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Posted: 10 years ago
Badmash hai sab..ridz ko chodakr chale gaye
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing one. PlZ do cont soon :). Sorryfor the small comment.
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Posted: 10 years ago
😆😆And the one thing that caught my attention was shashank's dialog. When he said dat chidiya will fly away, i think he meant dat ridz wuld fly away not literally though 😆 nd armaan will lose her. Amazing line.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mr_Mrs.KSG

😆😆And the one thing that caught my attention was shashank's dialog. When he said dat chidiya will fly away, i think he meant dat ridz wuld fly away not literally though 😆 nd armaan will lose her. Amazing line.


may be or may be not🥱😉
bt there r such lines in further parts which may give u an idea😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 2:

RIDDHIMA & MUSKAAN, 9, RAHUL 11 & ARMAAN, 13:

"Mama….main aur Rahul jheel par jaa rahe hain," Armaan informed Naina. He walked out in his shorts and a towel wrapped around his shoulders.

"Arre puttar…..zara dhyaan se jaana….kal pataa hai na Mehra sahib ka beta jheel mein phisal kar gir gaya tha…..shukr hai vaahe guru ka ki wo dooba nahin," Naina came out and warned her boys, "ARRE HARIRAM!" she yelled for their servant, "zara bacchon ke saath jheel par chala jaa….nazar rakhna in par."

"Jee maalkin," Hariram, a frail looking 40 year old man came out from the kitchen.

Armaan smirked, "yeh kya dhyaan rakhega….yeh tho khud jheel mein phisal jaayega mama."

Billy heard Armaan's comment, "zuban par kaboo rakh Armaan puttar…..aisa nahin kehte…Hariram tum se umar mein badhe hain."

"Chal Rahul…..Riddhima aur Muskaan ko bhi le lete hain," Armaan ignored his dad and walked out with Rahul.

"Yeh Riddhima aur Muskaan ke saath hi kyun chipke rehte hain?" Naina said scornfully, "aur badhe gharon ke bacche bhi tho hain yahan…..har waqt dekho Riddhima Muskaan….Riddhima, Muskaan!"

Armaan heard his mom and came back, "mama…..humein Riddhima aur Muskaan ke saath zyaada mazaa aata hai…..unhein chidhaa jo sakte hain," he laughed and ran out with Rahul.

Billy smiled and looked at Naina, "rehne do tussi……bachhe hain…..khelne do jinke saath khelna chaahte hain…..jawaani mein sab bhool jaayenge…..phir tho wo hi karenge jo hum chaahte hain."

Naina smirked, "kahin aisa na ho yeh bachpan ki dosti jawaani mein bhi pareshaan na kare?"

"Chhodo bhi Naina…..abhi bahut saal hain….aage ki kisne dekhi hai?" Billy walked out shaking his head. He knew it was no point arguing with his status-conscious wife.

Armaan and Rahul barged into Riddhima's house. Muskaan was at Riddhima's house too as Muskaan's mother worked at a local store till 6 in the evening. Padma usually picked the girls from school and brought them home. The girls were doing their homework on the dining table.

"Chal Riddhima….aur Muskaan……chal jheel par chalte hain," Armaan ordered as he picked an apple from the fruit basket.

Padma smiled, "beta….yeh homework kar rahi hain….aaj nahin aayengi….aur waise bhi jheel par akele nahin bhejoongi inhey…pata hai na Mehra sahib ke beta doobte doobte bach gaya kal."

"Kaaki….aap fikr na karo…..main hoon na….Riddhima ka dhyaan main rakhoonga aur Muskaan ka Rahul," Armaan said confidently.

Rahul added meekly, "aur Hariram bhi hai kaaki," he crossed his fingers as he really wanted the girls to come along. Rahul liked the company of the girls as Armaan would then shift his attention to them and order them around rather than his younger brother.

"Mummyji…yeh division ke sawaal samajh nahin aa rahe," Riddhima whined; her mind was already wandering at the stream. She loved the water and was dying to swim with the boys.

Armaan looked at her work, "kya samajh nahin aa raha? Chal main samjhaa ta hoon! Chidiya ka dimmag hai tera!" he pulled a chair and pulled Riddhima onto his lap. Within minutes, he explained how to do long division in a simplified manner to Riddhima. Riddhima sat on his lap comfortably and finished her problems quickly. Rahul helped Muskaan finish her work too, but they sat across from each other at the table, unlike Armaan and Riddhima; Riddhima being light and petite had gotten into the habit of sitting on people's laps, especially Armaan's. Armaan never gave a second thought to her habit and just assumed it was a done thing between the two of them. He finished the apples from the fruit basket as Riddhima completed her work, still on his lap.

