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Posted: 12 years ago
So sorry for the late comment !
Never Imagined Them to be like that !! 😭 😭
Bhaiya-Bhabhi Plan Zindabad !
Can't wait for the next update !
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awsm stry interesting n luvly stry
haaye i luv taarey n want thm back plzz giv thm n
i hate tht karan but now i want taarey plzz giv thm
thanks for PM n keep sending me PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 13

Loved it to the core..
I cant describe in words how I felt after reading this..
TaaRey's FE Moment..
The way Rey consoled her..
And His Confession was out of this world..
Loved it dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 14

That was so so heart breaking and emotional...
You made em cry soo much today..
Gosh!!!Plz. taaRey ko ek kardo...
I cant see them separate now..
the way they were crying..
Plz. plz..
And whats the plan..
I am really eager to know..
Plz. Update soon, dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional n heart breaking update...
plzzz update soon...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys!! sorry im late wid d update bt it took me so much time to wrte dis one coz i wanted it to b perfect! bt i dnt thnk its good enough..im sorry if i disappoint u guys..well here's d 15th chapter
Chapter 15

*swayam explains d "taani manao" plan to ShaaRey..as he ws explaining the plan, Sharon's face glowed wid excitement bt rey ws still nt sure abt d plan*

Sharon - omg swayam!! Dis is such a good plan!!😳 Wow..i ddnt knw dat u cn do planning n stuff! Im in!😃

Swayam - thnx Sharon 😳 rey u in?

Rey - no way..no yaar swayam..dude I lost taani bcoz I made dat stupid plan n nw u want us to execute anthr plan?😕 Nahi..hum kuch aur sochengge bt nt dis

Sharon - rey dis plan is nt like pehle..i mean we r nt scheming or actng or lying to her..dis plan is good..we cn show her hw much u luv her, hw much u need her,hw much she needs u..n we cn relive d moment of TaaRey! Dis is a very good plan😃

Swayam - yes rey..sharon theek keh rahi hai..dis plan is totally diffrnt from ur break-up wala plan! I cnt promise u wethr dis will work or nt bt rey we hve to try..at least one last time..i cnt let u guys throwaway ur love n be sprated! I knw u guys r meant to be n u guys deserve each oder!😃 So pls rey..one last time to win back ur love, to win ur taani back! So rey..u in?

Rey(smiling) - im in! lets do dis 😊

Sharon - yey! Lekin pehle lets tell d team abt d plan n we hve to execute it by tmrrw night!

Swayam - yeah ok..lets go

*ShaReyAm leave d RH n met up wid d d3 gang..swayam dn explain d whole plan to d gang n dey were ever ready to help..dey decided to execute d plan tmrrw night since den, d collge wud b empty n dey cn use d place for d plan..as d D-day arrved, rey got really nervous..he prayed to god dat d plan wud work n he wud win her back..as night came, d d3 team were gttng ready n swayam ws gven d responsiblty to bring taani to cllge*

At TaaYam's place

Swayam - taani uummm woh actlly..uumm😕

Taani - kya hua bhai? Aapko kuch chahiye?😊

Swayam - woh..haan woh actlly taani..i forgt to take my file collge se toh file lene chalein?😊

Taani - file? Kaunsi file bhai?😕

Swayam - woh..uuhhmm..woh haan..dat file jo vp sir ne diya so dat we cn make dat presentation

Taani - arey bhai..aap tension kyu le rahe ho..aap bhool gayye ho dat im d GS n so im always prepared..maine woh presentation bana diya toh no worries😉

Swayam(thingking) - oh shit..ab main kya karoon..evry1 must b waiting for us..soch swayam soch😕

Taani - bhai

Swayam - haan?

Taani - woh actlly main khaana banana jaa rahi hoon..aapko aaj kuch special chahiye khaane mein?

Swayam(idea!) - nahi taani..aaj kuch mat banao..woh aaj na mujhe bahar jaake khaana khaane ka maan kar raha ha..toh lets go out n eat..its been too long since just d two of us had gone our n spend time..i miss my sister😃

Taani - aawww bhai..hw cute..okok den main tayaar hoke aati hoon..bt whre r we gonna go bhai? Haan traders(name of a restrnt) chalte hai..i luv their food😃

Swayam - arrey nahi nahi..i knw dis new restrnt just near our collge..its really good! So lets go dre

Taani - bt bhai..😲

Swayam - chlo chalo..get ready

Taani - uumm..okay

*Swayam den mssges d team dat dey were cuming n TaaYam left for collge..as dey reachd d collge..*

Taani - bhai aapne toh bola tha we r going to a restrnt near collge..lekin hum toh collge hi aagaye😕

Swayam - arrey actlly restrnt andar hai

Taani - kya?😲 Bhai yeh sab kya chal raha hai..restrnt kya koi collge mein hota hai? N koi bhi nahi hai yaha..pls lets just go sumwhre else..

