i wish.. Mayur ff..#2 updated LAST part 27 pg 33 - Page 19

Originally posted by: swetaaga20

Hey i liked the whole part but was disapponted with the ending...

I hoped Mayank & Nupur got united in the end.

But i really liked ur writing. Thanks a lot...

Thanks

Originally posted by: hasiniangel

the whole update was too good, but iam not liking the end..😔
i wanted them to be united..
For me only Mayur were the Pair.. no one else can take their place..
if possible change the end yaar.. 😭
anyways a Fab story...👍🏼

Thank you

Awesome story.

Originally posted by: ratibob007

Awesome story.

Your writing style is nice, but i like happy ending.

So next time please write a story with happy ending.

Thanks for the pm.

Thanks..Hehe for sure

Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

Fab story...👍🏼

Thanks

story was nice..

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

story was nice..

but i expected different ending a happy ending..

it was nice..

do make more

ThankS

@Fari hehe i knew ppl are going to hate me for it..bt its just a ff..and surely i will give a compensation for this after my boards...promise next that next u'll have a smile on your face when u read d end...and love u too dear...Edited by Bhatakti_atma - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

@Fari hehe i knew ppl are going to hate me for it..bt its just a ff..and surely i will give a compensation for this after my boards...promise next that next u'll have a smile on your face when u read d end...and love u too dear...

i dont hate u dear and i cant. but yah i m angry on u for this update. Dil tod diya..
though it was nothing but a story but u know na how much we r connected to Mayur. so cant see such a sad ending on my fav. hope u understanding
and i m waiting for ur dhasu comeback
all the best for ur board exam.