Khawaish...pyaar ki :(- thread 2 added - Page 20

its beautiful update

NICE PART

SONG WAS APT

part 9
nice...
i get confused with ur past present sequences so much...
cont soon dear...

hey dear I read all 8 part and they were superb yar thanks for this lovely update and pm waiting for next part

Part 10

in this part present & past continuous parallely...

Maan : tum yha US mein

Kya kr rhi ho

Geet : maan phle ye btao

Wo ladki kaun thi

Jiske sath aap party mein enter huye

Maan : tum meri jassusi kr rhi ho

Geet : maan

Kya kuch puchna jassusi hota hai

Mera hq bnta hai

Aapse puchne ka

Maan : geet

She hugged him tightly…but he not hugged her back..

Geet : maan mein yha aapse milne aayi hu

Aur wo ladki mujhe bilkul pasand nhi hai

Bs aapse chipke jaa rhi thi

Maan : geet hum dono sath mein work krte hai

Wo bhi ussi company mein kaam krti hai…jisme mein krta hu

Tumhare question khtm ho gye ho

To mein jaayu

He came out from hug….but she held his wrist…

Geet : maan itni berukhi kyun mujhse

Mein yha sirf aapke liye aayi hu

Aur aapke pass mere liye do pal bhi nhi hai

Jo aap mujhe de sake

Aapko pta hai pichle 3 month se mein aapka intzaar kr hi hu

Pr aap

Maan : geet maine nhi bulaya tha tumhe yha

Tumhara khud ka faisla tha yha aane ka aur intzaar krne ka

Geet : maan shi kha apne

Faisla mera tha

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She deeply hurt with his words …but never shown on face….

Geet : maan ek cheez mangu aapse

Aaj ke baad kuch nhi mangugi….

Pakka promise

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Maan Monologue

Aaj megha mohan ko dekhke ehsaas huya

Mein kitna galat tha

Kash mein geet ko us waqt smjh pata…

Uski chothi chothi khwaisho ko kbhi smjh hi nhi paaya

Kbhi ye dekhne ki koshish hi nhi ki…mere sabd tumhe kitna hurt krte hai

Tumne to mujhse bs kuch pal mange …

Wo bhi na diye gye mujhse…

Aaj ye jaana hai humne…

Ye zindagi adhuri hai tumhare sath bin….

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Geet : bs kuch pal maang rhi thi aapse

Wo bhi nhi diye aapne

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Maan : geet jaldi kaho

Geet : aapka ek din chaiye

Maan : geet tum achi tarah janti ho

Abhi ek bhut important project chl rha hai hmara

Mere pass ek minute ki fursat nhi hai

Ek din to bhut durr ki baat hai

Geet : hmm

He walks one step and turn again to see her…

Maan : geet tum yha kaha thri ho

Aur ab tum mujhse mil li ho

to india

She stops saying him in mid…

Geet :- maan mein abhi India nhi ja sakti

Maan : kyun

Geet : abhi mera kaam pura nhi huya hai

Maan : kaam ?

Geet : hmm

Wo mujhe interior desingning ka ek contract mila hai yha pe

Abhi wo work complete nhi huya

Mein yha abhi one month aur hu maan

Maan : hmm

Apna dhyan rakhna

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He(someone) : hey maan, why you satnding here…come lets go

.

Maan : geet mein

Geet : aap jaiye maan

Mein ab aapko bilkul disturb nhi krungi

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Armaan : geet tu thik hai na

Tera wo boy friend kaha gya

Geet : wo unke collegues unhe bula rhe the

To woh waha hai un sbke sath

Armaan : tujhe yha akela chod diya

Tujhe bhi sath le jaata na

Geet : unhone to kaha tha

Pr maine mna kr diya

Mein janti nhi achi tarah un sb logo ko

Uncomfortable mahsoos krti waha

Aur waise bhi ye business party hai

Wo apne work related baat kr rhe honge

Mein kya karungi…

In sbke beech

Armaan : geet ye tu mujhe bta rhi hai

Ya apne dil ko smjha rhi hai

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Geet : kyun wapas aaye ho maan

Khudko bhut muskil se smbhala hai maine

Dobara us dard ko mahsoos nhi krna mujhe

Jha bs aapka intzaar rhta hai

Ek jhooti umeed rhti ho

Aaj nhi to kal aap smjhenge

Jaanege geet ki zindagi bsti hai aapme

Aapki berukhi nhi shi jati maan…….

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update maan rudeness broke geet heart

nice
Maan was so rude to her
He deserves geet avoiding him now
He should also feel geets pain that she faced wating for him

maan was so emotionless. he was so rude. i don't know how can geet tolerate all this. maan should apologize for his behaviour. i felt very bad for geet. her reaction is normal. waiting for next dear.

nyc part...
apne career k bare mai sichna is not wrong... n apne dreams ko achieve karne k liye kahu i jana ya kuch karna is also nt wrong...
bt yaha maan is behaving like ki usse sirf aur surf khud se matlab hai...
he dosent care abt geet, abt her feeling...
how rude n heartless he was...
n his telling dat he din tell her to cum or wait for him wae limit...

Maan now tasting his medicine awesome