taarey~HUM MAR JAYENGE (UPDATED CH-16 PG 120)

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anaghchavan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#651

very very beautiful update.

u make me cry again, worth it but, superb update,
how much they love each other. while reading i can imagine
taarey live.

really u write so so good/beautiful/superb, every emotions can
be make out while reading it, i really like ur this story very much.

please update next part soon, and give us surprises as per promo.

update soon.

i know i must not say thank you to you as u don't like it being buddy, but
really a big vala thank you very much for such a beautiful story which u have
written so nicely.

now waiting for taarey scenes in part 14, update soon.

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chinudolly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: _Cupid_
wow awsm update plzz ab or mar rulao taani and rey ko plz alag mat karna plZz nice plzz next part update soon plzzz

aww dil se thank u so much friend
😊😊😊

u have to wait n read to know more .. i will try to update asap 😛

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chinudolly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: premlata
as usually you it emotional and heart touching update ...
love it soo much ..this time also i cry but not with sadness ..this time happy wala cry and little smile on my face ..

taarey ke dusare ke liye sacrifice karne ko read hai ...

prcap more interesting waiting taarey romance

super happy see your editing .. means something more interesting waiting for us ...
plz update soon

aww dil se big big wala thank u so much buddy

this is really a very special and precious comment

it really means a lot and a lot to me

🤗 thanks a lot for this sweet lovely hearty comment🤗

ya u r right something very interesting r waiting for u all

i will update asap 😳

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chinudolly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: Humzy
Wow awsm update
Loved it
Very beautifully written
U portrayed the emotions and feelings so beautifully
So heartbreaking
Loved it
Continue soon

aww dil se thank u so much friend

i also love ur special sweet comments

they mean a lot to me 😊😊

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chinudolly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#655

Originally posted by: chand91
awsmm prt dr
soo painful
thnks 4 pm

aww dil se thank u so much buddy 😊

u r welcome 4 pms

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chinudolly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#656

Originally posted by: Shan_aya
Aapko hamein rula ke mazaa ata hai kya?
Such a beautiful update.
Loved it.
Update soon. Pm me. 😊 ❤️ 👍🏼

no dear its not like that ./ its just the demand of the story which force me to write emotional plz forgive me to make u cry and plz smile now and keep smiling always plz 😊

and dil se thank u so much for a hearty special and precious comment

i will try to update asap n pm u 4 sure 😊😊😊

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chinudolly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: AshwiniPindoria
Hey it was a fab update
Taarey feelings were superbly described
i liked title of the update
precap is interesting waiting 4 other great update of this story by u...

aww dil se big wala thank u so very much buddy for all ur special lovely comments

they really mean a lot and a lot to me

thanks a lot 😊

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chinudolly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#658

Originally posted by: raddhi
Nice prt well disappointed with length
Of update :| anyways I Luv tht taarey
Luv each other so much n finally the hug
Thanks for PM

very sorry sweetu to disappoint u by short update but i really felt that readers r not reading n liking long long updates so gave short update .. will try to give u long update next time ..

and dont worry next update is dedicated to u and all d readers with tr romance

dil se than k u for ur precious comment

u r welcome for pms

no need to say thanks 😊😊😊

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chinudolly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#659

Originally posted by: amrit2000
Oh my! Such an emotional update. Yes, you made me cry. Others too, I think. Yaaar, aise thodi nah hota hai! Why is this happening to them? I cant see them like this. It pains. It hurts. I want them to be happy. But, without these things, story wont be natural. Yes, this story is REAL. Its unlike those which are happy ever after. I loved reading it. Your writing is amazing. But, cause of different colors, it sometimes become difficult to read. Maybe its just me who feels so, but, I said what I felt. Do not get angry or hurt from me. I have no such intentions. I just say what I feel. Also, I am a big time criticizer. I am sorry if I am being rude. But, everyone likes to make things better. So, I said to make it look better, and moreover, a little less conjusted. Sorry again. Other than that, your story, mashallah, amazing. I loved it to the zenith.

aww dil se very sorry to make u cry but plz forgive me for that m really forced to write so emotional by the story's concept u r write without all these things it wont be natural thats why i have 2 write these ,.. m so glad that u loved my story so much

n very sorry for reading problem caused by different colors .. i have corrected it and do it all black ..and will do black in future updates also ..

its ok .. u dont need to be sory for that ok

dil se thank u so much for ur precious n special comment

it really means a lot and a lot to me

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chinudolly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: aishapie
Yepiii...itne tym baad update 😃
bt bt teri update toh rula diya muje 😭
it waz really really senti update yaar.
nxt prt asap.
thanx for pm.

sorry to make u cry buddy but plz smile now n keep smiling always 😊

i will try to update next asap

u r welcome

dil se thank u for ur precious comment 😊😊😊