Virman FF : Tere Aane Se...NOTE pg 104 - Page 18

great promo...!!!

loved the promo...continue sooon sooonn and plzzz please pm me

hey loved ur workk

nice promo

hey plz dont end this ff...

excited for the update :)
and we are not leaving this forum even after the show ends soo dnt end this ff

Originally posted by: Huma0301

Ooohhh
very excitinggg promo
ab dono ka sahi aamna saamna hoga
pagal hai kya
OF COURSE CONTINUE YAAR
obviously tumhari story tho continuation tho banta hai
par continue karo...woh kya hai na
yaad hamesha tazaa rehegi
even though i dnt think we can forget it
Jaldi continue plzzz 😉

ohh...so u think i shud continue...hmm will do it thn...😉 ha ab dono ka sahi aamna saamna hoga...!!

Originally posted by: virumanu

hey loved ur workk

thks god u pmed mee

otherwise i would have missed a great story...

u r such a awsmeee writer...plzzz continue sooonnn

and please please pm

omg...im glad tht u liked it..!! thns for telling tht im a gr8 writer...but let me tell u im a first timer...wid no experience...🤢n u r embarrsing me telling im a gr8 writer cz there r really good ones over here im nothing in front of them...!!!! just gave it a try...n the i thought ke after giving such lame lst 2-3 updates i ws gonna be told to shut this up...!!!!! anyhow thns ...😳 ...will continue soon...

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

excited for the update :)
and we are not leaving this forum even after the show ends soo dnt end this ff

hmm yea i will continue it...for sure...😃

hello all of u ...!!! thns for all ur love for me...thns for commenting ...n letting me knw tht i ws a big fool tellling to discontinue this FF 🤢anyhow thns ...thns to all of u who like my work n appreciate it... 😳 n a message for all of u...update padhte ho tho cmmnt bhi kardo ...cmmnt nhi karna ?? no prbzzz ...atleast like button toh daba hi do...😆😆😆 stopping my non -stop xpress ... not wasting any tym

here it is...

Virman : Tere Aane Se

Part 7...

She reaches home and all were already there waiting for her

ALL : bata na maanvi tu select hui ya nhi ??? 😕😕

M: vo ...vo actualllyyy (making sad face)😒

J : koi baat nhi mannu tera pehala attempt tha ..so koi baat nhi!! Hota hai..

M: I knw di hota hai..!! Mera selct hona toh hona hi tha!! Kismet kismet ki baat...!!

ALL : ha ryt ...!! (reapeting what she said)Tera select hona toh likha hi tha

Thts whn all realize ...tht she got sletd..😆

ALL : tu select ho gyi?????😲

M : haaa mai select ho gyi!! ( happy happy )😃😃

J : maanu ..mai tere liye bahut khush hun!!!😛

Rest of them: wish her ...!! And tell all d bst for future...

And the jm sis's go to their room...

J : mannu mai tere liye bahut khush hun!!!!! (smiles widely)😃

M: mujhe pata hai di!!

J : waise tere company ka naam🤔

M : company ka naam ..V melody...hai di!!!...koi singing sensation company hai di..mujhe jyada nhi pata!!!..

J : oh nyc name ...😛!! Par mannu tujhe apne company ke barey mai pata hona chahiye..😡😡

M : di pls...ya chodo na ...😕

( thinking y jeevs didn't knw tht it was virats company ??? cs she doent knw tht V melody is virat's company!!!🤢🤢 And she neva botherd to ask him his company name ..she just knew he was a star...!!and wat do u expect frm her ?? cs she knew vadheras oly frm 1 month...😳)

M: boss ka naam kya hai ye nhi pucho gi??

J: ha bol na!!

M : virat!!

J : kya??😲

M : ha di !! shock laga na ?? par ye virat vo virat nhi hai...!!!!

J : ohhh ...😛

Three days paasss...so very sooonn!!!

Next day ...

Dabbu: chalo chalo ..sab !!!baith jao ...jaldi ..(yelling)...jeevika di make-up car mai baith k kar lena!!!😕😕

J : mai make up nhi lagati ( making irritated face)😡😡

M : ha di make up nhi lagati ...!! Suna tune dabbbe !!! hits him on the head...!!😕

D: chale ??

ALL : ha ... jai mata di!!!!

It was a journey of 3 hours...but due to traffic it was taking more tym!!!