After homework, the four of them went to the nearby stream along with Hariram. They enjoyed splashing and swimming in the water. The boys wore their shorts, as the girls stayed in their salwaar kameez. They left their dupattas at the bank with Hariram. Riddhima had long braided hair and Muskaan wore her's short to her shoulders.

Armaan loved scaring and teasing the girls by suddenly splashing water on them or jumping out of the water when the girls were distracted elsewhere. Rahul rescued Muskaan and took her to a Side where they threw pebbles and watched the rings in the stream. Armaan pulled Riddhima by her braids if she did not listen to him or walked away from him, "chal is patthar se mere peeth ki maalish kar de!" he ordered.

Riddhima looked at the flat stone and then at his back, "nahin lag jaayegi….main nahin karoongi."

"Arre….nahin lagti….Punjabi munda hoon main…..kuch nahin hoga mujhey," he insisted.

"Nahin karoongi main!" Riddhima said stubbornly.

"Mera kehna nahin maanegi tu?" Armaan asked angrily

"Nahin chhot lag jaayegi is patthar se…..nahin karoongi," she threw the stone away and walked out of the stream. Armaan followed her and saw tears in her eyes, "yeh kudiyon ki tarah kyun roti rehti hai…..accha baba….patthar se nahin….apne haathon se maalish kar de….bas ab khush?"
She nodded and wiped her tears. Armaan sat down on the steps and enjoyed the little back rub with Riddhima's tiny hands, "kuch roti-shoti khaayakar chidiya….bilkul dum nahin hai tere haathon mein…..kitni kamzor hai tu!"
Riddhima was offended; she did not mind being called chidiya by him, but hated being called 'kamzor.' She dug her tiny nails into his back and scratched him till he yelled, "MAR GAYA! MAR GAYA!" He got up and gave her a dirty look, "maalish karne ko kahi thi….kharonch ne ko nahin…abhi dekhta hoon tujhey!" Riddhima was quick and jumped back into the water. Armaan saw her dupatta lying on the steps; he picked it up and wiped his muddy feet with it. Riddhima was aghast; she swam back and yelled, "mera dupatta! Saara maila kar diya!"

Armaan grinned and pushed her back into the water, "mujhey chhot pahunchayegi tho yahi haal karoonga tera!" and jumped in right after her. He kept laughing and teasing her as they both swam towards Rahul and Muskaan.

In a couple of hours, they were back at Riddhima's house, exhausted and drenched from the swimming. The girls ran into Riddhima's room and changed into clean, dry clothes. The boys just dried themselves with the towels and hung around in their shorts. Padma made halwa poori for all the kids, as swimming had made them hungry. Armaan and Rahul polished off at least a dozen, if not more pooris and two bowls full off halwa between the two of them. Riddhima, as usual ate a poori and a few bites of halwa.

After their snack, Armaan ran out into the backyard and climbed the mango tree. He threw some mangoes down on the ground and slid down the tree.

Riddhima ran after him, "yeh chori hai Armaan…..mummyji kehti hain ki chori karna paap hai…..tumne bina poonchey hamare aam kyun thode?"

Armaan grinned and started peeling the mangoes, "meri marzi!"

"nahin….yeh chori hai!" she insisted

Armaan looked down at her arrogantly, "chidiya raani….jaanti ho yeh tumhara ghar….yeh bagicha…..yeh aam ka pedh….. sab hamari amaanat hai……tum sirf kiraaydaar ho…….main jab chaahoon yahan se kuch bhi le sakta hoon...samjhi?" he started sucking on the juicy mango.
Riddhima looked at him tearfully, "tho kya sab kuch tumhari amaanat hai yahan?"
Armaan was too busy suckling on his mango, "aur kya! Sab kuch!"

"Main bhi?" she asked innocently.

Armaan gave her a funny look and then laughed out loud, "aur kya…..tu bhi meri amaanat hai! Chal Rahul….ghar chalte hain…..mama intezaar kar rahi hongi….mera kal science ka test bhi hai…..chal ab!" he ran out the gate as Rahul and Hariram followed him with towels in their hands.

