New Arakshi OS: Home again.. 15/7 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Avantika Aapi!!!

Waah...waah...!! Kya baat...kya baat...kya baat!! (In Mithoon da ishtyle!)



What a story! And, it's way of approching was simply mind blowing!



Actually, not Arjun...I think you are a unique specimen!


But, loved the ending line-

'Life was a bliss...who said that cops didn't have life!'



Enjoyed fully...Aapi! Thanks for giving us such a nice OS...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
I just loved it every part of it.
It was so beautiful. πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
awesome update
loved it
it was beautiful
loved the ending
thanks 4 pm
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
awesome..
You just showed all possible emotions and mostly romantic,
arjun and sakshi facing so many odds being in same profession.. And sakshi left behind every thing cause of insecurities.. Just loved the way arjun explained importance of her in his life.. Loved the cute end you gave..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!
me dead...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
wont be able to write much as i am still lost in some other world and also at a loss of words 
neend some to normalise...
loved ARJUN...muah☺️☺️☺️
loved it to d core...plz dont say dat it want too good
in fact it was way beyond even super and best...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
thanks for pm  ...!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
That was one of the most beautiful works I have read on Arakshi. 
It had the right mixture of happiness, fears, tears, and of course, romance.

Loved the closing line the most!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Hey awsum workπŸ€—...
right kind of emotions poured into each part...😊
ur imaginations r a big WOW...
keep it up.πŸ‘πŸΌ..loved it.!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Amazing OS...
Please write more on them...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
What a beautiful story...simply mindblowing πŸ‘πŸ‘

You have described both their feelings so well...I just wish this story was longer or more to come
Too bad it's an OS...way too short...I hope you can continue and give us a peek into their married life together with Sam and Ayesha...
( I think I'm hoping for too much 😭 πŸ˜‰ )
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
awesome os dear
loved his new side of arjun as a husband
the feelinf of arakshi well pen downed
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thanks a lot for pm
eagerly waiting to read more of your works
thanks again