Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 6)

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Nimz14

@Nimz14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Aww both of them have started showing jealousy and possessiveness of each other. This was such a cute update!

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Ah ha! It begins!!

I don't care what Khushi claimed was the reason for her being upset over Arnav flirting, she was comparing how Arnav treated her in the beginning to his personable manner with her Di. Although she's probably too innocent and sheltered and it'll take her a while, with some help, to realize these kinds of feelings...she feels something. She definitely misses his attention!

As for Arnav...awww he was hoping Khushi was jealous. Don't worry my good man, she is, she'll just take some time to understand that! 😆 The way he felt betrayed when he thought Khushi didn't wait for him...so emotional! He is a character that feels too deeply...

The thing I'm excited about in this story is the way you made it clear that this isn't like MKM-I...and so far the characters are very different. I can see these two being attached in the future, but they will face very different obstacles. I'm looking forward to you navigating that as the author, while we see this relationship develop...

I'm so glad you're updating this again - I missed it!

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#443

love the update

in the beginning i thought it was khushi arnav was talking to then all of a sudden i read lavanya and my nose started to flare with anger and then i read khushi being jealous and i thought at least it did something good but then i read her explanation for her reaction this made me want to bang mine head to the table but then reading arnavs reaction i felt happy at least he was expecting something although he wont admit

and the end of this update was amazing loved the way arnav reacted upon not finding khushi waiting for him then seeing her with his dad and at the end when he realized she was waiting for him and the happiness he felt anyways loved the update and plzzz update soon

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bakula_gandhi

@bakula_gandhi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Both arnav and khushi have become very special to each other

continue soon

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nihasan

@nihasan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Wow wow wow an awsum update again...jst lvd it... N btw I'm
Scared nw...r u planing 4 arnav n la 2 male khushi jelous..????

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Vats your narration is so endearing that it feels just so good. I loved it as always. Kudos to you for being able to tingle our senses with such loveliness in this chapter.
The opening scene was a total fun. Khushi s thought process was hilarious. And yeah, exactly why should she call her Arnav like Lavanya di! Lavanya should be the one calling him Arnavji. :D lol..
Unacknowledged jealousy.,is it? Khushi, being her had decided would never give her heart to anyone. Ofcourse she wouldnt realize for Arnavji is her friend..
And Arnav ji doesnt know what disappointed him when he got to know her reasons..
And reasons they were. This girl is taking the reins to arrange a marriage. :D I love her! :D

Arnav accepts that he likes to see Khushi happy, no warning bells ringing though such is the hopelessness which has made home in his heart that he gives up too easily being attuned to how his expectations will always be stashed.,cynical. Hope this little encounter towards the end of the chapter plants a sense of holding on,expecting,hoping, stabilizing. Even a teeny weeny bit.

Now that their dad/bade papa is here,methinks would be he able to read between the lines? Hmm..especially observing why are there certain changes in his sons demeanor..tricky..coz they have stayed apart for quite long..dont know if that means that he wouldnt be able to guess these little things..
But then Samar is the Daddy,afterall! ;) Lets see..

Very very entertaining! :)
and yes, I totally support your decision of emailing. No second thoughts about it.. It would make it so much more easier for you..relieving of the tediousness and save time.

Edited by Anupama. - 12 years ago

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

A jealous Khushi, that was would have been a sight to see!! Great chapter, I especially loved the last part, where you showed Arnav waiting for his daily dose happiness!!!

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Hi dear thanks for updating. I am commenting even before receiving pm from you. You are fabulous dear👏 The update is awesome.

Like Arnav even I thought maybe Khushi is jealous of Arnav-Lavanya's bonding but Khushi is crazy and has other plans😉 Her plans make me realise Khushi is really very very innocent.

I am relieved that Khushi quickly noticed Arnav or else Arnav would have returned back to his old self of feeling rejected.Poor Arnav; he is unknowingly being dependent on Khushi emotionally.

I hope Arnav comes over this introvert feeling and realises Khushi's importance in his life.

Please update 2/3 times weekly. I am waiting for your updates.😃

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#449

Awww you did again yes you do it each time, your writing and this whole story, Arnav and Khushi's interactions and their thought process just make us all FEEL. Yes I felt every single emotion Arnav and Khushi were experiencing.

Khushi's discomfort with Lavanya and Arnav's easy conversation was so brilliant, yes you had us all thinking she is getting possessive of Arnav and maybe feeling jealous but alas that was not the case she was actually being possessive of Lavanya and the match making she was planning. I had hoped she would be match making Lavanya with Karan and not Arnav and Lavanya you brought this to our attention in a fantastic way. The way Arnav explained to Khushi what flirting meant and assured her that he wouldn't mind if he didn't see Lavanya ever again was so heart warming I was grinning from ear to ear.

Then we have Arnav, he is so used to Khushi's company, deep down he craves for her attention and love oh the disappointment when he noticed her missing and him getting jealous of his own Dad for he was making Khushi all happy again was brilliant. His thoughts turning sour and then changing within seconds once he realised that Khushi noticed his presence, waited for him and noticed his lateness. How these little things made him feel all wanted again was pure genious before I get carried away I will tell you again that like always I loveeed every single part of this chapter!

Thank you for updating early and giving us a wonderful surprise

PS. About emailing if it saves you a heap of time then I would say go for it, I for one wouldn't mind if you switched to emaiing whatever is convenient for you! Do let us know though so we can PM you our email address :)

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manis

@manis

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#450

cute!!!!

cant wait to read more :)

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