Riddhima stood there with tears in her eyes; she turned around and went back inside. Armaan had a habit of saying hurtful things to her; she usually took it in stride as long as she was getting his attention, but what he said outside hurt her pride just a little. Of course, neither of them knew what he really meant by "tu bhi meri amaanat hai," but Riddhima felt belittled by his comment today……or did she really believe what he said……may be he was right? Her 9 year old brain was confused as she did not really understand what he meant. Muskaan was playing with her dolls on the living room floor. Riddhima forgot about what Armaan had just said and joined Muskaan in their little make-believe game.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesum yaar...armaan bahut jyada sharate baccha tha
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear...

awesome concept...
thnk u soo muchh for making it on AR or AsMud again taking permission from d original writer..😊
i must say.. unique concept.. 👍🏼
i'm soo eager for the actual parts now.. 😃😆

plz plz do cont. soon...
😳😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
oooppsss!!!!!!!!!

i didn't saw u posted part1 while i commented b4..😳
nvr mind..
so.. that cmmnt was for ur intro nd this one for part1, okk??😆

awsm update dear.. armaan was too naughty..
poor riddhima..
bekar mein daant padh gayee..
but he gve her d ripest fruit.. dat's so swt..
dat means he actually cares for her..

lovely update.. gr8 going..
update soonish..
😃😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
well well well..

u posted part2 too??
i saw now.. *sigh*

so, here's my hattrick commnt for latest update..😛

awsm update..
armaan is too proudy nd self-obsessed..
nd poor baby gal.. his stupid wrds affected wrongly to her naive brain..
well.. this story is going really interesting..
loved it so muchh..👏

kp updating this fast..
juz luving it..😃😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 3:

RIDDHIMA & MUSKAAN, 11&1/2, RAHUL, 13&1/2, ARMAAN, 15&1/2:

Riddhima, Muskaan and Rahul are now in middle school, whereas Armaan is now a high schooler. He has become more serious about his studies now, as he wants to get into a good engineering school after graduation. His dreams are set at becoming an automobile engineer and design the fastest and coolest cars in the world. Armaan spends more time with his high school buddies; he has even started noticing girls, mostly his age or a year or two younger. Riddhima and Muskaan are still 'kids' according to him. Armaan still has fun with Riddhima and Muskaan, but has abandoned climbing trees and stealing fruits from neighbour's trees. Armaan was recently chosen on the high school soccer team, which has made him popular in school. Everyone is aware of his social status; so basically he is the arrogant, good looking, athletic and smart son of a rich man!

Muskaan and Rahul have both turned out to be an asset to the school choir and have been busy with their singing. Riddhima is Riddhima, her usual bubbly self, still in awe of Armaan, craves for his attention, and wants to please him at any cost. Armaan continues to snub her or taunt her whenever he can, but she does not care. She has not forgotten his statement about 'tumhari amaanat.' Riddhima has actually started believing that she is truly 'his amaanat.' Even Armaan treats her like he 'owns' her. He gets restless when he has not seen Riddhima for a few days. Whenever the stress of school work and his activities gets to him, he just barges into Riddhima's house and either takes her out for 'kulfi' or hangs out at her house and helps her with her homework. Of course, there are no romantic undercurrents with this mutual feeling-at least yet!

One day, Riddhima walked into Armaan's house as was a habit of hers. She was carrying a tiffin with Armaan's favorite gobhi ka paranthas and kheer. It was not unusual for Padma to send food for Armaan, but today it was special. Riddhima had prepared the paranthas specially for Armaan. As she hummed and stepped upstairs, Naina stopped her, "RIDDHIMA! Kahan jaa rahi hai?"

Riddhima turned around and smiled, 'pairi paini auntyjee….main Armaan ke liye paranthe laayi thi."

A stern Naina walked towards the step, "ab Armaan badha ho gaya hai…..aise hi uske kamre mein mat jaaya kar…..wo padhai kar raha hai…..uske exams aane waale hain….laa mujhey de de…main baad mein de doongi," she extended her hand.
A disappointed Riddhima had no choice; she knew Naina aunty was very strict and for some reason was always rude towards Riddhima. Naina hated Riddhima and Armaan's friendship; she had warned her son many times to stay away from these 'chote log,' but Armaan just ignored his mom.

Riddhima was about to hand over the tiffin, when they both heard Armaan's voice from upstairs, "oopar aa ja Riddhima….ek cheez dikhani hai." Armaan's voice had started cracking as he had suddenly shot up in height over the last 6 months. He even had a tiny moustache growing over his upper lip. It was strange that even when Armaan was immersed in his studies or work, he could always hear Riddhima's voice, even if she were outside his house. He had not seen her for days, and was pleased to hear her voice from downstairs.

Naina scoffed and walked away. A sheepish Riddhima sprinted upstairs as fast as she could.

"Aa…andar aa ja….kya laayi hai mere liye?" he took the tiffin from her and inhaled the fragrance, "mmm….kya khushboo hai!"

