Asya TS:Tune jo mujhe di jeene ki saza-Part 3a Page 4 - Page 2

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Part 2:
Zoya was crying throughout the way.Though she had Asad's support but all the thoughts about her mothers death and fire scared her.She was continiously trying to remember anything she could make out of those dreams but she failed.The suddenly applied brakes of the car brought her back to reality and it was then she realised that she had been crying all the time.She moved her hand forward to unlatch the door but before that Asad held her hand with which she was cluthing her hankerchief tightly due to nervousness.
Asad:Zoya ek baat yaad rakhiega chahe jo ho jaye mai hamesha apke sath hu.Mai janta hu aapke liye yeh sach janna bhot zaruri hai par mere lie aap sabse zaruri hain.Aap kisi bhi baat ka stress mat lijiega aur mujhse kuch bhi chupane ki koshish mat kijiega.Okay?

Zoya nods while crying.

Asad:Aur ab rona band kijie aap to Zoya Farooqui hai na Is duniya ki sabse strong ladki.Hai na?

Zoya slightly smiles at this.Asad cups her face with his hand.

Asad:I love you. :)
Zoya:I love you too Mr.Khan.
Asad:Chale?
Zoya:Hmm.

Inside the factory:
Asad:Yahan to koi nahi hai.
Zoya:Koi to hona chahie Mr.Khan varna koi aise hume yahan kyun bulaega.

Suddenly a voice comes:
Sahi kaha tumne Zoya koi tumhe yahan aise kyun bulaega?Aur ye kya tum Asad ahmed Khan ko bhi sath le ayi.Acha hi hai vo bhi ye sach jaan jaega.

To say that Asad and Zoya were shocked to see Razia there will be an understatement.There were millions of questions running in their minds.What was Razia doing here?Did she call them here?How did she know about zoya's ammi?And to clear their confusion razia spoke.
Razia:Kya hua?Chauk gaye?Vishvas nhi ho raha ki maine tumlog ko yahan bulaya?Jab itni si baat se hi chauk gaye to sach janne ke baad kya haal hoga tumhra?

Asad:Tumne ye soch bhi kaise liya ki hum tmhari kisi bhi baat pe bharosa karenge.Zoya chalo yahan se hume is aurat ki koi baat sunne ki zarurat nahi hai.Chalo.

He holds her hand and starts to leave when Razia's voice stopped them.
Razia:Agar zoya ki ammi ki maut ka sach rashid miyan se juda ho tab bhi nahi rukoge?Janna nahi chahoge k tumhri aur zoya k ateet ki dor kis tarah ek dusre se judi hui hai.This made Asad stop in his tracks.

Asad:Yeh aap kya bakvas kar rahi hain aap?Kehna kya chahti hain aap?

Razia:Mai to bas sach keh rahi hu asad miyan.

Zoya:Dekhiye ye gol gol batein karna band kijiye.Saaf saaf boliye aap kya keh rahi hain.

Razia:Hume bhi tumse batein karne ka koi shauk nahi hai.Sach sunna chahti ho na tum to suno.Sach yeh hai ki Rashid Ahmed Khan ne tumbari ammi ka katl kiya tha.17 saal pehle isi gudiya factory mein Rashid miyan ne aag lagai thi jahan tumhari ammi jal k rakh ho gayi thi.Unhone hi maara hai tmhari ammi ko.

Zoya stumbles backwards.She starts crying uncontrollably

Zoya:Yeh aap kya keh rahi hain(sobs)?Aisa (sob) aisa nahi ho sakta?Koi meri (sob) meri ammi ko kyun marega(sob) ?Dost aisa kyun karenge?Aap jhoith bol (sob) rahi hain.Mr.Khan (sob) Mr.khan dekhiye na ye kya keh rahi hain?Ye jhooth bol rahi hai na?

Asad moves toeards zoya and comforts her.

Asad:Zoya..zoya calm down.Abhi sab clear ho jaega just calm down.(to razia)Dekhiye hum apki kisi bhi bat par yoon hi bharosa nahi kar lenge.Aapke pas koi saboot hai?Aap itne yakken se kaise keh rahi hain k janab Rashid Ahmed Khan ne zoya ki ammi ka ..unki ammi ka..

Razia:Sabr Asad miyan sabr.Kitni ajeeb bat hai na jo bat tumse bolte nahi ban rahi use karne mein tmhre abbu zara bhi nahi ghabraye.She plays the recording which she had forged and which asad and family heard outside the court thanks to tanveer.

Asad:Yeh reacording to humne suni hui hai par isse apki bat kaise sabit hoti hai?

Razia:Kam se kam meri baat to puri hone dijie.Itni besabri?Yeh dekho shayad in tasveeron ko dekhkar tumhe humpe yakeen ho jaye.

She shows them the same photographs which she had kept as aproof against rashid all these years.The pictures clearly show Rashid litting the fire and zoya's ammi in the background.

