Asya TS:Tune jo mujhe di jeene ki saza-Part 3a Page 4

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Hello everybody,This is just my imagination of how things will unfold.I do not want Zoya's abbu truth to come out so soon.Hence this piece of work.Also I am just igmoring the najma-imran-nikhat triangle here.Here it starts.

Razia felt a sense of triumph and happiness when she finally escaped the captivity.But it was soon replaced by feeling of revenge.She wanted revenge from badi bi as well as rashid,especially the latter one.
Razia's POV:
That man.He had the audacity to speak against me.I have kept him in captivity for last 17 years and suddenly he got the courage to stand against me.I will not tolerate this.I'll make him rot in hell.I will make him pay for his sins.He'll go to jail for a murder he never committed.*Evil Laugh*.

Asad's Residence:
Dilshad and Najma were cooking in the kitchen.While asad was flirting with zoya in the living room.Suddenly the door bell rang.Zoya went to attend the bell and received a courier in her name.Asad followed her to enquire who is at the door.
Asad:Kon hai zoya?

Zoya:Courier hai Mr.Khan mere liye.I wonder mujhe yahan kaun courier send krega.

Asad:Open it.

Zoya opens it.The envelope had photographs.The earlier photographs were of zoya's childhood,of her and her mother.Seeing the pictures brought tears to zoya's eyes which did not go unnoticed by asad.

Asad:Kya hua zoya?Aap ro kyun rahi hain?

Zoya:Mr.Khan ye photos...

Asad takes the photographs from her hand and understands the reason behind her tears.But when he goes on to see further photographs he is shocked to the core.The pictures show a horrifying scene.Baby Zoya and a lady who is lying on the floor are surrounded by flames.There is fire everywhere.When zoya registers the look of shock on asad's face she takes the photographs from asad and receives the shock of her life.She immediately recognizes the lady surrounded by flames to be her mother.Her eyes drift to a letter that is stuck to the envelope.She immediately tore it to read it:

"Hum jaante hain ke tumhe ye sab sunkar tumhe bohat bada dhakka laga hoga.Agar apni ammi ki maut ki puri sachai janna chahti ho to ek ghante baad guditmya factory aa jana.Akhir yeh kahani vahin se to shuru hui thi."

Asad also reads the letter.As much as he is hesitant to go there he cannot break zoya's heart.He very well knows that all this is very important for zoya.

Asad:Mai bhi chalunga aapke sath.

Zoya could merely nod her head.Asad keeps a hand on her shoulder.

Asad:Zoya aap chinta mat kijie mai hu aapke sath.Sab thik jo jaega.Dont worry.

Zoya hugs him tightly and asad hugs back.

Zoya(crying):Mujhe bohat (sob) dar (sob) lag raha hai Mr.Khan (sob).

Asad lifts her face with his finger.

Asad:Jab tak mai aapke sath hu Darne ki loi baat nahi hai zoya.Jo bhi joga hum uska milke samna karenge.

And he hugged her back.At that point he wanted to kill the person who did this to her and her ammi and also the person who sent her the pictures.She just wantd to see her happy and all this was just stressing her.All of this was important to know but not on the cost of her happiness.For now he decided to just be with her in whatever she wanted to do.After she calmed down a bit he asked her to be ready in 15 minutes.

Razia rejoiced when she gets to know that the courier has reached its destination.She knew that she herself is in danger if the entire truth comes out.But she cannot let rashid live a free life when he made her life hell.Everything will go according to her plan.She will never let the entire truth come out.

Precap:
Zoya stood numb after listening to the truth.Her felt weak in her knees.Her vision blurred and she fell to the floor with a thud before Asad could catch her.
Like it?Hate it?Love it? :p
Plz comment.

INDEX:
part 1-above
part 2- pg 3
part 3a-pg 4
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Thanks for the likes and comments.:)
Part 2:
Zoya was crying throughout the way.Though she had Asad's support but all the thoughts about her mothers death and fire scared her.She was continiously trying to remember anything she could make out of those dreams but she failed.The suddenly applied brakes of the car brought her back to reality and it was then she realised that she had been crying all the time.She moved her hand forward to unlatch the door but before that Asad held her hand with which she was cluthing her hankerchief tightly due to nervousness.
Asad:Zoya ek baat yaad rakhiega chahe jo ho jaye mai hamesha apke sath hu.Mai janta hu aapke liye yeh sach janna bhot zaruri hai par mere lie aap sabse zaruri hain.Aap kisi bhi baat ka stress mat lijiega aur mujhse kuch bhi chupane ki koshish mat kijiega.Okay?

Zoya nods while crying.

Asad:Aur ab rona band kijie aap to Zoya Farooqui hai na Is duniya ki sabse strong ladki.Hai na?

Zoya slightly smiles at this.Asad cups her face with his hand.