"Maine banaaye hain!" Riddhima said excitedly

"Tuney?" Armaan mocked at her, "phir tho khoob masala daala hoga…main kaise khaaoonga?"

"Nahin….tumhare liye khaas banaaye hain….bilkul pheeke , jaise tumhein pasand hain," she smiled.

Armaan closed the tiffin and then grabbed her hand, "idhar aa….tujhey kuch dikhaana hai."

Riddhima followed him to his desk. There was a catalog of sports cars sitting on his desk. He sat on his chair and started showing her the various models of imported sports cars, "yeh dekh…..yeh car ….train se bhi fast bhaagti hai….aur yeh dekh…" he was very excited, but Riddhima could care less; she really wanted him to taste her cooking, but he had somehow lost enthusiasm once he found out that it was not Padma kaaki's cooking.
As Armaan kept flipping page after page, Riddhima lost her patience. She grabbed the tiffin and opened it in front of him. When he still did not get distracted, she took a piece of the parantha with her tender fingers and stuffed it into his mouth.

"ARRE! YEH KYA KAR RAHI HAI?" he said with a mouthful, but then his eyes popped as the delicious paranthas melted in his mouth. He opened his mouth wide as Riddhima kept feeding him the rest of the paranthas. She sat on his desk and observed him keenly; he looked different today. She could see fine bristles on his cheeks and chin; his voice was not the same, he was much taller than she recalled him from even a few days ago…..he had changed….he was all grown up somehow. Riddhima lowered her eyes and wondered how he had changed so much?

"Kya hua? Aur khila na!" Armaan opened his mouth, his eyes still glued to the catalog, "jaanti hai…papa keh rahe the wo mere liye nayi car laayenge…..maine driver se car chalaani bhi seekh li hai."

"Car?" Riddhima's eyes popped out this time, "tum car chalaaoge? Main bhi car mein jaa sakti hoon?" she asked excitedly.

Armaan scoffed, "tu? Pagal hai…..meri car mein sirf mere dost baithenge…..tu nahin jaa sakti usmein."

Riddhima was heartbroken, "kyun main tumhari dost nahin hoon?"

Armaan grinned at her, "Tu? Tu waisi dost nahin hai….tu tho bachhi hai abhi."

"Lekin tumhee ne tho kaha tha ki main tumhari amaanat hoon…phir kyun nahin baith sakti?" Riddhima asked innocently.

Armaan was amazed at her innocence, "pagli….na jaane kya kya yaad rakhti hai….accha tere bag mein kya hai?" he looked at her bag sitting on the floor.

"Homework," she said hesitantly.
"Accha tho yahin kar le homework…koi help chaahiye kya?" he shut his catalog and leaned back on his chair.

"Shayad chaahiye ho," she said.

"Theek hai…main apne test ki tayyari karta hoon…tu wahan bistar par baith kar homework kar le," he got up to collect his books from his bag.

Riddhima opened his drawer to get a pencil and was shocked to see a pack of cigarettes inside, "Armaan! Tum cigarette peete ho?"

Armaan was startled, "TU KYA KAR RAHI HAI MERI DRAWER MEIN?" he yelled

"Kuch nahin…pencil dhoondh rahi thi," she fearfully.

"Chhod de packet ko!" Armaan snatched the pack of cigarettes from her.

Riddhima covered her mouth and said, 'main auntyji aur uncle ji ko bataa doongi….pata hai cigarette peene se cancer ho jaata hai?"

"Tujhey kisne kaha?" he asked irately

"TV mein dekha tha….main abhi auntyji ko bataati hoon," she was about to walk out the door, when Armaan grabbed her hand, "please mama ko mat bataana….wo bahut naaraaz hongi," he pleaded.

Riddhima turned around and folded her arms; it was so rare for Armaan to ever plead to her-she was enjoying the moment thoroughly, "theek hai nahin bataaoongi….ek shart par."
Armaan folded his hands, "haan meri maa! Bataa kya shart hai?"
She had a broad smile on her face, "main bhi cigarette peeke dekhoongi….jaise filmon mein hero heroine peete hain na."

Armaan was stunned, "pagal hai kya?" Even though Armaan did not mind experimenting with stuff like smoking etc with his buddies, he would never want Riddhima to try something so sinful. Even he perhaps did not know why he was so protective about her. As long as he was torturing or teasing her, it was all kosher, but he could never stand anyone else bothering her or Riddhima herself doing something wrong, especially something like smoking!

He looked at the packet and threw it out the window, "aaj ke baad koi cigarette nahin peeyega…samjhi?" he said angrily and settled with his books.

