Virman FF : Tere Aane Se...NOTE pg 104 - Page 12

supeb concept..!!!! amazing story..!!!..n title name is jst super duper great..!!!! n seems very interesting..!! i always wanted to read a story jst exactly like u write..!!! u r super duper writter...this story is mind blowingly n splendedly written..!! i loved it,liked it n enjoye it alot..!!! feeling very sad for virat..n hate dat maya..also feeling very exctited to think abt virman's second meeting...cox their first meeting was very cute n lovely..!!! all thnks goes to dat karan...! bt he has some evil plans...so i just want to kill him..!! virat is making him strong..liked his confidence n boldness..!!! loved manvi's character...!!!..umm waiting for virman's nxt meeting..!!! n viren's blushing..lolzz...poor viren...:p...plz plz plz plz plz [plz update SOON!!!!!! i m waiting for nxt part.!!! eagerly n desperately...!!! plz update soon..!!!! don't be late...!! can't wait anymore... n plz PM me !!!! once again update asap..!!! n do PM me !!!

update soon big wala update want
waiting when there story should start
update soon

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

wow lavanya ji sweet update but itna chutku sa kyun ttha😕

next time it will be big ok😳

now coming to the update it was sweet and cute update😊

karan came back and virat saw him with a gal..hmm manvi also came back from us kahi woh ladki manvi hi toh nahi jisko virat ne karan ke sath dekha haww😲

aww vanshika maa is so sweet.. even she was also teasing viren that's so cute and funny. loved their family moment

now eagerly waiting for the next part do cont soon

and thanx for the pm😊

haayyyee apne toh mujhe apne commnt se maar hi dala
chutka sa isliye tha kyunki tym nhi mila...😕 😆 next wala bada hoga...be waiting...😊 thns fr liking it...

Originally posted by: anu0555

supeb concept..!!!! amazing story..!!!..n title name is jst super duper great..!!!! n seems very interesting..!! i always wanted to read a story jst exactly like u write..!!! u r super duper writter...this story is mind blowingly n splendedly written..!! i loved it,liked it n enjoye it alot..!!! feeling very sad for virat..n hate dat maya..also feeling very exctited to think abt virman's second meeting...cox their first meeting was very cute n lovely..!!! all thnks goes to dat karan...! bt he has some evil plans...so i just want to kill him..!! virat is making him strong..liked his confidence n boldness..!!! loved manvi's character...!!!..umm waiting for virman's nxt meeting..!!! n viren's blushing..lolzz...poor viren...:p...plz plz plz plz plz [plz update SOON!!!!!! i m waiting for nxt part.!!! eagerly n desperately...!!! plz update soon..!!!! don't be late...!! can't wait anymore... n plz PM me !!!! once again update asap..!!! n do PM me !!!

thns for such a long comment...😊 par really is it so good??? any hw will update next part very soon ...😃

hello friends ...im back ..khush mat hona nt for update promo ke liye 😆

thns u all those lovely people who cmmntd on my FF ...thns fr ur long long commnts...mere liye toh one line wale cmmnts hi long lagtey hai 😆 ryt hai guyzz ...first tymer ke liye itna hi bahut bada achievement hota hai...😊 ok so enuff of my non stop Xpresss...ye lo promo..

Promo :
next part will be abt the awesum SISSY'S ...

As soon as they close the door behind thm...jeevika and maaanvi turn to each othr..his was the tym they wer seeking from tht tym...being wid each othr ...

They hug each othr ...and cry...a little ..kushi ke aansu...

M : di mai aa gyi hamesha ke liye aapke paas ..ab mai kabhi aapse durr nhi jaungi ..!!!

J : mai tujjhe jane doon tab na...!!!

Both had a lot of talks tucked under the same duvet...and then maanvi came to the topic...

keep guessing wat topic...mai kitni devilish hu...yar curiosity badti hai !!!! aage ki story padhne mai maza aayega curiosity badegi toh ...chalo bye meet u with the next update...!!😃

waiting for the update jaldi update karooo

nice promo two sister meeting
and getting emotion update soon

hello ...i know mai bahut jald update kar rahi hu...par vo isliye kyunki last update short tha.na...so enjoy it..and thns for ur lovely likes n comments...😃

Virman : Tere Aane Se...

Part 5...

And here in

Choudary nivass...

The car came to halt...screaching

Maanvi quickly got down from the car and here in the room jeevika heard the car screech n ran down ...maanvi ran towards the main door ..and jeevika running towards the door...getting down from stairs...jeevika all the way shouting ...

J : maanu aa gyi ..chacha, chachi ..dabbu, beeji ..maanu aagyi ..

Maanvi in a swift opened a big main door of choudary nivaas which was a quiet difficult bt she managed it...she saw her di ..and her di saw her...both looked into each othrs eyes for a second and exclaimed...(all the members came out by now..)

J : mannu M : di...

They ran towards each othr..and hugged each othr ...tears rolled down from their cheeks..they stayed lyk that for a moment a parted to see each othr...

