Jane kiss aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai;epi-pg 27 - Page 8

awesome update dear
Loved it but seriously u stopped at wrong point
Ahem Ahem that was amazing
Thanx 4 d pm dear
Eagerly waiting 4 next part
Update soon

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Nice update! Par its short! I wanna read more .. So Virat the reporter is our brand new Spiderman! He risked his life just to become famous! Crazy guy! Loved the way you have described the scene when he found Manvi! Shirtless Virat .. OMG Manvi was checking him out.. Koi usko batao k aag lagi hai building mein .. Looking forward to the next part now.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

you are such a devil to stop there
the update was tooo short common yaar plzz longer updates...
the update was good
virat is one guydying to be noticed to become famous and with the last update got to know that he is really famous after this night
omg virat removed his shirt and manvi being her audience thats interesting
update next part sooon and thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: vamps1996

hawww naak nahi dirongi tujhe to zinda khoon pi jaun gi sach mein tu na mere andar ke vampire ko bhara mat nikal devil how could u stop there sab se galiyan khaegi

acha ignoring your tadpao session im loving these almost regular updates be it this one or mirrors...so virat is a reporter intrestinggg and why i have a feeling that something is there when u said she stopped screaming maybe for a know or unknown reason well thank u to bolungi nai pm k liye so update soonnn

Jinda khun piegi... 😲 ...Dikhadi naa apni aasli rang... OMG !!!...Lagta hai jadi have to run for my life... 🤢But its true am disturbing you guys regularly with my updts... So jinda khun pina cancel... thik hai... 😃 😃...Aab mai chalti hu khushi khushi... tada...

Originally posted by: kashmirbeauty

woww

update was fab...!! n suits the title

stopped at peak...

thanks for pm

continue soon...

Thanks dear... 😃 😃...Sorry for stopping at the wrong place...but will be back soon... 😊

Originally posted by: nimi00

Wonderful update. I love it. Hopefully Virat gets out safe and Manvi too, I have a feeling the girl that was screaming was Manvi. hehe that was a very yummy scene that you left us with, is there any way you could convince the show to give us something similar? . Thanks for the PM.

Thanks nimi...😊 😊...Yeah, the girl screaming was obviously manvi... 😳...And you are right... how I wish to see virat shirtless in the show... at least once... 😭...

Originally posted by: jannat89

awesome update dear
Loved it but seriously u stopped at wrong point
Ahem Ahem that was amazing
Thanx 4 d pm dear
Eagerly waiting 4 next part
Update soon

Thanks jannat... 😃 😃 ...

Originally posted by: JESMY143VIRMAN

AWESOME, SUPERB, MINDBLOWING, WONDERFUL, BEAUTIFUL...

2 ND PART FLASHBACK HAI KYA? KYUN KE 1 ST PART MEIN VIRAT HATES MANVI, BUILDING SE BACHANE KI BATH MANVI NE VIRAT KO KISS THO NEHI KIYA NA? ISLIYE SAB NEWS PAPERS PAR VIRAT KI BAND BAJA RAHI HONGI.

PLZ UPDATE SOON... MERA CONFUSIONS DOOR KAR DO

Thanks yaar... 😊 😊... thats so sweet of you...😃...And yes second part was flashback... I had to mention that but forgot... 😕...Sollyy...And confusions dhire dhire clear ho jayenge...😉 😉Will be back soon with the next updt... tada... ba bye...