What Comes Next? a TaaRey ff

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey u all taareyians..im new here n i hve read alot of ur ffs n ss's on tr..gosh such good writers n all!! so i decided to experimnt n write my own ss on taarey..well its nt as good as u guys's bt i tried..pls do cmmnt n if u guys liked it den i will continue 😃
p.s: sorry abt my hindi grammar..im weak in dat section..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Story bg- its been a few days after taarey break-up..Since den taani has been really responsible n only focuses on her job as d gs..rey is really happy wid his plan working n taani taking d steps towards her goal n aspiration in her life..n NDC quarter finals r cuming up..all d characters r d same but swayam dosnt knw abt d real reason of taarey's break-up

In d classroom

*d3 gang chilling n doing masti bt one guy sitting in d corner is feeling restless n kept his nazar at d door...he den took out his cell phone n texted d diva out of desperateness*

Guy- yaar who abhi tak nahi aayi..pls Sharon, swayam se pucho who kaha hai..pls!

*Beep beep Sharon rai prakash's cell phone rang..she saw whu d text ws from n looked at him from d corner of her eyes..he signaled her to read d text n reply asap*

Sharon (to herself)- yeh rey ko kya ho gaya..yeh mujhe text kyu kar raha hai??

*she reads d text n slightly smiled thinking abt hw her best-frend ws so in love n looked like a little restless kid wid his cute pout n his longingness for d girl he truly luvs..She replied d text

Sharon- gosh rey tum kitne cute lag rahe ho pout karte hue!! Ahahaha..n b patient dear..woh aati hi hogi..sabar ka phal meetha hota hai u knw :p

*rey reads d replied text n frowned...he den signaled Sharon to ask swayam ASAP..sharon smiled n turned to swayam*

Sharon- uumm swayam..tum aaj akele aaye ho collge..

Swayam- akele? Nahi toh..i brought my dhano too u know

Sharon (alarmed)-dhano?? Yeh dhano kaun hai?? Swayam (smiles)-arrey dhano..my love my pyaar..my perfect little CYCLE!

Sharon(relieved) ' oohhh u mean dat cycle..dhano?? gosh how DM swayam 😕

Swayam ' DM ho yah job hi ho..she is perfect d way she is..n uske saath toh mere bht acche-acche yaadein judewein hai J

*SwAron den reminisces about their moments spent together on d bicycle..thode-thode LLHH happening between dem..den rey coughed n Sharon came back to her senses*

Sharon- actually swayam I ws askng about taani..whre is she?? Who aayi nahi abhi tak?? Swayam ' oohhh taani..haan woh actually vp sir ne usko bulaya hai toh she will join us later..she might not attend d class..kyu kuch kaam tha??

Sharon- nahi nahi..im just asking like dat only

*Sharon den texts rey about d same..just den d bell rings n d lecturer enters d class..after wat ws like d longest hour of math class, d bell rings n d3 gang goes to d canteen*

Vicky- yaar kya class tha..so boring!! Thnk god its over..ab lets do peth puja!!im very hungry..

*As dey were deciding wat to eat (typical d3 gang..lol) taani enters d canteen..rey noticed her frowning-irritated wala face n wondered watsup..*

Tanni(ignoring rey)- hey guys..

D3 gang ' hey taani!!

Neha- taani where u were? Aaj tumne class bhi miss kardi

Bharat- haan aur tere shakal pe barah kyu baje hai?? Vp sir se watt lag gayi kya??

Swayam- bharat chup..taani kya hua hai?? U look annoyed

Tanni ' haan guys woh main abhi vp sir ke cabin se aayi hun..unhone mujhe GS ke duties ke saath saath, baby sitter ka bhi duty diya hai!! :/

D3 gang- kya??

well dats it guys..chapter 1 done..if u liked it den pls commnt positive ya negative..criticism is welcome here n will do my best to improve 😃

Edited by forever18able - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

hehehe i'm first

but sry i wil unres aftr my xam 😊

do continue it soon its awesome
Edited by radhu-taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey welcome to IF
Superb starting, I love restless Rey lol. He is getting so impatient not seeing his Taani.
U did a wonderful job, plz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohh freak babysitter nw dats gonna b awesome 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natasha.

Hey welcome to IF
Superb starting, I love restless Rey lol. He is getting so impatient not seeing his Taani.
U did a wonderful job, plz continue

hey thnx!! i thought no1 wud like it..bt thnk u so much..will continue soon..yeah i too love d restless rey 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: patie

ohh freak babysitter nw dats gonna b awesome 😃

thnk u..glad u liked it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: radhu-taarey

res


hehehe i'm first

but sry i wil unres aftr my xam 😊

do continue it soon its awesome

congo to b d frst..lol..thnx so much..glad u liked it..will continue soon 😃 btw all d best for ur exam 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

Unres

Amazing loved the ending n rey restlesstoo seee taani update soon :)
Edited by ajaved - 12 years ago

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