Arhi FF: Unforgettable. Completed!! - Page 37

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Posted: 12 years ago
I just came across your awesome ff. I am so glad I did even though it is not complete yet. I like to read ffs that are complete because I think reading one chapter in two weeks or so does not help to keep the intensity of the writing. And this is not the fault of the writers but my weakness...
I just read the chapters that you have written thus far and I want to read more I have lost the capacity to defer instant gratification I want more now...
Your story is so well written and conceived so well. Arnav arnav what can I say about this character. You have recreated a deeply flawed arnav but one cannot stop rooting for him. Yes he has been a miserable human being especially where khushi is concerned but why do I still feel so much sympathy for him? Hasn't, he suffered enough? I guess that he will not suffer to the extent of khushi's suffering and yet I am so ready for a cessation of his pain. He has had a terrible childhood .adulthood I want him to be happy. I want khushi to realize the depth of his passion both love and hate and forgive him and bring some light to his darkness I know I am going overboard but I want the arrogant asr happy finally. I cannot understand what it is about this b...d that i want him to be forgiven and have his khushi back with him. But I do not want your story to end any time soon too.
Looking forward to how the story unfolds. I do not want them to reach Delhi I want arnav to have khushi all to himself and not share her with anyone else.
Thank you for writing such a great piece of fiction.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Very well written. Saddened forASR and Khushi...reliving the pain.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arshina223

Vannji update kar do. Lol.
wating for your update.

Edit--
So unknowingly i resed for the update.

The seat belt scene was the reminder of so many memories for arnav and khushi felt a sense of deja vu.

God please don't let khushi limping forever. Ofcourse it does not matter to arnav but it should not happen to that poor soul yaar and it will constantly remind arnav of his cruelity towards her which led to this.

The possibility that she would choose payal and not him is so high as it is she feels cautious around him and he is not ready to tell her anything from the past. But we never know what you would do..will wait for the next update to know.

Oh ho she was ranting about his family in front of him unknowingly...but ta-da!! she called him arnavji. Ah!! he must be floating with the clouds ...well he was flying!

He told her the names she used to call him. Laad governer!!

The update was awesome.
Well i am waiting for them to land in delhi...will go to receive them from the airport. Lol!!!

Update soon vannji. (I will call you vannji. I like it.)


😊Vannji sounds good.:-)

ASR must be afraid that she might choose Payal. After all she did the same for her sister as him...sacrifice her own happiness for hers. And he is ever conscious of the fact that he has given her nothing to make her choose him

You can go the airport in the middle of the week. Who knows you might really meet them!:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hina69

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Finally u updated.Thanks for that.Hve been waiting for it.

Loved It.

Aww she smiled at him at his honest reply.

I just loved the way he said to her that he could hear her calling him names.

And the seatbelt part.Awesome!

And lastly he was shocked cos she called him Arnavji.So beautiful.

Plz update soon.

Thanks for the pm.



Thanks Hina. Will update next week!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: surenkal

Thank you this is a beautiful FF. After a Long time I am happy to read the story about Arnav and Khushi in which Arnav is suffering... lovely


Thanks Surenkal. Keep reading and commenting. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

sad ...hope some trace of kushi

some hope for arnav


Don't worry. There is hope galore ahead. Keep reading
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz update soon love it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Viji79

Wen I was thinking that arnav would tell hr that the people she was talking about we're his parents, I was actually stunned to notice that I had missed the arnavji. Khushi is a surprise package. She may choose to go with arnav even after seeing Payal and prove arnav wrong once again. Who knows?



At present he doesn't know what to tell her and what not...he just has to handle what she throws at him as best as he can, as he desperately tries to keep the secret...

Who knows? I have some idea;-)..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pearl.b

Fabulous update...loved the easy going convo betn arnav and khushi...Arnav reminding khushi of the names she called him was too cute n heart touching..thanks for an early update..do update soon..cant have enough of this FF. It's becoming too amazing, beautiful, lovely each passing update. Thanks


Thanks pearl!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: farheen75

Excellent update... Its still very early for Khushi to even start thinking abt getting a bit familiar with Arnav but her courage should be appreciated that she is holding herself strong outwardly no matter how wary and scared she is feeling inside... They both desperately needed this hour to just establish some kind of trust and normalcy between each other so that Khushi can start feeling comfortable in his presence.

Arnav can't get away by hiding the past from her, he has to start giving her answers at some point of time otherwise it will become a major hindrance in the way of taking things forward... The foundation of a relationship between a husband and a wife strongly stands on the pillars of love and trust and while Arnav in his desperation and guilt only want his love gir khhshi to be the only pillar while significantly ignorung the fact that for Khushi trust will come first.


It is early...Calling him Arnavji doesn't indicate familiarity...lets say for a moment her subconscious surges, especially now that arnav is trying to remind her of things...but her memory loss is not selective. Probably that is what ASR needs to think...😊

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