Arhi: Valley of Flowers #4 Chapter 24 pg 133 - Page 105

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the awesome update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful chapter ...beautifully written..

Hope he finds her soon...safe and sound
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: msin



Baba I give up... I was talking about twin sisters...who are humshakal reminded me of the original golmaal... 😉Not about the love stories..even I have heard of real life love stories being very aww worthy.. As they say fact is stranger than fiction...😊


But Arnav and his dad had similar taste in women... That I have to say..
Khushi mausi was quite similar to her in looking..


There's is nothing to think kavi u have to start a new dreamy story as soon as this finishes.. U have a gift for natural romances do nurture..


Arre Megh ...

pehle boldeti ki you are thinking of golmaal :-) I wouldnt have bored you with Anil Kumble's love story 😆



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Posted: 12 years ago
THREAD 5 KA TIME AA GAYA ! 🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Can I just hug you for this update????? Beautiful and looong update...😊... I can't believe you really cleared every single misunderstanding s 'through this one update...
Hope arnav will find out khushi soon...😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have been on vacation for last 3 weeks with limited Internet so this is now a combined comment.

You have created such multi dimensional characters and explained them so well that there are no black and whites but all shades in between. Arnav and his insecurities due to his past and Khushi's apparent betrayel 5 years ago, Anjali who was totally overlooked by her mother and forced In to a loveless marriage with Shyam, Shyam and his obsession, Sharda with her pride and arrogance who decided to play god with her son's life, the catankerous Buaji and timid and self effacing Garima and Spineless Akash and Payal and self serving Mama and Mamiji.and dignified and loving Nani...it is very easy to understand their motivations and actions.

I have absolutely loved the deep, passionate, enduring love between Arnav and Khushi that you have written so beautifully. The nuanced relationship is such a Perfect blend of passion and love. Their pain at being unable to communicate with each other openly and Khushi's torment at the hands of Shyam and her fate was so painfully depicted that I was crying at her helplessness.

Now you have revealed all to Arnav and he is finally putting the pieces together and realizing how much he is loved by this girl/woman. Perfectly done. I am so eager to see what happens next.






Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shona136

👏god i was away a month...i come back, and i see not only 5 chapters...but 5 maha brilliant passionate, awesome, revealing, blasting updates...!!!


i guess i m too overwhelmed to write anything on all these 5 updates... i simply dont have enough words to express my feelings...i am elated, excited, relieved, overjoyed and many more... i hope you understand...as brilliant were the extreme passionate updates in chap 21 22, as wre the nerve wracking, nail biting, emotional, rollercoaster type revealing chaps of 23 24 ... i am finally at peace that arnav knows what inner turmoil our little khushi has had all these times, when he was busy finding new words and ways to taunt and hate her for leaving him five years ago... hell the poor girl held a F5 tornado in her heart all this time...

just cant write much, i am flustered , crying and overwhelmed with so many emotions...and i must tell you i had tears of joy, sorrow rolling down my eyes through the time i was reading chap 24...that was quite something...


now i just hope khushi is in the valley of flowers in dehradun where arnav khushi for the first time felt they were meant to be each other's...the paradise fillled with flowers, witness to the beginning of hteir eternal love...the catalyst in their pure innocent relationship...just make arnav realize she is there and soon...and you know what...as an ardent admirer and a regular reader of your story I DEMAND A BIG BIG BIG BIG CHAPTER 😉😛, where i truly want to see khushi venting it all out in front of arnav...not just arnav going saying sorry, and khushi saying its okay, we are fine and i love you...the girl needs to get all these out of her heart for gods sake... i myself feel so claustrophobic reading her condition, what must she be going through then?? please i want her to get it all out of her...she should tell arnav what she went through allthe time he taunted her, hated her, where she could not try even to get the truth out of her but just suffer in silence and love him unconditionally...i wish to see arnav listening to all khushi has to say from all this time...of course not a fight, never a fight, but an outburst of khushi's all held up emtions and secrets and feelings...!!! i dnt of course blame arnav, as he too was a victim of the situation...


i just love you kavi... i have quite a few favourite ff's on this forum which are very very close to my heart, and valley of flowers is one of them...i am very glad and fell blessed to have been with VOF from the beginning of its journey, i adored desert rose and dark night dawning but i feel this one is way too special for me...too too too much overwhelmed right now after reading all the 5 chapter after 20 together..never thought a fiction could get me so emotinal that i would become incoherent for sometime...you truly had that effect on me... but our arnav-khushi are not just any fiction characters are they? they are our heart and soul...they are magical...😳 cheers girl you are blessed to write something so moving and touching...desparately waiting n ow for next friday...!!!! i just wish i its another blast from you just like this and i know it will be... 👏



Thanks Shona!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update...Loved it...

Can't tell you how happy I am that the truth of Sharada Raizada came out and more happy cause Arnav did not doubt Khushi...Arnav used his shatir dimaag and found out the culprit...

Evil shyam got what he deserved...I wish Arnav would have slapped him more...He plotted and played with the lives of a lot of people leaving them shattered...

I just hope Arnav repents for hating Khushi...He did not know his mother's conniving nature hence he doubted Khushi...Now that the MU is cleared hope he finds khushi and they find a way back to each other...

Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Last two chapters were very interesting and important as well.
Arnav came to know about the brutal truth of his mom. So happy for that.
Shyam's evil deed is caught and he was handed over to police.
I was overjoyed to see him beaten up by Arnav.
But I'm really sad and concern for Khushi.
I hope she is fine. I hope Shyam didn't do any harm to her.
When Shyam knocked her room in the night, I got so scared if he molests her or not. But thank God you didn't turn the story like that.

When Arnav got Khushi's letter, I was shocked. Thanks that he also got the packet where he found all the evidence of her true love for him. Arnav is smart, that he could figure out the handwriting of the letter what Khushi gave him 5 years back. He connected the dot and find out that it's no other but Shyam was behind this.It's good that he also suspected that Khushi gave 50 Lakhs to him.

Gauri and Arun's story is pathetic. So in your story, not Arnav's dad but Arnav's mom is the culprit. It's good that Garima told the truth in front of everybody and Arnav trusted her.

Where Arnav will find her Khushi now. I'm so tensed.
Plz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg ... Everything is out in episode so does that mean u r ending this story pretty soon? Plz plz don't ... I remember u had ended ' desert rose '
Around this episode no ... But we as reader yearn for some happy days too after all this family drama deceit hurt pain n betrayal ...
But it's your story n u r doing great at it the way u r shaping it ...

Dehradun is the key place here cuz everything started here the couse of all the happenings ..., n I have a strong feeling that u r going to send Arnav there to look for khushi n he will find her there

I always look forward to read from you
Thanks

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