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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Very nice
Eagerly waiting to know Rey is Kanu ka kya haal karta hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
nice chapter! love the girls going FIDA over Karan! who plays Karan?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
awesome update and thank you for the pm
loved it
please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys!! thank u so much for d appreciation!! im really glad dat u guys r liking dis ss..im still writting chapter 6 and 7 so its gonna take a while..n im pretty busy too nwdays since im swamped wid universities applications..so guys sorry bt u hve to wait longer den i expectd for d updated chapters :/ ..so sorry once again bt will do it asap :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
I think karan sach me acha nai hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am not liking Karan at present. Seems that he will put Taani i troubles. Amazing updates. Update sooon n pm me, please.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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here's d 6th chapter..sorry for d late updated..hve been really busy..do like n comment 😊

Chapter 6

Taani – tum bhai se puchoge?? Ahhahaha..ok den fine..aggar bhai ne haan boldiya den main zarror chalunggi

Karan – fine den..promise?

Taani –promise

Taani (to herself) –bhai se permission mangna,impossible..ab aegga maza😛

Karan (to himself) – accha bacchu..dekhte hai kaun lega maza..karan malhotra ko challenge?!?!ur going down taani..mere sath toh tu clubbing chale gi by hook or by crook 😉

*as classes n rehearsals ended, the boys were in d locker room washing up n getting ready to go home..as d guys were talking, karan was listening outside*

Vicky – yaar kya mast rehearsal kiya tha na humne..ab toh NDC quarters mein faar dengge

Nil – duh hum humesha toh farte hi hai..accha guys aaj Friday hai!! Lets do something fun 😉

Vicky – BOYS NIGHT OUT!! Baccha party sab log aaj raat ko swayam ke ghar mein milte hai 🥳

*karan den enters*

Karan – arrey swayam ke ghar pe toh Mr.shikhawat hai na..i mean swayam's dad..toh tumlog waha pe night out karna chahte ho??😕

Bharat(silently to Vicky,nil n amar) – arrey bhai log, waha pe uska hitler baap hoga..humein kuch karne nahi dega🤢

Swayam – tumhe keise pata dad waha hongge?? Who toh business trip pe gaye hai

Karan – arrey nahi uncle aaj raat ko wapas aarahe hai..taani ne bataya tha

Nil – toh guys night out cancel??😭

Karan(looking at rey) –uumm well u guys cn come to my place..

Rey – koi zaroorat nahi hai😡..night out hoga n u guys can come to my place..toh bhai log aaj raat ko party mere ghar pe

Swayam – arrey karan tum bhi aasakte ho..

Karan – uumm nahi nahi its ok..u guys carry on..i have some plans wid my frends

Rey(to himself) – salla chipku..har jagah pohoch jata hai..pehle taani se chiakta hai fir humare baatein sunta hai, n den tried to save d day by being d hero..thank god he is not coming

*karan den leaves n meets d girls in canteen*

Karan – hey girls

Girls – hey kanu!! Lol

Karan – u guys can call me karan 😊 accha toh girls aaj Friday night hai..no plans??

Simmi – no plans..we all r very tired so we r going home🥱

Sharon – yeah..kal bhi hai na rehearsals so we have to get a good night sleep

Karan – oohhh 😲..well I thought tumlog ka bhi koi girls night out ya koi sleep-over hoga like d boys..dey r partying tonight rey ke ghar pe

Neha – boys party having?? Woh bhi humare bina??😡

Simmi – boys humesha ese karte hai..dey never include us😭..chalo hum bhi party karte hai..will show d boys ki hum bhi unke bina party karsakte hai

Rinni – haan aur weise bhi itna time ho gaya we nevr have sleep-overs anymore

Aashi – toh Sharon ke ghar mein types?😃

Sharon – ok girls..i dnt mind actually..aur taani ko bhi bulate hai

Neha – haan main call karti hun

Karan – arrey girls..woh actually taani bohut busy hai n she promised me dat we r gonna go watch movie n hang out tonight..toh tum log party karo..have fun

Sharon - ok den..lets go girls

Karan (to himself)- gr8..nw clubbing ka plan on J let me inform taani..actually I will go to her house n give her a surprise..weise bhi swayam n tauji waha nahi hongge..swayam boys night out ke liye gaya hai n tauji went for his business trip 😉

*while d girls r all at sharon's place, d guys r at rey's place playing video games n doing masti..karan goes to swayam's place to give taani a surprise..he rings d door beel n taani opens d door*

Taani – kanu tum yaha.. itni raat ko?kya hua??😲

Karan – god motti..nt again..tum na humesha pareshaan hoti rehti ho bina baat ke..wat, I cnt come to meet u??

