An extremely late res but I'll unres soon.
I can't wait to say this so I will say it now and then unres later. Even before I started reading this chapter I knew it would be perfect! And I wasn't wrong :)
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I can't imagine the turmoil and confusion Khushi is feeling right now but it does prove that Arnav is doing everything right this time. This is an uphill battle, though, so he's going to have to work even harder to nudge Khushi in his direction. I think, right now, it is the most crucial point where Arnav needs to show her that she will be happy and safe with him. That she can place her trust in him and he won't completely shatter it like he did before. One more betrayal, one more hurt and I don't think Khushi will be able to handle going back to Arnav.
Khushi, as a character, has won so many fans because of her quirks and this was illustrated perfectly when she hid under the quilt and tightly shut her eyes 😆. Like that would make Arnav forget that she was staring at him. It reminded me of the closet scene 😆.
It was so sad when she realized that they only had one month left 😭. Well...if things went her way then yes it would be one month, but Arnav plans to keep her forever.
I think what Khushi saw in his eyes is reflected in these two sentences: "I didn't deserve it then and I don't deserve you now. Yet, the shameless, selfish me is going to try and becomes someone that I hope you deserve." He can't fathom how Khushi could love him, care about him so much that she would sell her mother's bangles so that he could marry someone else. She cared about his happiness even if it meant that his happiness lay with someone other than her. And he gave her so much pain and didn't believe in that unselfish love. He's battling himself.
I don't know how you did it, but Arnav's "Why?" encompassed all the questions he asked Khushi. If you hadn't made Arnav ask each question specifically, I would have still known what he was asking. How did you pack so many emotions, so many questions in just one word?
And the best part of this chapter was when Khushi voluntarily threw herself in Arnav's arms. It was her first step towards him.
Obviously I can't say I am lost for words at the brilliance of this chapter because of all of the above 😳 but I am in love with this chapter.
Edited by Sisbamboo1 - 10 years ago
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