OS- Aapko derr ho gayi Arnavji (Last Part on pg3) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
awesome update
very well written n touching
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
interesting update continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This might Come as a surprise for you, but i've never nver ever read any OS which dealt with their second marriage and Arnav's coming late that day..

This is my first ever since i've been at IF.., that part kinda makes me angry at Arnava nd reminds me the time he cried.. And all that pain! Thts why i refrained from reading anythng which had their second marriage in it!

And this OS, I DIN'T KNOW THAT'S UR ITS WRITER, and as i read first few lines, i knew it , that i had to shed some tears..

I mean how can Khushi??..she just can't do this, Hurt Arnav, her Arnavji where it hurts him the most!

Suicide, she bloody attempted a suicide!

Thts what she meant by 'aapko derr ho gayi Arnavji'...

Literally i scared for a minute..

And i swear i would have killed you Appu had you not shown her alive.. Pakka.. I wud have!

But the thing i liked most about it, was its ending!

We can't always fight with what fate has in for us, but we can always bargain for a li'll happiness for them, that comes wid their being together, forever! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: aashi12

This might Come as a surprise for you, but i've never nver ever read any OS which dealt with their second marriage and Arnav's coming late that day..

This is my first ever since i've been at IF.., that part kinda makes me angry at Arnava nd reminds me the time he cried.. And all that pain! Thts why i refrained from reading anythng which had their second marriage in it!

And this OS, I DIN'T KNOW THAT'S UR ITS WRITER, and as i read first few lines, i knew it , that i had to shed some tears..

I mean how can Khushi??..she just can't do this, Hurt Arnav, her Arnavji where it hurts him the most!

Suicide, she bloody attempted a suicide!

Thts what she meant by 'aapko derr ho gayi Arnavji'...

Literally i scared for a minute..

And i swear i would have killed you Appu had you not shown her alive.. Pakka.. I wud have!

But the thing i liked most about it, was its ending!

We can't always fight with what fate has in for us, but we can always bargain for a li'll happiness for them, that comes wid their being together, forever! :)


Thanks.. Oh! Am alive :p
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Finally I found u Upasana... 😉

Wen I read d 1 n 2 chappy I ws in a shock mode... 

Khushi attempting suicide is 1 of horrible thngs tht cud hv happened... 😭

N her lines, "Arnavji apko derr ho gayi.." gv me goosebumps all over... 😕 

Poor doc hd 2 tk ASR's wrath... 😕

Finally Chappy 3 relieved me... I ws wondering y Arnav asked HP abt hvng dinner??? 🤣

Bt soon i gt my answer n I'm glad abt it.. 😆

Khushi preggy ws beautifully shown n d way Arnav tuk care of her melted my heart... 

Poor Arnav still had nytmares... 

Bt in all... I luvd it completely... 😃

P.S. U shud write more...

Gud wrk... 👏
Edited by asthagarwal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: asthagarwal

Finally I found u Upasana...😉


Res 4 nw...


Haww :o How did you got it Di?!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
I will come back to this tonight :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
awesome os
beautifully written...
do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
  ❤️  lovely ❤️ 
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
That was so beautifully written.

Khushi really tried to commit suicide..that was pathetic...totally..I had thought that it had something to do with Shyam...may be he had his dirty hands in that but...it was her only.

Loved the way story progressed...the first part was really heartbreaking and the third part made me relieved..

Keep writing...
it was a good read.. Upasna ji..

And sorry for being late..