Nokjhok/Love Series Pg 26 OS:The Chocolaty Scene Reloaded!! - Page 23

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

i loved it jannu🤗 just forgot click the button  😳...now that LN and guman are coming old days r gonna be back again ...and amidst all marriage rituals  and tana  from guman we will need lot of ur os to enjoy these dobos togetherness

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

if u r talking of writing sr .that means shaadi pakka hogi...lol now i really have to read between lines since u have stopped giving me clues.


but omi do add some drama too...u can add drama twist just as some flashback or in few lines stating the impact...i know it becomes lengthy to add drama and romance together ...but i want it one from u that way please ...

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Now I am happier because if u didn't like then something went wrong with the story😳

Thank u 🤗 After watching Radhika madam at work now I am not too keen to see Gumaan. Why do I feel that SC WILL NOW TURN SAAS BAHU CRAP?

Of course Gumaan has nothing to do with SaMud now coz Saras has cut all ties with them but she will start her nautanki with Kusum to get to Kumud n then Kumud will be crying balti of ansoos n also tries to solve all problems by herself a la Tulsi n Saras n her will b arguing every alternate days for not asking him his opinions before she acts.

even i dont want it to turn in saas bahu crap...i just want somehow saras kumud seperated after marriage ..

...may be by some accident where saras goes missing and all...and kumud is left with family while saras goes jamuna paar with some lost memory and all...and then guman plans to throw kumud out  of house...

afterall saras has to leave once at least as per novel as well...so why not throw him down the cliff...and then he makes reentry very next in some big haveli being tended by some new family ...while kumud cries ganga and Guman laughs like sursa at her victory 😆

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Shana I am not good in writing drama. I tried to start a SS but I found myself stuck. U r pro in this department. Why don't u write sometimes u lazy butt? I think u will do a great job. U write so beautifully do share it with the forum people. 

let guman come and give some tana to kumud and saras defend her...let guman come and connive something against her and then..i will surely write some drama 😃

kalika does not inspire me yaar as i find her too naukrani ...i really need a shrewd lady villain who has powers and aura...guman has it...as her good height elegant sarees and devil smile really intrigue me to write drama 😆

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

even i dont want it to turn in saas bahu crap...i just want somehow saras kumud seperated after marriage ..

...may be by some accident where saras goes missing and all...and kumud is left with family while saras goes jamuna paar with some lost memory and all...and then guman plans to throw kumud out  of house...

afterall saras has to leave once at least as per novel as well...so why not throw him down the cliff...and then he makes reentry very next in some big haveli being tended by some new family ...while kumud cries ganga and Guman laughs like sursa at her victory 😆

Originally posted by: kittenlover

Jaaanu.. .🤗!!!!

 Firstly a ton of thanks for reliving this lovely romantic scenes in ur way !!!! 😛😛   u are more romantic than CV's ..  😆😆 Lovely as always.. !!!! Especially the last few line were sooo cute.. 😳 !!!!! 

i have told u this before ( countless times ), if u were one among the Creative writers of SC.. We would have got many romantic lovely passionate scenes for sure.. !!!!!!!!!   

keep writing more.. !!!!! 

Pyar se jab naam mera usne baar baar liya

Prof J--

Originally posted by: DocWho

Prof J--

Oh hi! I kind of needed to smell sal volatile coz I kind of fainted after reading your chocolicious scene setting😳 Why can't these CVs be as creative as you are? With such hot 'n' bodacious leads at work, this would set the screen on fire. Thanks for the PM =)

Originally posted by: annete

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Lafz apne naam ke saare mujhe ache lage...

aur

 Tujhe roz dekhon karib se

mera shauq kitna ajeeb hai...

aur 

Usne poocha ki kya pasand hai tumhe

main bohot der tak usey dekhta raha...

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