Hi daya, once again you caught me by surprise with updates in quick succession, goes to show your total commitment n looks like you are enjoying writing more 😉
Chap 9 & 10
It was fine investigating skills tarak displayed even when he was under tremendous pressure emotionally. Its as if he is made for this kinda job, multitasking, taking charge, bold as well as decisive. So maya remebering a few things has infact alerted tarak of other impending dangers. luckily for him baji alerted suman who could back up for the men with heavy hearts 😃
Baji,s busy linking the dot himself but unaware of the exploding events..
All converging to beat the enemy was very well penned. But throughout tarak,s dual battle caught all my attention 😊
He barely held his nerve catching ayesha at her criminal act ofcourse ably aided by dutta n the rest.
What the hell 😲 nisha is in far worse condition herself.. looks like all the damsels have decided to be in distress at the same time lol.. including the much older ladies man Mr Rao.
Baji like the other men had to give up on one person to attend to the other looming crisis, rescuing nisha. Samir too pitching has helped.
It was quiet brave for a timid nisha to jump in the water hoping to be rescued. If Baji,s one lesson can instill so much confidence then a life long partnership is more than worth it 😛 Dutta once again in the right place at the right time, to the rescue of his dear friend.
Poor maya even thou bore the brunt of the attack turns out a tuff nut n why not if she ended falling for a stone hearted man.. 😃 hmm, nakusha too caught in the crossfire but luckily she was spared physical assault .
Its embrassing enuf for maya unable to hide her feelings for tarak with nakusha n suman deciding to probe her further.., i mean people can be irritatingly interfering, all in the name of friendship ? 😆
Loved how you handled tarak,s struggle to make mends.. right from his chat with suman to him ending with a grin on his face after kissing her cheek, now thats a huge leap of faith. I was wondering why maya was acting indifferent to tarak,s presence initially (tarak,s dumbness has rubbed off on me 😆) serving him food without bothering to ask was cute, it gave him the voice n energy too lol. I think im in lov with this stubborn irrational idiot of a character myself rofl.., Maya just needed little positive signs from him n she has a lot to thank suman for without his outburst tarak would have drifted or taken ages to come to his senses. A friend in need indeed is suman who could guage from just glances n actions how tarak was affected by maya, goes to show what true friends can come to mean.
Alls well that ends well, samir too making up for his nasty past, was a little surprising, i doubt baji would enjoy too much of a changed samir 😃 unlike tarak/maya where maya leads its the opposite with this pair, nisha needs goading n assurances in takin forward the relation
Daya you pleasantly surprised me with your beautiful handling of the romantic part. Nothing over the top be it romance or violence, everything in right measure. It was just the way i wanted 😉 a perfect recipe to a blockbuster. But the biggest challenge for me as a reader was remembering all those names n their tasks, ive a huge block getting around names. But the minor hardship was more than worth 😳 knowing how the mystery unravelled. Thank you for such wonderful updates.
Actually im frustrated at my inability to express adequately my thoughts everytime 😳 (dont worry im not gonna torture u further)😉 nevertheless It was a pleasure reading n plzz plzz go ahead n pen a fitting epilogue.
More imp looking forward to your next one n i can wait as long as you promise to comeup with something, a big big 'thank you" for all your efforts🤗
Edited by -bharti- - 10 years ago
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