Originally posted by: risingsea101
This was soo cute
Adorable, just adorableI just loved thisLove your stories :)
Originally posted by: irock321
<font size="2">The last bit was just beautiful! I literally felt touched! I can't wait for my own xD LOL πBut first gotta get married!!βΊοΈI really loved this OS! I think you should write one where Ahsan is in it too and show the mother-son bond and instead in Asad's point of view. That'd be adorable too!</font>
Originally posted by: aashiqua
"Sure Sweetie!" Asad replied,
shoving his cell phone and car
keys in his pocket and going
down on one knee to tie his
daughter's shoe lace. Zoya smiled
through her tears as Asad's voice
from the past resounded in her
ears, "Zoya, the day I will go
down on my knees for another
girl, will be the day I will tie a
shoe lace for our daughter!"
yaar..i am smiling bt ma eyes teary..i love al ur works bt dis wil b very close to ma heart...d little zoha and asad...cute and lovely...dis made ma weekend..thnks 4 dis
Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
A gr8 work
I really enjoyed reading it
Sorry for short comment as my exams are going on and I am inactive
It was sooo cute
Asad and Zoha π
oh my ! SO glad to have you back after such a long looong time.
where had you been ?...
Awwh, you converted this into an AsYa filled OS too ?! Loved it as much as Loved on Arnav and Khush. sniff* though, I must admit .. that'll still be # 1 for me ! followed by this version ..
Have told you before and I'll say it again ... as to how much I adore these family oriented OS's of yours , and even on AsYa ! sniff* that last phrase :')
..I still remember the tearful and SO stunningly written masterpiece of an OS on ArHi where their daughter gets married and how hard was it for Arnav to let go. would love to see an AsYa version on that . that version of them is still golden to me, oh .. how much I miss them.
and yes, I've read this a countless time on ArHi and have it once again on AsYa !
...
Just fantastic ! :D wooo !
& I'll comment here while I'm at it, your 'Destinies Interwinted' was just fab. missed it tremendously .. glad you updated. the non-updates were making me crave for them, and alas , you gave us a long update. so thaanks. Do update sooner if you can now. <333 !
Originally posted by: sweetshera
Awe this is just so sweet. Awesome os. Luv Asad's bonding with Zoha.
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