And thn all welcomed her..

M: beeji ...she took blessings..and hugged ..chachi chachu...she hugged them...thn badi beeji said " aae chudail yaha hu mai!!!" She went and hugged her too and asked one question " hamari teesri behen kaha hai??"

D : mai yaha hu di..!!!

M : DABBEEE!!! Maine tujhe bahut miss kia..!!! tu kitna badal gaya hai dabbe !! maine aaap sab ko miss kia... bahut bahut miss kia...!!!

(FAMILY DRAMA N STUFF SKIPING THT)

ALL : ha thik hai !! ab saari ramayan yahi batyegi kya???

They go for change and meet at dining table...

Dinner was a quick affair and all wer having a family tym...

BJ : bahut thak gyi hogi maanvi...chalo hum sab sone chalte hai...kal subah jaldi uthna hai sabhi ko...!!!!

Chachu :ha sahi hai ..chalo gud nyt...!!

Chachi : ha ha chalo meri kamar abhi tut sakti hai ...chaliye ji ..!!

Jeevika and maanvi go to jeevika's room ...as maanvi's room was not yet set properly...their rooms wer 2 but both wer attached having a door in btwn...

As soon as they close the door behind thm...jeevika and maaanvi turn to each othr...his was the tym they wer seeking from tht tym...being wid each othr ...

They hug each othr ..and cry...a little ..kushi ke aansu...

M : di mai aa gyi hamesha ke liye aapke paas ..ab mai kabhi aapse durr nhi jaungi ..!!!

J : mai tujjhe jane doon tab na...!!!

Both had a lot of talks tucked under the same duvet...and then maanvi came to the topic..

M : di!! 4 din baad hum JEEEJU se milne jaa rahe hai..(she stretched the wrd jiju)

J : she blushed hard...

M: haayeee!! Itna blushhh...di itna blush toh aapki models bhi nhi karti ...woh bhi blush powder laga ke...aur aap toh ...bina blush lagaye hi..!!!!!!

J : mannu chup kar!!

M : accha k...di!! Waise ek baat kahu jeeju bahut sweet hai...mujhe bahut acche lage ...!!

J: maine kaha tha na...!! vo hai hi sweet...ab tu mere saath hogi pheron ke waqt..engagement mai maine tujhe kitna miss kia pta hai!! Aur toh aur roke din tune cal bhi nhi kia..!!

M: di uss din mera cell gum ho gaya na di!!...

J : ha ryt!!! Kal tera dil kho jayega aur tu tab bhi yahi bolegi..

M: di tension mat lo ..mujhe pata chal jayega..!! aur waisey bhi maine engagement miss kardia toh kya hua ...vo bhi maine miss aapne x-am ke waajah se kia...!! Waarna mai apni di ki enagement miss kardu aisa ho hi nhi sakta..!!!!! Ab aap dekhna mai kaise aapki shaadi mai chaar chand laga kar rakh deti hu..!

J : ha ha ..laga lena chand ..

M: ha kk !! di ..

J: hmm...

M: di jeeju ka chota bhai hai na..!!??

J : ha mannu... Virat...vo ek india ka singing sensation hai tujhe nhi pata kya?? Vo bahut hi famous hai ...ladkiya toh uske piche pagal hai..

M : di mujhe kaise pata hoga ..aapne uske bare mai kab jyada kuch bataya hi nhi ..hamesha viren ji ye viren ji vo karti rehti ho aap so mujhe uske bare mai kya pta!!!!! Aur mujhe ye nhi janna hai ki vo singer hai ya nhi ..mai toh ye janna chahti hu ..ki rishte ke hisaab se mai viren ji ki saali hui ryt??

J : ha mannu..

M : virat aapka devar hua ryt??

J : ha maanu...(confused a bit)

M : matlab devar ... saali...

J : thts whn jeevika got to knw wat she meant...Mannu tu aisa kuch nhi karegi..

M : di ...devar aur saali dushman hote hai toh pranks toh banta hai..!!!!

J : mannu...vo bahut sweet hai yaar...tu ussey jaan ne ki koshish karegi na toh tujhe vo accha lagega... aur aisa koi panga nhi karegi k!!

M : di who mai usey dekh kar decide karungi!! Aur ha ...agar usne panga kia toh mai chup nhi baithungi... !!!

J : k meri ammaaa!! Ab so jaye?? Kal tujhe interview ke liye bhi toh jana hai..

M : oh ha di gud nyt...!! Par di aaj hi toh mai aai hu kal interview...mai nhi jaungi..!!

J : maine tujhe kaha tha ki baad ki appointment le ..par nhi tujhe toh meri shaadi miss nhi karni thi na!!! toh ja ab interview dene..!!!

M : par di ...

J : gud nyt ..!!! N she slept...

M : ok gud nyt..!!

They slept clinging to each othr...

thats it for now...till then bye and do leave ur opinions...important for me...

AWESOME UPDATE.
LOVED JEEVMAN .
THANKS FOR PM.

Nice updt...loved this sisters bond...cont soon