They all enjoyed singing ..chating ..pulling each othrs leg...it didn't seem that the traffic bothered them...!!!😆😆

They reached the gate of vadhera mansion ...where it was written VADHERA MANSION...bt at the same tym manvi bent down to wear her slippers!!!!!.( god doesn't want to spoil the suspense for her I guesss😆😆...hehehe or shud I say I dnt wanna...🤢🤢!!!!)

They get down frm the car...and all together...went to the main door...and vanshika maa was there...

Vm: aaiye naa!! Welcome ...

ALL : smiled...😛

Jeevika took blessings frm VM and so did dabbo...and rest gale lage...and jeevika introduced her sister to VM

J : maa...ye maanvi meri choti behen ...meri jaan

Vm : hello beta..😊

M : hi aunty ( and she took blessings...)

Vm: jeetey raho!!!( she already felt happy seeing her😃😃...aur ho bhi kyun na?? apni mannu hai hi itni sweet!!!!😳)Andar aao na!!!

Vi: Namaste beeji ,badi beeji ,chachu ,chachi,!! n he took blessings frm all.. and the elders move to hall and all youngsters move to garden...

Vi : Hi dabbo...

D : hi jiju!!!

M : jiijuuu!! Aap hume kaise bhul saktey hai??😕

Vi : mmaaannviii!! (happy seeing her) hello kaisi ho??😃

M : hum mast hai !! aap kaisey hai??

Vi: hum bhi thik hai!!!

M : waisey aapko nhi lagta ki aap kisi imp. Person ko hi bolna bhul rahe hai ..??!!😕

Vi : kisko uhh??

M : meri di ko...!! Aur kya?? 🤢 Vo kabse aap ke "hi" ka wait kar rahi hai!!! (jeevika blushes😳 n hits her head slowly)

Vi : (blushes) areyyy...hi jeevika...maine tumhe notice hi nhi kia..mai toh maanvi ke saath baat kar raha tha na...!!🤢🤢

M : jiju ...let me tell u one thing ...aap bahut kharab actor hai..😕!!!! Aapko jhut bolna nhi aata...!!

Vi : (bites his tounge n blushes)😳 areyy aapne toh mujhe fatak se pakad liya...lawyer mujhe nhi aapko hona chahiye tha...!!!😆😆

M : thns for a compliment par mai filhaal PA hi thik hu..😊!! Aur aap itna blush kartey ho!!! Meri di aur aapki Jodi fit hai !!! made for each other types u knw...!! 😳😳Meri di aapka naam suntey hi tamatar ki tarah lal ho jaati hai!!!! ☺️ ( maanvi was enjoyin this seeing her di's reactions...😆viren ws blushing more as he didn't knw he has this strong effect on her...n jeevika who ws looking like she ws blushing ...but she ws hell embarrassed ...she wanted to just get invisible...☺️)

J : manu chup kar tu...

M : arey di!!! Abhi toh subah wala kissa batana baki hai!!!🤢

J : maanu tu chup karti hai ya chata lagau???🤔

M : accha ok ok..!! just chill...konsa mai duniya ko bata rahi hu...aapke hone waley pati parmeshwar se hi toh keh rahi hu...!!! 🤢 😆

And she ran all around the garden with jeevika chasing her...

M : ok sorry sorry..bas bas mujhse aur bagha nhi jata...!!! J : mujhse bhi (huffing n keeping her hand on her waist)😕😕 😲

M: waise...jiju aapne mujhe aapne dushman se nhi milaya!!! (huffing a bit)

Vi: (confused) uhh??😳

M : aapke bhai se!!

J : MANNU!!!! Virat bahut sweet hai!! Chup kar tu😡😡

M: voh mai milne ke baad decide karungi...!!

Vi: arey ha vo yahi toh tha kaha gaya??

A voice from back comes...

.." aap jissey milna chahati hai voh yaha hai!!!" virat says...😃😃

Manvi turn towards the source...

V (aloud) :😲 TUMMM!!!!!! M (aloud) :😲 AAAPPP????

wanna knw wat happens next ??? so stay tuned to Virman :Tere Aane Se...😊

i knw thoda short update hai ..par chappal mat pehnka ...lag jayegi mujhe...!!! anyhow next update jaldi karne ki koshish karungi...hw was the update thn??? liked it or no?? do tell me ...leave ur opinions ..important for me...😃 so meet u with the next part's promo ...till then byee ..n keep loving me...😳