Swaron FF: Destiny and it's Funny game [Chapter 14 UPDATED] - Page 45

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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg this was just a perfect...
As i have joined the forum just some time before so had  not read the earlier updates...so finally read all of them in one go...and trust me i have become such a fan...
Coming to the final update... It was so swaronalicious...real cute the way the understanding, the bonding, the love, the care and affection was penned...
And I'm glad that sid understood and didn't create any more problems...
And that final ice cream treat just added to the swaron celebration... The song also suited well...
As of now that swaron are together I'm content...but as you mentioned about the upcoming twist and turns I'm left impatient about reading further more...
So pls pls update soon...
and thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was such a cute update!!! :) 
Sid's part very well written.
SwaRon as usual, the cutest thing in the whole wide world :) 

Waiting for more twists and turns :P 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear to understand what's going on I will have to read it from the start so that I can comment for every chapter properly. I will ask for some time for it. After completing the reading till here that is Chapter 14, I will start commenting properly. Please bear with me. I am sorry.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Seriously i am just amazed how many write ups u have..This one is hillarious..The concept is beautifull..I am just done with previous some chapters,and honestly ur writing is such a cool to understand depth of Emotion and their terrific execution in  writing..Right now i dont know,how many unres comments i have on ur works and always i feel bad that i couldnt able to reply ur works properly..But anyways this one is amazing and i will surly read plus also will do my comment soon..Till then u have to wait for that (I know u are very silent writer and used to beer with ur late readersπŸ˜†)So plz bear with me..Me padh kar commenr zarur kaunga..
And thanx a lot for ur all PM's and plz keep sending me..okay











Prateek
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update.
Truly exciting. I hate that sid guy but the story is auper interesting now.
I was waiting for so long ki aap next chapter update karo.
Finally.

Loved it. Amazing. Update soon. Thanks for the PM.
Edited by -spongy- - 10 years ago
sanchiswaron thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just read all the updates its amazing 
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
one of the best ff read so far loved it.. 
waiting for d next twist in d story
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love Sid for what he did! glad he understood..
atlast Swayam can freely romance Sharon..
the SwaRon romantic moments.. loved it!
you are an amazing writer tanvish..
eager for the next update
thanks for the PM

P.S. sorry for the short comment.. :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update :)
I'm happy SwaRon are together and that Sid didn't take Sharon away
The SwaRon moment when Sharon was sleeping was really cute
I loved the song choice :) whilst reading the part before it, I was actually thinking about that song and then I saw it :P it's like we read each other's mind :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...just loved every bit of it...

beautifully penned down... πŸ˜³

finally Sid is out of story...really happy ...

annoyed swayam...dat was funny... πŸ˜†

ice cream part was really sweet and cute... πŸ˜³

song selection perfect... πŸ‘πŸΌ

over just loved it... πŸ˜ƒ

ps-sorry fr late comment... ws busy with examz... πŸ˜”