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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh maan is such a irresponsible:) lovely update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Feeling bad for geet
did not speak to her normally to o

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 10
nice part...
Maan doesnt deserve Geet...
poor Geet...
he should also pine for her now so badly...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, beautiful parts
loved them
kurban hua make me nostalgic
but feel sad for geet
maan is too too rude
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan avoided geet bcz of his work.But now he regrets.Poor geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey thanks for PM.. nice story..

geet easilymat maanna..
idiot maan...
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thanks dear
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Part 11

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Maan : ye geet kaha gyi

Party mein khi dikh nhi rhi

Maine to usse ye bhi nhi pucha

Wo thri kaha hai

Wo yha kissi ko janti bhi nhi...

Itne months usne kaise manage kiya honga

Maine to ye tk nhi pucha wo kis company ke liye work kr rhi hai

She placed hand on his shoulder and he turns, instantly take her name...

She : maan I am not geet

Waise ye geet kaun hai

Maan : shilpa, she is my friend

Shilpa : friend ya girlfriend

Aur aaj bhut yaad aa rhi hai uski

Maan : wo yhi hai US mein

Shilpa : that's great

To tumne usse is party mein kyun invite nhi kiya

Invite chodo...usse sath leke aate

Usse bhi acha lagta

Maan : wo aayi thi

Pr ab chli gyi

Shilpa : oh

Isliye tum sad lag rhe ho

Maan (think) :- pta nhi kyun

Kuch bechani si mahsoos ho rhi hai

***********

After 10 days later

Maan :- geet ka ek bhi mail nhi hai

Wo to mujhe daily mail krti thi

Pr in dus dino mein

Ek bhi nhi kiya

Geet : aap jaiye maan

Mein ab aapko bilkul disturb nhi krungi

Maan : wo kaam mein busy hongi

Isliye nhi kiya honga

Hmmm

Yhi baat hongi maan

Khudko smjhane ki koshish kr rha tha ye mann

Pr janta tha ye mann...ye bachani kyun ho rhi hai...

Kho dene ka darr tha

Pr manane ko tyaar nhi tha ... ye mann...

*********

Armaan:- now we are free

Kyun na ab US bhi dekh liya jaaye

Geet : tum enjoy kro armaan

Mere jaane ka waqt ho gya hai

Armaan : tum kya khehna chahti ho

Geet : yhi

Meri aaj ki flight hai...

Mein india jar hi hu wapas

Armaan : yaar itni jaldi kya hai

Abhi to bs work khtam huya hai

Thode din hum yha ruk sakte hai

Abhi work ki kuch formalities bhi bachi hai

Geet : wo tum manage kr longe

Mujhe mom dad ki bhut yaad aa rhi hai

Armaan : geet kuch din bs

Geet : nhi armaan

I really miss my family...

Armaan : ok

Lakin ab hum shopping pe jaa rhe hai

That's final

**************

His phone ringing continuously ...but no one pick the call...

Geet : maan phone uthaiye na

#

Maan : finally our company get the deal..

Shilpa: yes maan

Next meeting ka waqt ho gya hai

Maan : bs abhi file leke aaye cabin se

Shilpa: ok

*************

Maan : unknown number

5 missed calls

He dials the number but cut the call instantly...

Shilpa: maan phone pe baat baad me kr lena

Abhi chalo

Maan : hmm

#

His phone buzzed again but he ignored...

#

Geet : message kr deti hu

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previous part 10 on page 46

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
For part -10 Past is really pain ful.maan is really very rude to Geet.
part-11 maan I hate you first you didn't feel happy seeing her now missing her. Grrr😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
priyanka it was great part. i don't like maan's behaviour. firstly he ignored geet very badly and then he is realizing his love for her. i am feeling very bad for geet. waiting for next dear.

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