*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#771

Originally posted by: wiwy

nahi nahi abhi nahi
abhi karo intezaar 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#772

Originally posted by: cheesemad

Teri hi kami thi meri kachori😃

N main aa gyi 😆😳

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Barun_Addict

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Posted: 12 years ago

#773

Originally posted by: cheesemad

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Addicted87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#774

Mami is helping Shyam?!?!?!😡 I knew she was up to no good...!!

What on earth is wrong with Arnav??? If he was not sure of his feelings or what he wants there were better ways of letting Khushi down. He didnt have to treat her like this. He has some serious making up to do!

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Andi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#775

hi wiwy di

sorry bohot dino baad cmnt kar rahi hoon*lo kaan pakad liye*😭😭

awesome updt

kushi is going away hope this will realise arnav that he love hr

shyam nd mami😡

pls cont soon😊

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#776

Originally posted by: ARSHIANDI
hi wiwy di
sorry bohot dino baad cmnt kar rahi hoon*lo kaan pakad liye*😭😭
awesome updt
kushi is going away hope this will realise arnav that he love hr
shyam nd mami😡
pls cont soon😊

😆 Arshiandi 🤗 achcha lao kaan lao

aur yeh earrings pehan ke batao!😃

Edited by wiwy - 12 years ago

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#777

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
wiwy, loved it, just loved it. i loved how he was trying to ignore her and facing the feelings she has imposed on him during her sleep. typical of him putting her off with the excuse of too much work. i also love how finally he gave in to seeing her. denying his feelings very typical ASR. and wonderful how our dear, brave lioness surrenders and blurts out her feelings and caresses him. i always loved that shot when she did that and apologized for seeing him naked (IPK). it has been a while since i have been able to read and yours was my first. wonderful my friend. now write more so i can mend my broken heart!

Aww Cyn, I 'd do anything to mend ❤️ your broken heart 🥺 though I think it is already on the mend, what say?🤗

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#778

Originally posted by: aashi12
i knew it!

Mami was conspiring with Shyam.. Only question is Why?

And now, Arnav carried Khushi in his arms.. Awww.. Dat was just so romantic! <3

coming to the main part:

yaar, Arnav's rejection was expected! The way Khushi hugged him from backa nd confessed her feelings was unexpected.. But all in all.. Her heartbreak and Arnav's rude reply hurt me.. It had to yaar!

Afterall, its not everyday Arnav singh Raizad feels for someone.. He won't accept easily!

And now when Khushi would be gone, he'll know Kuch kam roshan hai roshini.. I dedicate this song.. Kuch kam from dostana.. It wud fit so well here!

He also has his workk in lucknow, Khushi is going to Gosak, which is close and our villian is also ready!

This is going to be Fun, for sure!

Wow! Thanks! First Cheesy, then you! Another song dedication!

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nmaharaj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#779

Awww maan I want to read more. Hurry and update😉, loving it. Poor Khushi, want to see what ASR does next.

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#780

Originally posted by: sohara
yeh tumne kya kar dia, Khushika dil tod dia.
Kiyu dard hai itna tere ishq mein.
May be Khushi didn't approach him properly. She should take more time.
Arnav sure loves Khushi. He jut can't realize it. Now after his rejection, Khushi will sure not meet him. And he will definitely miss her and will realize that he also loves her.

Hmm so Arnav did see her nude! you naughty girl!