New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7) - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

this is the 1st chap I read on this ff and I loved itπŸ˜ƒ
gr8 concept
liked this chap very  muchπŸ˜†
liked the doggy FireπŸ˜†
owww but Pia is a hooker😲...I was really shocked
waiting for more updates
u didnt pm me


Thank you and welcome to this FF as well πŸ˜† fire was actually my boss's dog. she died last month. yea the story is diff and pia is an escort. i knew people would be surprised. I was wondering if they will accept it or not. gladly they did.

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update tanzie.

their convo was awsum.
looking forward for their next meeting.
alina was feeling lonely but it's her choice so she would have to live with that.


Thanks Megha. yes there would be more meetings so slowly make AbhIya understanding strong. Alina choose her life, nobody told her to do it. thrs diff sort of people in this ff. all good and bad.. like real life. thats how i wanted to write it but everyone has a reason. 

Originally posted by: mire220

It is a wonderful story Tanzie!!!


 Love it...

pls pm me  :) i want to read moreee ... Thanks ;)


Thanks dear. added to the PM list and welcome to my thread πŸ˜³
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

I am so sorry for unreserving late  U know how busy I had been last few days. Tanzie its perfectly all right dear 😳 Take ur time. Update when u get the time. I understand how difficult it is to juggle between work and personal life 😭 Ur FFs are worth the wait πŸ˜ƒ Thanks Mandy. u can wait and not everyone will wait for that long. the response number decreasing clearly says that.πŸ˜†

 
Coming to the update, yes it was short πŸ˜› but entertaining nonetheless πŸ˜ƒ I so loved the quote btw 🀣 True guys can't think much anyways πŸ˜› You know how much I love dogs n thanks for having Fire in the story πŸ€— Golden retrievers r my fav 😳 Even my friend's dog Scotch is a retriever n poor thing is so timid but ppl r terrified of it bcoz of its size πŸ˜† But its such a beauty   It was fun to see Pia being terrified of Fire πŸ˜† I suppose Pia found it hard to overcome the shock that she had landed in somebody else's bed for the entire night when her job entailed her just to amuse her clients and go away from there. I am wondering as to why Abhay brought Pia to his parent's home πŸ˜• And by the looks of it Pia wasn the first girl he brought. Abhay being the gentleman he was offered her breakfast but Pia didn't wish to break her protocol πŸ˜• He also offered her money though unlike other clients he didn use her to satisfy his needs but he had taken her time. So it was only fair that her work hours didn go a waste. Fire was my ex-boss's dog who died last month. will tell about her in note ext update.he unconsciously came to his hom bcoz he missed his home offcourse but his relationship with his mother is too bitter. Pia dont do breakfast or anything more than business with her clients. she keeps it strictly professional. try to understand she didn choose this profession. its her helplessness. she hates it and she hates all the men who are her clients as well and how they treat her. she isnt used to with offers of breakfast to take it lightly. if someone does she will probably end up thinking they are faking bcoz she isnt used to get the nice behavior. 
 
I donno if I shd feel bad or get mad at Alina πŸ€” But I do understand her situation. Reminded me of PC and Arbaaz in Fashion. She doesn exactly love Arnab as she in the relation only to reap the benefits but somewhere the woman in her is bound to feel humiliated when she realises she is nothing but a keep  she wants fame and fame as always a price to pay
 
I feel there's a lot unsaid between mother n son  Donno y but I kinda have my doubts on Abhay's father. Am not saying he is bad but was he really the person he believed him to be? Abhay seems to despise Haseena but there could be more to the truth than what actually meets the eye or maybe its just me thinking too much πŸ˜› Haseena mentioned Metz which means she was his first love and something has gone dreadfully wrong judging Abhay's reactions  yes you are thinking too much. I told you before not everything has double meaning i write so stop thinking too much between the lines πŸ˜† i will write about metz and abhay later and Chand has no problems. he was a nice guy. for once i decided to make a positive character.
 
Misha's restlessness was described very well πŸ‘ She has been hearing abt Arnab's affairs but being a doting daughter she ignored them but for how long? πŸ˜• She knows the pros n cons of being a part of the glamour industry n most of the times its just rumours but she also knows that deep down some part of it will always be true as its world of deceptions, lies and facades where everyone hides behind a mask either to shield themselves or cover up their misdoings. She is now doubting Kabir n I guess its only a matter of time before she realises that her bff is her dad's girlfriend  she will know much later. not no.
 
Whom was Pia sending the money to? I presume its her family πŸ˜• I loved Abhiya's text chatting πŸ˜† It was really cute. Loved the way he convinced her to come out with him. Pia agreed reluctantly though she ensured it was some sort of official meet up πŸ˜‰ I am so eagerly waiting for next chapter πŸ˜ƒ The title is intriguing to say the least. whom Pia was sending the money u will know with time. 
 
Loved the update as usual πŸ‘ Dont stress urself. Write when u get the time. I am willing to wait 😳 thanks you so much. 
 

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: devilish-grin

awesome update...fire scene was hilarious...loved abhiya msg convo...nice update...thanx for pm😳


Thanks ekta. glad u liked it. πŸ˜Š

Originally posted by: EternalAbhay

I love this FF , Tanz ! It is sooo close to reality ! 


