SwaRon OS:Unmasking The Love..SwaRon Rainy Romance - Page 5

hi deep sorry i don't know your name...awesome os yaar...so hot yaar...i am in swaron dreams😳

tumne kah ki defrent yr toh aage kk bhag hai :P :P 😆😆Edited by nature2 - 10 years ago

nice one...

res for me

Unres

Deepie what was that what was that???

You wrote a HAWT freaking HAWT OS😲😲😲

OK when you told me you are going to write a Rainy romance I thought it would be SwaRon dance in rain and we made the banner accordingly but I never knew 😲😲😲 This is going to be like this😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

The OS was beautiful.Your writing skill added extra beauty in this OS.
Lovely work.The way you used the words for describing SwaRon love making scenes were amazing.Commendable job.😳😳😳
Loved it

Love,
Anindita


Edited by AninditaTanHa - 10 years ago

AWWW. <3

wow amaging start di 👏 . I so love the way u describe how swayam nd sharon look.

In this os u care all the small thngs.
Like swayam gv sm atitude to his ad. Nd sharon thnk she can't behave lyk a dnse tenjr.
I really apricite the way u describe two difrnt chrktr who attract towards eachother.
Lyk Sharon hv sm feelings which she can't deny.
Well what can do she hv a hrt who beat fr sm1. Who wanted to go close to him.
Bt a glamrs diva did not obey her heart what sharon did all the tym.
Nd cm bk to swayam he is all tym majnu ovr tht glamrs grl.
Bt still u beautyfull describe how he try to convence his innerself tht she can nvr be his.

Bt still they can't stop themself frm droling ovr each othr.
Well what can they do akhir dil to dil h vo pagal.
Nd they go clos to each otr.

Nd ur confessing line took my heart.
"I don't want you to regret this
Sharon...don't do this...I won't be
able tolerate if you consider this
as a mistake...this is the only
dream my heart has
weaved...since I have seen you
for the first time...All I have
dreamed about is to keep you
close to my heart...
I won't regret this...my every
dream has started and ended
with you...since I have met
you.."
i so luv ths lyn i read it 100 tym. Itna ke mughe yd ho gya.

Awsum update yaar...!!! juzz luv it deepika...!!!
UR juzz

 A fab writter..!!! <3

waiting 4 ur next update...:D
😉 😊
n the theme , banners and th concept of Bollywood was just brilliant 
Keep it up sweethart..!!Edited by anandita - 10 years ago

Loved the os ...
In the begging I was like awww they are just so adorable, stealing glances and fighting their inner selves...
I am sorry I read only till the scene where Swayam lit the candle, I didn't read further coz I knew what would be coming up and that I would not be comfortable reading it.
So sorry... 😒
Well, I have only one word do describe this os and I think it will be the perfect word ' BEAUTIFUL ' * or should I say " khubsurat "   😉 *Edited by --coco-- - 10 years ago

WOW! You're an amazing writer Deepika! Loved ur way of writing n imagining SwaRon in suc a romantic OS is simply put of d world!! Too good. Keep writing n do PM me frm d next time ;)
PS: I might respond lat but I DO respond :)

WOW this is such a perfect OS which is brilliantly written.👏