New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7) - Page 17

just read 2 n 3rd chapters.
both were fantastic.
i really liked the concept of this ff...its new, its real, its entertaining. i liked the films fashion n page 3 on this whole glamour n media thing. your ff reminds me of them.
when we try to create imaginary world n stories around us its really interesting to now that harsh realities of world can provide good entertainment and in fact its more than that. it leaves certain questions in our mind n make us think differently...ok enough of my philosophy😆. updates were really nice. i liked pia's character very much. she doesn't pity herself for anything or keep cursing her fate. she accepted the truth of her life with dignity.

Awesomeee story... 

Tanziee u r always my favourite & ur all update make mee eagarly curicious for next...I have one question...Abhay ex Metz as Hasseena said...Is Pia here same face like pkyek Metz...Love Abhiya cute text conversation,,,Continue soon...& waiting for Beautiful Diaster & till the end of time update🤗...srry for Late reply🤗

wonderful update tanzie ... mind blowing
liked the dog name fire 😃 ...
abhay have problems with his parents ... hmmm so metz is abhay ex definitely he was interested in her want to know more about that ...
misha will be broken when she will knws her dad affairs ...
awww loved the msg conversation between abhiya ... wondering did piya really kissed abhay ??? 😛

awesome update tanzie..
Absolutely loved their 2nd meeting! The flirting..dance..everything. And was abhay just kidding or did piya really kiss him ? :P their phone chat was cute too..! Amazing job as usual 🤗

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

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wheee I am first I am first :D :P

Now then. Update was one hell of an entertainer. I do so love AbhIya's interactions here. Well written Tanzie :D
Good god, Abhay is persistent! I'm sure he'll be rewarded for it soon :P
As for Piya- I'm wondering if she's developing a real liking for him. From the way you wrote it felt as though she might...
Anyways, awesome update, I loved it, and I love Fire! Can we have more of her please ;)

Originally posted by: nidu-dsena

awesome tanzie..
loved abhiya convo 😳

Originally posted by: -SanaLuvAbhay-

Awesome update... loved deir mssg convo d most !!

Originally posted by: withered

awesome update didu.
fire's track was mindblowing 😃. although i think ki girls love dogs , they dont get scared from them , but anyways pia ka reaction dekhne layak tha. 😆
abhiya are gonna meet again, yipeee...😳
btw, abhay pia mein se kis ko ek doosre ka raaz pehle pata chalega.?😉
omg, abhay ko 90's ke songs pasand hai . why 20's ke kyun nahin? .😲

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

u knw tanzie what i like most the scene when fire jump on pia... omg and she call her monster... heehaaaeee i still imagining that part pia under fire and abhay saving her... she is really cute though sad in her life...by d way i amd pitiy misha, arnav keeping her in dark and kabir hideing but any way he is also not any saint... by d way when are u planning to introduce misha's brother...