To whom did Pia have to submit the money to ? I mean , you wont really answer it cause it ll kill the suspense but I'm guessing ita for someone close to her.. And may be for the same she has to do the job she's doing.. Looking forward to the next chapie πŸ‘πŸΌ


Thanks Pavi.. hows u? you are right i cant answer it now but you will know with time. yes the same reason she has to do this job. thanku for commenting πŸ˜³
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

awesome + fulltoo enjoyable
love the reaction of pia in morning & after the new addition was none other than 'fire ' love this dog , di one request pls add some more scenes of this dogy with abhay
love the convo b/w abhiya - indirectly they start falling in love with each other -waiting for this relation will grow more
thanks for pm & continue soon


Thanks dear. i will add more scenes of Fire no worries πŸ˜³ no they are not really falling in love so soon. they just need to understand each others lives first and their love will come along later. 

Originally posted by: .VivaciousSoul.

wow tanzi... amazing... luved it so much...


thank you so much πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

just read 2 n 3rd chapters.
both were fantastic.
i really liked the concept of this ff...its new, its real, its entertaining. i liked the films fashion n page 3 on this whole glamour n media thing. your ff reminds me of them.
when we try to create imaginary world n stories around us its really interesting to now that harsh realities of world can provide good entertainment and in fact its more than that. it leaves certain questions in our mind n make us think differently...ok enough of my philosophyπŸ˜†. updates were really nice. i liked pia's character very much. she doesn't pity herself for anything or keep cursing her fate. she accepted the truth of her life with dignity.


Thanks a lot Anjali. yes it was supposed to be some true scenario and many of incidents are real. Glad u liked it. and yes i will try to show my best how what people see is different from what it is. me too, i like writing Pia here.

Originally posted by: surav

Awesomeee story... 

waiting too read moreee..


Thanks a lot and welcome to my thread πŸ˜³
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

Tanziee u r always my favourite & ur all update make mee eagarly curicious for next...I have one question...Abhay ex Metz as Hasseena said...Is Pia here same face like pkyek Metz...Love Abhiya cute text conversation,,,Continue soon...& waiting for Beautiful Diaster & till the end of time updateπŸ€—...srry for Late replyπŸ€—


Thanks Kakoli and no problem. No no Pia and Metz cant be same face. thats y i kept her name as Metz and not maithili. glad u liked it πŸ€—

Originally posted by: bellaaa

wonderful update tanzie ... mind blowing 
liked the dog name fire πŸ˜ƒ ...
abhay have problems with his parents ... hmmm so metz is abhay ex definitely he was interested in her want to know more about that ...
misha will be broken when she will knws her dad affairs ...
awww loved the msg conversation between abhiya ... wondering did piya really kissed abhay ??? πŸ˜›


THanks a lot Beenish. Fire was my boss's dog name. she died last month. yeap Metz is Abhay's ex and she will never come to the story in present. but she will be mentioned many times like how they broke up etc. Misha will be shattered knowing her dads affair. Yes Pia did and she doesnt understand πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks and welcome :D

Originally posted by: -Chinky-

awesome update tanzie..
Absolutely loved their 2nd meeting! The flirting..dance..everything. And was abhay just kidding or did piya really kiss him ? :P their phone chat was cute too..! Amazing job as usual πŸ€—


are you are here so early πŸ˜² πŸ€—
Pia kissed him but she forgot πŸ˜† thanks so much dear... how ru doing?



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Posted: 10 years ago
really sorry for the late comment tanzie.!.! oh i loved abhiya morning partπŸ˜ƒOh looks like abhay's equatin wid his parents are nt good...oh ho...abhay nw has pia's ph noπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
 
@Pink - If that were the case then JKR would have lost her readers too πŸ˜› I used to wait patiently for the next book to come out. Almost 2 years for one book πŸ˜† If the readers are genuine readers then they won't give up.
 
@Red - No worries πŸ˜† I know how annoying it could get n I assure u I am keeping it short next time  Sorry but the trouble is I think too much but thats no reason to bug anyone else. I know I am supposed to comment and not disect the story and its characters. Sorry once again.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

 
@Pink - If that were the case then JKR would have lost her readers too πŸ˜› I used to wait patiently for the next book to come out. Almost 2 years for one book πŸ˜† If the readers are genuine readers then they won't give up.
 
@Red - No worries πŸ˜† I know how annoying it could get n I assure u I am keeping it short next time  Sorry but the trouble is I think too much but thats no reason to bug anyone else. I know I am supposed to comment and not disect the story and its characters. Sorry once again.


sorry but im not JKR and neither can ever be anything like that πŸ˜†

@Red, old habits die hard is it? u just said u wont think much n here again ur thinking too much? its not a habit but a bad habit to interpret thinks like U THINk and as its written. when did i say so keep ur comments short or that u bugged me 😳 did u imagined it? did i say u wont analyze the characters? i always said i liked it and i love reading long comments bcoz it means ppl pay attention to what i write. then from where its coming? 😳 u need to stop interpreting everything according to u and y the hell sorry... πŸ₯±