens.
Babi ,nods, and then turns to catch Naku behind the curtain ,and blinks her eyes ,to indicate, all is well. Ganpat ,tells Babi, you go inside and get some water for Saheb..and get some snacks too. and Babi departs in a hurry.
Morey, catches sight of Naku's back at the hearth and later standing up, through the parted curtains. Ganpat invites him to sit down, but Morey is more interested in what is happening behind the curtains.
Sethji enters. Moray greets him with gusto, aree chota chetan! Nana munna rahi hoon! desh ka sepahi hoon!. he sings pulling Sethji's cheeks! arre you are one adventurer! you should join the police force! you know when Morey speaks it, it's like a seal of surety!, my chotta chetan!. exclaims Morey, trying to bond with Sethji..
Meanwhile Morey keeps eyeing the kitchen.. but Babi serves the water, not Naku.. Sethji, wonders what's going on. Morey accepts the metal glass of water , why are you taking the trouble aye.. he drinks, ahh.. bottled water does not taste sweet as this water..I swear Aye the water you brought me, has quenched my thirst, I feel satisfied now.. he says as he wipes his mouth with his hankie, then wipes the back of his neck , and says.. Ganpat seth, you all have to come to the police station. He looks for Naku, and then continues, its only just a formality you need to sign a paper then finished!, you see it's a legal matter and I am a cop..but because its our family..I am not that evil.. with my own family, I can overlook a thing or two.. he says looking at Babi... don't worry ,when I pick up things, everything comes out clean..and then he adds turning to Ganpat, do one more thing Ganpat, bring your daughter along.. all looked worried and Ganpat asks, Naku? why saheb?.Morey , calmly explains, there's a charge on her too, its a formality, she needs to sign ,and then we'll dispose off the case..when Morey is with you there's no need for you all to worry.. He catches a sided glimpse of Naku in the kitchen and folds his hands before Babi, ok Aye, I'll leave now..have to go to work! and then he moves to Sethji and pulls his cheeks, you will wear a uniform for sure! and go a long way!. Morey nods with respect to every one and leaves.. every one is shocked by his sudden change of behaviour. Ganpat ,says to his wife, Babi all our tension is gone now, he's such a nice man.
Babi turns her head to look at Naku, while Ganpat carries on, he will drop all charges, no more going to the police station, no one will be punished.. Babi is plagued with worried thoughts.
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Police Station
Next day at the police station, Naku, Babi, Ganpat , sit across Morey's desk, waiting for him. He comes and gives Sethji a kiss on his cheek, singing, nana munna , rahi hoon.. He asks the family to sit at ease, its all within the family! and orders, cold drinks for them, he stares at Naku, and then turns to Ganpat, so? is everything alright?.Ganpat, smiles, fine saheb. Morey ,adds with a smile, so when are you going to treat me with your Ganpat brand liquor! I'eve heard a lot of praise about it!people say your hands are magical!.Ganpat, smiles shyly, you exaggerate Saheb, when ever you say, I will bring it to you.
The constable comes and hands over the registers for signatures.. Morey ,adds, yeah ,get their signatures and finish the cases up .. and he stares at Naku.. and yells for cold drinks which arrive ,and he pulls off a heart shaped coaster, gives it a rub against his heart, and places it before Naku.. and puts her cold drink on it .. leering at her. Sethji enjoys his drink, and a satisfied Morey says, you see Morey keeps his word, .. now the case is finished , you all are free!..law enforcement, doesn't mean getting rowdy and strict with our own people, one has to be flexible.. and he looks across at Naku's face.
Then he turns to Babi, hey Aye, I've heard you cook mutton really well, biryani rice as well?.Ganpat, says yes! and he glares at his wife to look enthusiastic! and adds, dry mutton that she makes it is just mind blowing. Morey rubs his fingers.. and Naku appears annoyed like her mother, as Ganpat continues ,after blowing a kiss to his wife.. saheb, once she starts cooking, nothing can distract her, and the curry is ekdum Kolapori ! really she cooks vey tasty food.Morey says, slyly looking at Naku, your talk Ganpat, makes my mouth water, already.. and he yells for a constable, oye drop 2 kg, mutton at Aye,s place!. Ganpat, smiles, and Babi and Naku look in shock! at the proposition.
Morey announces, aye after duty, I am coming over to your house for dinner, cooked by your hands... we'll eat together like one big family..yess?.. now all of you leave , and no tension, all charges against you all have been dropped and you are free now!
The family leaves the station in a hurry..
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Naku's Home
Back in the house, Ganpat laughs as he looks at his empty bottle of liquor. Babi, asks why he laughs ? and he says it's empty like your brain!. A worried Babi cries to Ganpat ,do some thing !.He takes a swig, of his empty bottle , and Babi says. You won't do anything, I'll have to think of something myself. A worried Naku sits on the floor her back rests against the end of the bed. Babi shouts, Naku get up! get up! you go to Mangla's house now! don't turn up here in the evening! orders Babi.
Ganpat intervenes , she's not going anywhere! she stay's right here!. Babi goes mad and shouts, have you gone mad, can't you see Morey has an eye on our daughter! he'll ruin her life.
Ganpat replies, what are you afraid of? look Babi if he comes here for dinner , the entire area will respect us, yes the entire locality will respect us! come on don't sulk now, I am not even drinking, he says.
There's a knock on the door, Babi goes to open the door, and signals to Naku to go to the inner room. It was the toothy constable, with two bags, saheb has sent these bags this one is mutton, and this is basmati rice..he has asked for biryani, and kolapori curry to be made for dinner.. ok then,take the bags, and I'll leave.. he turns and says, how are you Ganpat seth ... and leaves.. Ganpat ,smiles.. such a nice man this Morey is, gem of a person!
Babi stands , perplexed with the two bags of meat and rice in her hands.. episode ends... Hamlet53~7.9.13
11th January 2010
Precap~Babi says what are you saying Saheb? it cannot be done..Morey narrows his eyes, twists his face, and picks up his gun and points it to...
Hi hammie🤗
Wow...Its a wonderful update...Loved it...For the first time Ganpat raised his voice & shouted at Babi...Ganpat challenged Babi & She challenged back to Ganpat...babi is looking like a brave mother..love her role...Phoolan devi,Bandit queen😆...BUT GANPAT😆!!...You'll realize who is babi soon.😛😛...She is really strong..😛😛..Oh!!...Painful flashback...Poor Rupa...She didn't know about this bad world& easily got trap by a guy...She wanted more money & ruined her life...Feel sad for her...Babi worried about her second child & she didn't want to lose her...So she buried naku's beauty under black ashes...That idiot potiya tried to trap Sethji again...OOPS...Morey came to meet Naku's family...He touched Ganpat's feet...This man will do anything for fulfill his desires...Such an evil man...What a brilliant act Morey ...He used sooo much of sweet coded words& Ganpat believed his acts.Morey closed all the cases filed for them...Ganpat totally believed Morey's words...Babi got shock..Ganpat gave flying kiss to babi...& Morey said he want to dinner cooked by babi...bai understood Morey's desire...Morey came for dinner. babi hid naku at inside the room...OMG!!!...What a precap!!!...Its totally interesting now...Hammie!!!...Mind blowing update dear...Enjoyed it a lot..Thank you sooo much for your superb update..Hats off to your brilliant effects dear...Sooo sweet of you...Eagerly waiting for Tuesday...Take care..Thank you so much Hammie.🤗
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