Swayam - arrey taani..u just follow me..chill..actlly I wanna show u sumthng..pls follow me andar

Taani - bt..😕

Swayam - pls taani..just come wid me

*TaaYam enters d collge n swayam leads taani towards boys locker room..taani ws really confused on wat ws happening..y ws her brother taking her to d boys locker room? N it ws really dark too! Suddenly d light tuned on n taani cud see rinni standing n wearing taani's clothes! She ws walkng n out of nowhre Amar,wearing rey's clothes, bumps into rinni n his face changes to an angry one..den rey's voice cud b heard from d intercom*

Rey - Yaad hai taani..woh din jab hum pehli baar mille the..ur frst day at collge n u came to d boys locker room..we bumped into each oder n I blasted u off coz I thought u were sent by d gang..ur my weirdly cute taani..jo aapni krishnaji se har cheez share karti hai aur jo humesha girti rehti thi..jo aapne aap se hi baatein karti thi n jo sabka khyaal rakhti thi, especially mera..i ddnt knw dat I wud fall in love wid u den bt I do knw nw dat jab hum mille the, tabhi humara love story tumhara krishnaji ne likh diya tha..me meetng u in dat locker room was d best thng dat cud hve happened to me taani coz widout u im incomplete

*as taani ws listening to wat rey ws saying, tears started streaming out from her eyes..at frst she ws confused on wat ws happening, bt nw she realized dat dis ws all a plan made by dem for her..she started remembering abt d time wen she entrd st.louise collge, her goal to find rey n marry him, d frst time dey met each oder in d same locker room n also d way she ws memsmerised by him n decided dat she wud do anythng to make him fall in love wid her..her thoughts got disturbed wen d lights were turned off n swayam usherd her towards d terrace..d place ws decorated beautifully wid lights n she cud see Neha, wearing d blue suit which she wore on her frst date wid rey! N Vicky was sitting next to her wearing rey's clothes..dey were sitting against d wall n in d same position like TaaRey were sitting on their frst date! Den rey's voice came bck to life n cud be heard again*

Rey - humari frst date yaad hai taani? Issi collge trrce pe..sabse chup kar..mujhe woh magical din abhi bhi yaad hai..tum itni jyada pretty lag rahi thi wid ur blue suit aur jab tumhare zulafein ese lehratewe tumhare gaalon pe aayathe toh u were looking so beautiful..uppar se tumhara woh sharmana n tumhari woh pyaari si smile..i miss ur smile n ur sharmana..i miss u so much taani! I want us to go on dates again n iss baar I promise u dat main kabhi late nahi aaungga..aur I promise dat humari date trrce mein nahi hoga bt will b in some place special..just u n me..i love u so much taani..i luv u..

*taani ws still crying..she started remembrng their frst date..she remembrd hw she ws so nervous at frst bt excited too..hw rey ws looking so handsome in his yellow jacket..hw her heartbeat raised wen he carressd her face to remove d few strands of her hair from her face..she rememberd hw she poured her heart out to rey..she trusted him n told him evrythng abt her life n also d truth abt shivam..Then they sat in each oders embrace n enjoyed their romatic moment wid each oder..Taani ws den again ushered towards d RH as she enters d RH, she saw Simmi warming up wid nil helping her*

Rey - yeh RH taani, humare bht saare memories judiwi hai iske saath..some good n some bad bt wtvr it ws, I spent it all wid u..our dance sessions, warm ups, dil se re dance, our romances,our masti, misunderstandings, fights, gvng tashan looks, bt most importantly dat day after bb practice..u misunderstood me bt den u told me dat u trust me n will always support me..i felt at peace wen u told me dat..fir hum bht kareeb aagaye the taani aur maine realize kiya dat I luvd u n I luv u still..issi RH mein maine woh break-up ke liye nataak kiya tha n im regretng d whole stupid plan..im sorry taani..im sorry dat u cudnt understand u n ur saapne..im sorry dat I tried to cnge u..im sorry dat I broke ur heart into a million pieces..im sorry taani..im really sorry..i shudnt hve made dat stupid plan..tum sahi keh rahi thi taani..relationship mein only love is nt enough..trust aur commitment is very important n I broke ur trust..im sorry taani..im sorry..

*Taani had enough of all dis..she cudnt take it anymore..her tears kept streaming out from her eyes..as she ws abt to leave, d d3 team entrd RH n usherd her towards d main hall..dre she saw rey standing on d stairs wid tearful eyes..taani wants to leave from dre bt she ws blocked by the team..nw she ddnt hve any choice bt to face him n listen to wat he has to say*

Rey- taani pls..bas ek baar suno

Taani(crying) - rey pls..main kuch nahi suna chahti..pls let me go😭

Sharon - taani just listen to him

Simmi - yes taani..just dis once

Vicky - ek baar sun toh lo usko kya kehna hai n y we did all dese

Swayam - yes taani..u hve to listen nw..warna we wont let u leave

Taani(crying) - bhai 😲fine ok..rey aapko aur kya kehna hai?

