SwaRon OS:Unmasking The Love..SwaRon Rainy Romance

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

logged in to IF after really long just to get the link of this OS for a friend and cundnt log out without reading this ☺️

deeeppp its awesome

i knw that u knw but IT IS AWESOME to main kya karu

GET BACK TO WRITTING YOU😡 😡 😡 😡

Okai no gussa request only

plz resume writing deep 😒

swathijaan i love you for giving her this challenge🤗 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

hello deepika di...🤗
hmph..atlast i am commenting after reading your OS for 25 times (that is NOT an exaggeration)..
you know i admire and respect you very much through your works..
i mean im speechless after reading this OS..one of your many brilliant works..
the challenge was quite familiar but the way you executed it..my god..it swept me off my feet..
the concept of swaron being actors was unique and gave the desired effect to your work..
the song sequence was very beautifully done..the way you described every minute detail was pleasing to read..
and i must applaud your language..the similies and metaphors you used enhanced the beauty of your work..
your OS proved to be a very interesting english lesson for me..😆
and the vanity van part..☺️i better not comment coz i am not in a state to..
a fabulous piece of work di..loved it to the core..

love
nishi..😃

P.S. thanks a lot swathi di for giving this challenge 🤗..god bless you for this..

P.P.S. i think you should seriously consider publishing your works in a collection..😳

Edited by Nishi.Kss - 11 years ago