Taani – haan bt its so late! Bhai..

Karan – mujhe pata hai dat swayam is in rey's house for boys night out aur tauji parso wapas aarahe hai from his business trip..toh chill..actually I came here tonight to pick u up😃

Taani – kya? hum kahin jaa rahe hai?? Inti raat ko? Bhai nahi..

Karan – motti aaj raat ko hum club jaa rahe hai..n worry nt abt swayam coz I hve askd for his permission n he said yes..toh tu mere sath jaa sakti hai..i won d bet :p

Taani – kya?? bhai clubbing ke liye mann gaye?😲

Karan – u underestimate me so much motti..accha ab lets nt waste time n u go n get ready

Taani – ek second..i knw my brother well.. r u sure he said ok for dis? Abhi main unko fone karke puchti hun

Karan – arrey motti yaar..abhi ur gonna disturb him..pata hai aajkal d dance team r like so worried n tensd for NDC toh aftr a long time d guys r hvng boys nigh out who bhi rey ke ghar pe..abhi tu usko phone karegi aur disturb karoge..fir rey ko ek aur bahana milega tujhe niccha dikhane ki..u want dat??

Taani – nahi..ok fine fine..par kanu mere pas kuch nahi hai pehene ke liye aur main kabhi gayyi bhi nahi hun club..toh main

Karan – yaar motti yeh le (he hands taani a gift wrap box) mujhe pata tu yehi bahana degi..its a dress inside..i want u to wear it J ab chal ready hoja..mere frends waha wait kar rahe hai humara

Taani – umm par kanu main yeh..

Karan – oh god taani..go n get ready pls..n u promised na

Taani – fine fine..ek minute mein aayi

Karan – ok..if u want I cn help u😛

Taani – shut up kanu..aati hun

*taani den changes n wear d dress n heels dat karan gifted..as she ws cuming out of her room, she ws stumbling all over n kept pulling her short dress..oh n dress looked like dis

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It ws a simple dress bt taani ws looking hot n stunning😊

Karan – woah!! Taani tu ekdum totta lag rahi hai👏

Taani – kanu yeh kya hai..bht choti hai..aur yeh picche ek window type..n d heels r so big!! Main seriously gir jaunggi..im luking dumb 😕

Karan – stop being so conscious motti..Seriously tu bht acchi aur hawt lag rahi hai..n u won't fall coz main hun na tujhe pakarne keliye aur weise bhi aaj tu nahi giregi lekin saare ladke girengge tujhe dekhke..ek dum flat 😉ab chal

*taani n karan reach d club..dey dance, party n for aftr a long time taani felt happy n alive*

Taani – omg kanu! Mujhe yaad bhi nahi hai last time main itni free kab thi..na koi tension na koi stress

Karan – i know yaar..tu naa aaj kal itni stressd ho gayi hai..isiliye I thought y nt we have some fun pehle jeise 😊 accha nw lets do some shots! Chal🥳

Taani – nahi nahi..pagal hai kya..bhai ko pata chala toh I'll b dead! Aur main sharab nahi peeti

Karan – motti ek shot se kuch nahi hota..dekh mere saare frends kar rahe hai..n it will b fun..aur weise bhi yehi hai time experience karne ka..hum ek hi baar jeete hai aur ek hi baar marte hai..toh seize d day!😃

Taani – haye krishnaji..tu aur tera filmy dialogues..accha ok bt only one shot just to try🥱

Karan – woho!! Dats more like it!!