Razia smirked when she saw that her plan worked.While Asad and Zoya were too lost in their thoughts to notice her.

Asad could not believe this.He never knew that his hatred for this man can grow even a little.After getting to know that Rashid Ahmed Khan who is unfortunately his father is responsible for Zoya's ammi 's death he not only felt hatred towards him but also felt guilt creeping inside him,guilt of being the son of the man who ruined zoya's childhood.He was so occupied with his thoughts that he didnt notice zoya whose face was as pale as a ghost.

Tears were uncontrollably flowing from her eyes.The fact that her ammi was murdered and that too by a person whom she considered as her friend was not at all tolerable for her.She could just not take it anymre.She was already feling weak in her knees.Her vision blurred and she fell to the ground wuth a thud before asad could catch her.

Precap:
Zoya:Mujhe akela chod dijie Mr.Khan.
Asad:Baat bhi nahi karengi mujhse?Itna naraaz hain?
Zoya:Leave me alone.

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zabardast update!! Razia's lines were really good.. and the precap?? Whats with it? ya ya will know in the next udpate :)

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

zabardast update!! Razia's lines were really good.. and the precap?? Whats with it? ya ya will know in the next udpate :)

thankyou so much..:)will update soon.:)

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So here is Part 3a.This update is divided into two parts.Well this part is specially for MisHumptyDumpty aka Ankie because I am writing it just because she asked me to.:)

Recap:Zoya feels dizzy and and fell unconscious to the floor.

Part 3a:

Asad's thoughts were interrupted with the sound of a thud and then he noticed Zoya lying on the floor.He rushed to her and placed her head on his lap and started rubbing her hands which as cold as ice.

Asad:Zoyaaa ..zoya kya hua?Utho please .Kuch to bolo.Get up Zoya.

Razia:ch ch ch.Bechari Zoya itna bada. sadma kaise bardasht karegi?Jis insan se uska nikah hone wala tha vo aur koi ni balki uski ammi ke katil ka beta hai.Kismat bhi kaise ajeeb khel khekti hai na Asad Miyan.

Asad was not even listening to Razia's nonsense.He was just concerned about Zoya right now.when after several attempts zoya didnt wake up he picked her up and headed towards their car.He drove as fast as possible to their home galncing back at zoya every now and then.

Asad's Residence:
Asad reached Khan Villa carrying Zoya in his arms.Dilshad and Najma who were in the living room were shocked to see Zoya like this.

Dilshad:Asad yeh kya hua zoya ko?

Asad:Ammi yeh sab hum bad mein discuss krenge aap plz jaldi se doctor ko bulaiye.

He carried her to her room and laid her on the bed.Soon the dotor arrived.Asad was sitting on the bed holding zoya's hand while the doctor was checking on her.

Asad:Doctor kya hua hai zoya ko?Vo aise thandi kyun padh gayi hain?Vo thik to hai na?

Doctor:Dekhiye Mr.Khan inhe koi bohat bada shock laga hai jise inka brain bear nahi kar paya hai jiski vajah se inki ek nerve mein swelling aa gayi hai.Moreover inka B.P. suddenly kafi high ho gaya hai.Is tarah kk fluctuation inki health k liye thik nahi hai.Aap inka zyada se zyada khyal rakhe aur inhe stress aur tension se dur rakhe.

After listeing to the doctor Asad felt even worse.Zoya had already had a horrible past and now she has to bear all this just because ofthat spineless man who unfortunately is his father.He literally wanted to kill Mr.Rashid Ahmed Khan for what he had done to his Zoya.How can a person stoop so low?How can he possibly be alive with no guilt of killing a woman smiling all the way?How can he look someone in the eyes after commiting such a sin.His thoughts were interupted when Zoya's hold on his hand tightened.He could see her eyebrows frowning and she was mumbling something while her eyes were closed.

Zoya:Ammi..Aag ...Ammi ko bachao..Ammi ko bachao.

Asad panicked seeing her in this condition.She started breathing heavily.

Asad:Zoya zoya kya hua?

Zoya sat up on the bed with a start and shouted for her mother.

Zoya:Ammmi..ammi ko bachao ..Mr.Khan meri ammi...meri ammi jal rahi hain..Unhe bachaiye..Aag aag hai vahan..Koi bachao..Ammi bachao..Mujhe bohat darr lag raha hai.

Asad hugged her tightly.

Asad:Zoya zoya baby calm down.Relax.Dekho koi aag nahi hai.Koi nahi hai Zoya.Sambhalo apne aap ko zoya.

He was continuously rubbing her back to soothe her down.Zoya was shivering badly.He tried his best to calm her down.After sometime he realized that she was not crying anymore and was sleeping.He laid her down on the bed and wiped the tear strains from her face.He covered her from the blanket and kissed her forehead.He promised himself that he wiill keep Zoya away from any pain and admired her sleeping form.

Part 3b will be up surely by tomorrow.
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Nice update but it was so short :(

Beautiful update...