Asad:I love you. :)
Zoya:I love you too Mr.Khan.
Asad:Chale?
Zoya:Hmm.

Inside the factory:
Asad:Yahan to koi nahi hai.
Zoya:Koi to hona chahie Mr.Khan varna koi aise hume yahan kyun bulaega.

Suddenly a voice comes:
Sahi kaha tumne Zoya koi tumhe yahan aise kyun bulaega?Aur ye kya tum Asad ahmed Khan ko bhi sath le ayi.Acha hi hai vo bhi ye sach jaan jaega.

To say that Asad and Zoya were shocked to see Razia there will be an understatement.There were millions of questions running in their minds.What was Razia doing here?Did she call them here?How did she know about zoya's ammi?And to clear their confusion razia spoke.
Razia:Kya hua?Chauk gaye?Vishvas nhi ho raha ki maine tumlog ko yahan bulaya?Jab itni si baat se hi chauk gaye to sach janne ke baad kya haal hoga tumhra?

Asad:Tumne ye soch bhi kaise liya ki hum tmhari kisi bhi baat pe bharosa karenge.Zoya chalo yahan se hume is aurat ki koi baat sunne ki zarurat nahi hai.Chalo.

He holds her hand and starts to leave when Razia's voice stopped them.
Razia:Agar zoya ki ammi ki maut ka sach rashid miyan se juda ho tab bhi nahi rukoge?Janna nahi chahoge k tumhri aur zoya k ateet ki dor kis tarah ek dusre se judi hui hai.This made Asad stop in his tracks.

Asad:Yeh aap kya bakvas kar rahi hain aap?Kehna kya chahti hain aap?

Razia:Mai to bas sach keh rahi hu asad miyan.

Zoya:Dekhiye ye gol gol batein karna band kijiye.Saaf saaf boliye aap kya keh rahi hain.

Razia:Hume bhi tumse batein karne ka koi shauk nahi hai.Sach sunna chahti ho na tum to suno.Sach yeh hai ki Rashid Ahmed Khan ne tumbari ammi ka katl kiya tha.17 saal pehle isi gudiya factory mein Rashid miyan ne aag lagai thi jahan tumhari ammi jal k rakh ho gayi thi.Unhone hi maara hai tmhari ammi ko.

Zoya stumbles backwards.She starts crying uncontrollably

Zoya:Yeh aap kya keh rahi hain(sobs)?Aisa (sob) aisa nahi ho sakta?Koi meri (sob) meri ammi ko kyun marega(sob) ?Dost aisa kyun karenge?Aap jhoith bol (sob) rahi hain.Mr.Khan (sob) Mr.khan dekhiye na ye kya keh rahi hain?Ye jhooth bol rahi hai na?

Asad moves toeards zoya and comforts her.

Asad:Zoya..zoya calm down.Abhi sab clear ho jaega just calm down.(to razia)Dekhiye hum apki kisi bhi bat par yoon hi bharosa nahi kar lenge.Aapke pas koi saboot hai?Aap itne yakken se kaise keh rahi hain k janab Rashid Ahmed Khan ne zoya ki ammi ka ..unki ammi ka..

Razia:Sabr Asad miyan sabr.Kitni ajeeb bat hai na jo bat tumse bolte nahi ban rahi use karne mein tmhre abbu zara bhi nahi ghabraye.She plays the recording which she had forged and which asad and family heard outside the court thanks to tanveer.

Asad:Yeh reacording to humne suni hui hai par isse apki bat kaise sabit hoti hai?

Razia:Kam se kam meri baat to puri hone dijie.Itni besabri?Yeh dekho shayad in tasveeron ko dekhkar tumhe humpe yakeen ho jaye.

She shows them the same photographs which she had kept as aproof against rashid all these years.The pictures clearly show Rashid litting the fire and zoya's ammi in the background.

Razia smirked when she saw that her plan worked.While Asad and Zoya were too lost in their thoughts to notice her.

Asad could not believe this.He never knew that his hatred for this man can grow even a little.After getting to know that Rashid Ahmed Khan who is unfortunately his father is responsible for Zoya's ammi 's death he not only felt hatred towards him but also felt guilt creeping inside him,guilt of being the son of the man who ruined zoya's childhood.He was so occupied with his thoughts that he didnt notice zoya whose face was as pale as a ghost.

Tears were uncontrollably flowing from her eyes.The fact that her ammi was murdered and that too by a person whom she considered as her friend was not at all tolerable for her.She could just not take it anymre.She was already feling weak in her knees.Her vision blurred and she fell to the ground wuth a thud before asad could catch her.

Precap:
Zoya:Mujhe akela chod dijie Mr.Khan.
Asad:Baat bhi nahi karengi mujhse?Itna naraaz hain?
Zoya:Leave me alone.

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