Rey(descending down from each step as he talks) - taani humne yeh sab kuch kiya just for u..i want u to remember d sweet moments dat we spent wid each oder! I want u to realize dat wat we hve is so special taani! Our love is so special..pyaar bht mushkil se milta hai taani n wen u find it, u shud nt throw it away! I cnt let dis happen..i cnt let u walk away from my life..my life is nthng widout u..im nthng widout u..we shared such good moments wid each oder n I dnt wanna end dem..i still wanna make new magical moments wid u! u said dat our love has always made us walk a step behind n always made us weak..bt dats nt it taani! Our love has always made us strong..wen ur dre wid me, I feel like I hve evrythng n life..u complete me..ur d reason for my evry breath..god has sent u here wid a purpose n dat is to love n be wid me forever..taani pls, u cnt do dis to us..to taarey..ur wrong wen u said dat u hve closed my chapter from ur life n u cnt handle both career n love..coz aggar tumne close kiya hota na den abhi tak tumhe mere presence se koi farak nahi pada hota..u still care for me..ur heartbeats still increase wen I come close to u just like mine does..n taani we cn juggle career n love! I will b dre for u in evrystep of d way n wen u fall I wanna b dre to ctch u..

*he comes down n stand infront of taani..he took her hand onto his n said..*

Rey(teary eyes) – taani..i really do love u so much!😭 Watvr I did ws so stupid n im ready for any punishment bt pls, mere se durr mat jao..pls come bck to me..rey is nthng widout his taani..pls taani main tumhare bina nahi reh sakta..i love u so much taani..ur my soul n my life..pls taani come bck to me😭

Taani(crying n hittng rey) - pehle toh pyaar kiya..fir mujhe chod diya..fir mujhe itna sataya! Aur ab u want me bck? Aap seriously bilkul pagaal hai..pata nahi kya kya karte rehte ho..aur yeh break-up wala stupid plan..kya aapko kya lagta hai ki aap bht mahaan ho? u cn do anythng u want? Mujhe malum hai rey jitna main suffer kar rahi thi break-up ke baad, aap usse double suffer kar rahe the..aapne sab kuch kiya bas mere liye..aapne apne bare mein bilkul nahi socha..aap itne acche keise ho sakte ho rey?? Uugghh..i just hate u rey! I hate u!😭

Rey(hugging taani n crying) - bt I love u taani..i love u😭

Taani - I hate u..i hate u..i..i..i love u! I love u too rey..pls dnt ever leave me again! I cnt handle d pain anymore..i cnt handle u leaving me..main marjaunggi rey..i love u so much 😭 n dnt u dare to even thnk abt makng any stupid plans ever again! If u do den Im gonna kill u myself!

Rey – I promise I wont ever leave u or make any stupid plans again..i promise taani..luv u

*as taarey hug each oder wid tearful eyes, d gang cheered for dem..dey were dancing n hugging each oder..dey were so happy bt d happiest person ws swayam..he ws glad dat nw d problems r solved n his sister n best frend r togthr again..he jumping in happiness n hugging evry1*

That ws it guys..maine pehle bola tha dat its bad 🤢 im sorry guys bt will try to improve next chapter..do commnt n hit like if u guys liked it 😕

Posted: 12 years ago
ress..🤣
unres😭
mai res krte time rofl kar rhi thi but after reading😭 😭 😭 😭

i was just going to sleep jab aapka p.m aaya...😭

maine socha kal padhungi but then i thought to readit abhi😭

mai bhi kya boling😡

coming to the update it was uaaannn :( uaannn :(

y itna emotional update...😭

vaise hii TR k jane ka gam abhi tak zinda hai then this update😭

rula diya na meko😭

gosh i miss them so much.,.😭

it was most wonderfullest and emotional vala update😭


loved each and every part of it...

TR first meeting,First date,RH-saari yaadeintaaza ho gyin😭


thanks for this emotional update😭

loved it so very much😳😭

update soon😊

and dare to call my appu's update a bakwass😡

p.s-me first..but why?😡😆


love saumya😳
Edited by .saumya. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update! Loved swayams plan! It was awesome! N all dat rey said was soo nice!! N yay taarey r back!! Update soon! 😊
Edited by riachandnani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update appu .. 👏

swayam tryng to tke taani to d RH .. nysh .. !

d plan waz amazng .. ! 👍🏼

TR fyt in d boyz lockr room .. 😆
den der 1st date ... ☺️
shhho cute .. 😳

hatz off 2 amar, rinni, neha n vicky ..

rey ki speech( cnt call it a speech😆 uski feelngz) wer superb ..! 😳

last prt .. waz fabulous .. TR cmng 2gedr .. ☺️

i so wish .. d sme happened in D3 .. 😭

gang dancng in joy .. aaww ..
i thought swayam ka possessive bhai jaag jaega .. bt he also danced .. 🤣


appu plz ek baar palki mam ko ye update zarur bhejna .. taaki agr taarey ek hoe .. to aise hoe .. 😊

really excytd 4 d nxt update .. 😃

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

Edited by aditipandey.adi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was awesome part...!!!
At last TaaRey ek ho hi gaye...!!!
Thanxx for the PM...😃

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