A disappointed Riddhima just shrugged her shoulders and settled on his bed with her books. As she was engrossed with her math problems, she stretched out on the bed and lay on her tummy to finish her work. She kept writing, counting on her fingers, humming and tapping her pencil on her lips.

Armaan was getting a little disturbed by her humming and tapping sounds. He looked up from his books and glared at her. He must have glanced at her for a few seconds as he turned his head away. Those few seconds seemed to last forever- those few seconds would probably change the way he saw her forever. Riddhima was lying on her tummy; her dupatta had fallen on the ground and Armaan's eyes inadvertently rested on her chest area for a few seconds. He quickly turned away as he was embarrassed at his reaction to her. She was changing…..she was no longer a little girl whom he could drag around by her braids……she was changing into a young woman…..

Armaan felt ashamed of himself; his heart was pounding in his chest, that fleeting glance had stirred up and aroused something inside him and he was really ANGRY AT HIMSELF!!!

Armaan got up in a fury and picked her dupatta. He threw it on her face, "RIDDHIMA! TU JAA AB YAHAN SE…..BAHUT SHOR KAR RAHI HAI TU…..MUJHEY TEST KE LIYE PADHNA HAI…..CHALI JAA YAHAN SE…..MUJHEY PARESHAAN MAT KAR!" He was almost trembling in rage.

Riddhima was frightened; she picked her books and placed her dupatta on her neck, "sorry Armaan…main shor nahin machaaungi….please thoda sa hi homework reh gaya hai…..please," she begged and pleaded, but Armaan just looked away, holding the door open for her to leave.

A tearful Riddhima ran home as fast as she could, "kyun naaraaz ho gaya? Main tho mazaak kar rahi thi ki auntyji ko bataa doongi ki wo cigarette peeta hai…..main kisi ko nahin bataa ti," she sobbed all the way home. Armaan saw her walk back home from his window; he pulled the curtains angrily and sat down to study.

Both Armaan and Riddhima had a restless night. Armaan was upset with himself for noticing the change in Riddhima. It was the first time he had ever become conscious of his own sexuality; he like other boys of his age talked and boasted about the 'hot kudis' in high school, but he had never felt that way before like he did in those few seconds, "bechari Riddhima ko tho kuch pataa bhi nahin hoga," he sighed and tried to close his eyes. He felt bad for her; he had made her cry again- he would make it up to her; she did not deserve his wrath today. For some inexplicable reason, he hated to see tears on her face; he loved it whenever she smiled- she did have a captivating smile, something everyone commented on, but Armaan had always cherished since they were little kids.

Riddhima cried all night as she hated to make Armaan unhappy- she had tried her best to please him that day, but as usual he got upset with her at some pretext or another!

NEXT DAY:
Riddhima came back from school with Muskaan and buried herself in her homework. Padma was concerned, "kya hua beti? Teri tabiyat tho theek hai? Muskaan kya hua beta?"
"Kaaki….shayad Armaan ke saath jhagda hua hai," Muskaan said
Padma sighed and pulled Riddhima on her lap, "beti….ladai jhagde tho hote rehte hain…..ab Armaan badhaa ho gaya hai….tu abhi choti hai…usey shayad badhe bachhon ki company zyaada pasand aati hogi….tu Muskaan aur Rahul ke saath khel liya kar…chal aaja kuch khaa le puttar," she said affectionately.

Just as Padma was consoling Riddhima, they heard a familiar voice, 'Kaaki! Kaaki! Riddhima kahan hai?" it was Armaan.
Riddhima looked up from her mother's lap and turned her face away angrily.
Armaan grinned and dangled his new car keys in front of her, "meri nayi nayi gaddi mein kaun kaun chalega?"

"Main chaloongi!" Muskaan got up excitedly.

"Theek hai jisey chalna hai wo mere saath chal sakta hai…..gaadi ki saari seats bhar gayi hain….jaldi chalo jisey chalna hai!" he purposely yelled in Riddhima's ear.

Rahul joined them, "main aage waali seat par baithoonga."

"Nahin main baithoongi!" Muskaan insisted.

Armaan flashed a devilish smile at Riddhima, "nahin aage waali seat par sirf Riddhima baithegi!"

Those words were magic to Riddhima's ears. She wiped her face with her mother's pallu and sat up, "main aa rahi hoon Armaan!"

Armaan smiled at her, "tho jaldi chal……time waste mat kar rone dhone mein!"
Armaan ran out to his new Maruti car as Rahul, Muskaan and Riddhima followed excitedly.