*as taani n karan party, tauji tries calling taani but she forgets her fone at home..tauji den calls swayam*

Tauji (worriedly) – swayam taani kaha hai?? I tried calling her fone lekin who utha nahi rahi aur ghar pe shuklaji bol rahe the kit um dono ghar pe nahi ho..itni raat ko kaha ho?😡

Swayam – woh actually papa hum saare boys rey ke ghar mein hai aur saare girls Sharon ke ghar mein..i guess taani fone lena bhool gayi..abhi main Sharon ko call karta hun n will tell taani to call u back

Tauji – accha accha..nahi nahi let her be..usko enjoy karne do aapne frends ke saath..lekin bas usko fone karke puchlo ki woh kesi hai n all..aur usko batao ki main kal aaraha hun

Swayam – toh aap aaj raat ko nahi aarahe ho?

Tauji – nahi main toh parson aane wala tha lekin ab main kal aaraha hun..bas usko bata do

*swayam den calls Sharon to talk to taani*

Sharon – par swayam, taani toh nahi hai yaha

Swayam – KYA??😲 par tumlogo ka sleepover party hai rght??

Sharon – haan par taani ddnt come..woh actually bahar gayi hai karan ke sath

Swayam – wat? Tumhe keise pata??😲

Sharon – karan ne hume bataya ki dey both had plans so taani won't come

Swayam – I cnt blve dis..usne mujhe bataya bhi nahi aur abhi ghar bhi nahi pohochi😡..sharon I'll call u bck

Rey – dude kya hua? Tu itna gussa mein..ab kya ho gaya?😲

Swayam – taani Sharon ke party mein nahi aayi..woh karan ke sath bahar gayi hai aur abhi tak ghar wapas bhi nahi aayi

Rey – wat? Bt its so late! Whre cn dey go itna late..mayb karan ke ghar?

Swayam – ek second let me call karan

*he calls karan bt no1 picked up..he den tried calling karan's house bt drew s no answer too*

Swayam –shit no answer.. rey im sorry dude bt mujhe chalna chahiye..im really worried for taani..pata nahi kaha hai woh..itni raat ko..

Rey –relax swayam.. yeah ofc I understand..main bhi chalta hoon tere sath

Swayam – nahi yaar u wait here..tera party hai tu enjoy kar

Rey – no ways..i cnt enjoy nw..let me just come wid u

D guys –aur hum bhi aarahe hai

Vicky – humne sab sunliya aur hum bhi aarahe hai..will help u swayam

Swayam – par guys

Nil – no buts yaar..chalo lets go

Rey(to himself) – tum kaha ho taani? I know dis is all bcoz of dat Mr.watvr..i shud hve watchd over u..abhi pata nahi tum uske sath kya karrahe hoge itni raat ko..im gonna kill dat bas***d!! Aggar woh mere hath mein aaya na toh use main chodungga nahi😡😡😡

*all d guys assemble at swayam's place..dey looked evrywhre for taani bt in vain..dey went to karan's place bt no1 ws home,dey went to collge bt it ws allrdy locked..so dey decided to wait for taani's return..rey ws pacing round d living room waiting for taani..he saw d time n it ws allrdy 3 am..as d time passes by, his imaginations grew n his fear grew*

Rey(to himself) – god yeh dono kaha hai?? Subah ke teen baj gaye hai..woh log akele..nahi nahi rey tu yeh sab nahi soch sakta..taani ese hai hi nahi yaar..lekin kaha hai wo log..aggar kuch ho gaya..shut up rey just shut up..taani ko kuch nahi hua hai..b positive..aapne liye aur swayam ke liye u cnt thnk like dat..pls god taani ka khyal rakhna 😭

*just den a car screetching n laughter ws heard from outside d door..d door den opend*

Taani(giggling) – hahaha..oh god kanu tumhare dost kitne funny hai!! Aur mujhe toh bht maza aaya😃

Karan – hahahha..i know I know..thnk god u had fun today😳

*taani n karan den realised dat dey had company..all d guys were just staring at taani n her changed self..dey ddnt even recognize dat it ws taani at frst..swayam just stood up n walked towards karan..he den hit karan whu fell on d ground while whinning*

That is it guys..hope u liked it..will upload d next part asap..dnt forgt to commnt n hit d like button 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
hey meri padosan...hehe =D
finally update kiya... =)
and it was really cute...
and ab taani ki band bajegi...*sigh*
but lookin forward to rey's reaction...
update soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Superb just loved it ...
N ya thnx for pm n do pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
karan u r soo dead...
nw swayam n rey wont spare u...
superb update

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