Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 6)

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amina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

Firstly I thought that khushi is jealous but...
Well Khushi is khushi... Loving the story...
Waiting for the next... :)

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Kamala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

In the beginning of the chapter, I thought that in Season II, your plan was to make khushi realize her love first, but u surprised me when she revealed the reason for her irritation.

Khushi's character is so adorable. However, I am bit upset of Khushi's physical condition . Khushi and the limp is something, which is hard to accept cause the character Khushi in the serial had such an impact on me. I cannot imagine ever active Khushi which we used to see in the serial as handicapped.

However, I love the way u narrate the story. The thoughts of Arnav, his frustration and confusion are narrated so perfectly. Waiting to see an envious Arnav, cause jealousy will make Arnav realize his feeling to Khushi.

Is there any chance to get a frequent update? Because the wait is long as I am so much engrossed to this story.

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karsvinu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

Nice one A!😊...So arnav has included her in his routine life..so much that he started feeling bad when he didnot find her in hall when he came back home...n also doubted that she was using him coz there was no one at home all this while...good it got cleared...the jealously part was good...thought khushi must be thinking she felt like this coz she was planning to get together lavanya n karan... may be she really got jealous but doesn't know it yet..😊

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namita11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Even I am disappointed finding the real reason
That girl only knws to care for others

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Newbiesoapfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Beautiful story!!! I always admired your work... waiting eagerly for the next update.

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sanam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#466

i just cant explain how much i love it awesome update

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#467

Bee-yoo-tee-full chapter. Very little action but I thought emotionally, this chapter is a huge step in the story. I good step! Khushi feeling a tad bit jealous of Arnav and Lavanya's camaraderie.. she might not recognize where her displeasure stems from but it was very much there. Her feelings for Arnav have taken root, that is clear!

And then there is Arnav, I have always maintained I really sympathise with this guy - he has suffered a lot in his life thanks to which he has serious abandonment issues. It took him less than a minute to feel hurt, unwanted, used.. a feeling he is sadly quite familiar with. But this time, its different. Khushi and her affection are here to stay... It may take him a while to let this feeling of belonging seep into his being, but I am waiting for the day when she will wash away all his insecurities.

And strangely, today, his this very uncharacteristic sensitivity towards Khushi's mood did not ring any warning bells in his ever vigilant mind. Acceptance had silently started taking its roots. Yay! Now that is something big, isn't it?

Lovely update dear, this story keeps getting better and better!

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Tiramisu_coffee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#468

That was a short but very sweet chapter!! Loved their insecure sides!! Looking forward to lotssa 'dhak-dhak' n unreasonable temper tantrum moments!!!

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--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#469

Hey you.

Welcome back!! :D

Chapter 12

I loved the update. And like always, I loved what you haven't said, but yet stands out.

How Arnav is not used to people being there for him, being concerned for him. Caring for him. How to not feel left out, he dismissed them as not necessary.

So, till date, Arnav does not pretend. He does not show his emotions because it's more comfortable that way. and because if he loves, he gives it his all and his mother's betrayal is too deeply ingrained to allow him to make what he thinks is a mistake, again. Like they say, once bitten, twice shy.

I love how you have made Arnav different for Khushi. Everybody liked her, loved her. She was everybody's favourite doll. But with Arnav, he saw her and liked her, for her. Not because of the handicap, not out of pity, not because she looks pretty, but for her.

Khushi caring for Arnav was so sweet and poignant. The fact that he is an adult, perfectly capable of taking care of himself does not seem to present itself to Khushi and cares for him, takes care of him.

Love how she made sure that eats, sleeps and stuff, on time and properly. That scene in his bedroom was so adorable.

Love the pomegranate episode. Was so cute. Especially the did too, did not.

I love how he is turning around. How he is thawing. How he slowly realizes that family is not just limited to his mother, but consists of people better than her, who like him and treat him well, for who he is and not for what he represents.

Khushi is simply adorable. You can't help, but fall for her. But I like how you have not even mentioned love and yet that is there between them. But what over rides that, is their feeling of friendship.

Having missed out on a lot of stuff during his childhood, Arnav comes home early, to listen to Khushi, to hear her talk. He is letting her in and she realizes that and so, she makes him a part of her family, her inner circle too, for she realizes what it means for him.

She also makes things better between father and son, again, just by being herself. She is adored, loved for who she is.

For she is quite literally, Khushi, both ephemeral and permanent.

Brilliant update. I loved it.

Please update soon.

Waiting!!

Thanks for the PM..

Edited by --BumbleBee-- - 12 years ago

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mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#470

hey

good to read from you again sorry read two at once been busy

but absolutely fantastic updates subtle changes in behaviour and had laughed off at lavanya arnav karan khushi comedy angles it was fun

but seriously when you revealed khushis physical disadvantage i for one was not happy ...though i am not that vain to think all about being perfect its just that we see many things for real and some dreams are good for fiction i was not sure how this story would continue to be interesting there in lies the sucess of the story though you mention sometimes it is out of my mind that there is something of that sort because you made her so endearing that i have no apprehensions this one is beautiful heart rending and shows your maturity as a writer thanks for such a lovely story..it has romance practicality love of a family issues within oh theres plenty of everything

when khushi starts scolding arnav i thought she was jealous but funny she is thinking that she is watching out for her chachu ...

looking forward to read more...