arshi ff: not cut out for love #1, chapters 1 - 10 **completed**

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Jayanthi

@hemanthkrishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Hai this very nice.
Loved it. 😊

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

^^^

thank you, jayanthi. glad you enjoyed.

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Shazeia

@shaz007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Interesting prologue waiting for the first part

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Jay

@Sharaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Am exicted.. dammit...

bear hugs to u Indi dear...🤗

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supriya

@supriya.arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Indi you've definitely hit the writer's switch in you 😃 nd it shines brighter by the day 😉

wow an SS by you...m excited read the chapter...
i'll be honest the text you changed whn he got up the nxt day ...it showed as if its a past...nd i got a bit confused thr thts it

i loved the car scene...wher he is fightin with his own over to see her or not...aw nd Khushi...
aaj mausam hain suhana ,
ASR ke sath job karne ka hain bahana
what the what the what the😆

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: shaz007
Interesting prologue waiting for the first part

thanks, shaz, for reading... will do a chapter soon. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Sharaa
Am exicted.. dammit...

bear hugs to u Indi dear...🤗

hi sharaa,

thanks for the dammit and the bear hug. hope all well. thanks for reading and liking. 🤗

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi
Indi you've definitely hit the writer's switch in you 😃 nd it shines brighter by the day 😉

wow an SS by you...m excited read the chapter...
i'll be honest the text you changed whn he got up the nxt day ...it showed as if its a past...nd i got a bit confused thr thts it

i loved the car scene...wher he is fightin with his own over to see her or not...aw nd Khushi...
aaj mausam hain suhana ,
ASR ke sath job karne ka hain bahana
what the what the what the😆

hi supriya,

so you got here... ha 🤗 completely bitten by this writing thing. must say, it's absorbing and sort of addictive. hope i am cured soon.

you liked? me thrilled.

no there is no past, and stuff in thsi story. this is all in real time, of course with a few flashbacks... after all it's the suhana mausam ajeeb people. 😆

the more i think of khushi the crazier and cuter she gets.

and as... you know i never think of him. 🤣

thanks for reading.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: HelloA1
Interesting start!

thanks, helloa1... glad you liked. 😳

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Katelyn

@Katelyn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Oh wow very interesting prologue, Indi! I enjoyed reading the way you've describe ASR's restlessness and inner turmoil! I felt him missing those pair of eyes and quivering lips! How wrong is he thinking that his life will be back to normal after six months! He already set his own destiny by making this move yet unaware and in denial where his heart is taking him! I'm looking forward how the story will unfold!

My little one woke up in the middle of the night requesting to sleep in mommy's room. Then I had trouble falling asleep because I was thinking about IPK and IF. So here I am reading your story. I'm glad I've found your story since you didn't PM this one! Thanks Indi! You never cease to amaze me with you beautiful and magical writings!

BTW, you should include "Arshi" in your title because it will be help Arshi stories readers find it once this thread is move to the fan fictions forum!