[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 108

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Posted: 12 years ago
NEW THREAD COMING SOON
Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago
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You knw wt baby.!?
I love you for everything..!! muahhh ❤️
I love your way of writing...
ur way of adding comments in between 🤣
Your way of expressing every damn emotion..!!
Everything was sooo realistic..!! *_*
contd...
I love u for making evrythn mysterious...
For creating confusions evrythn...
For evrythn nd i mean it..!!
Gosh this so damn amaaazing..!! 😉
#IMLOVINIT
Nd u knw the best thing.!?
I love ur evil twin more..!! 😉
Arre evry1 loves oly ur sweet twin... I like ur sweet twin tooo...
Bt then trust me i love ur evil twin more..!! 😉
U dint update part 26 did u .!? 😲
If so do send me the link to part 26 on fb plzzz 😆
I'm sooo sorry for a very late comment..!! *kaan pakdings 😆*
This comment was for part 24 nd 25..!!
They were the besssttt..!! ^_^
Update asap nd do pm me or send me links on fb... 🤗
Luv ya tc 😃
Edited by kushal90 - 12 years ago
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hellooo againnn this time also late but on time hahahahahaa...why u don't give the full picture everrr and there is some suspence everytime... u end your every update with suspence lol...hayeee love this naughtyyy virat want to read there present updatesss more and moreee...and about future hope the baby and maanvi both will be fine ...and waiting for next :)) and and and ...
CONGRACULATIONSSS FARIAAA COMPLETED THE THREAD FINALLYYY WOWWW CHEERSSS PARTYYY
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Posted: 12 years ago
HEY FARIA!
CONGRATULATIONS ON UR 2nd THRED
I KNOW ITS KINDA LATE BUT I M REALLY SORRY
U WRITE LONG NA SO I M NOT ABLE TO COMPLETE IN 1 GO AS IT IS I VISITED JST TO CHECK D NO. OF PMS STILL LEFT TO READ...N SLOWLY IT COMPILED INTO A HUGE STACK

BUT...FINALLY I COMPLETED READING IT R8 FROM CHAPTER 22 TO 25
THE CHAPTERS HV BEEN SO GR8
A PERFECT BLEND OF LUV, HATRED, CONCERN, COMEDY,PAIN, LONELINES,& HUMOR
THE EVENTS WERE SO WELL DESCRIBED
EACH N EVERY EMOTION WAS SO WELL EXPRESSED
EACH CHAPTER OVERFLOWED WITH ASTUPENDOUS BLEND OF EMOTIONS

FARIA U KNOW WHAT MAKES ME LUV UR FF...
IT'S NOT D CONCEPT...BUT D WRITING PATERN, THE DEPTH, D MYSTRY BHIND EACH WORD,& OF COURSE D MYSTRY OF D CHAPTERS
U HV D CAPABILITY TO CAPYURE ANYONE'S MIND N MAKE THEM FLOW ACCORDING TO N ALONG U
UR DESCRIPTIONS HELP IN PICTURISING D SCENES
N ...I REALLY REALLY MEAN EACH WORD


D MANIPULATION OF VIRAT'S CHARACTER HAS BEEN JST TOO GD
BAD BOY IS BETER DAN GD BOY

N C I TOLD IN D VERY BEGINING JEREMY IS D CULPRIT...BUT U KNOW WAT U PLAYED SO WELL THAT FOR SOMETIME I FELT NOT JER..BUT SOM1 ELSE
BUT NEVER SUSPECTED VIRAT

THE SECRETS OF MY LIFE IS TOO GD, TOO PHILOSOPHICAL N GR8 DEPTHS
SO SECRET REGARDING VIRAT IS GONNA B REVEALED SOON
BUT WAT DID UR EVIL MIND WRITE IN DAT PG WHICH LEFT MANVI NUMB
VIRAT'S FINE????
D SUSPENCE IS KILLING
I M A HELL LOT EXCITED TO KNOW
THANKS FOR PM
TAKE CARE
KEEP WRITING
UPDATE SOON
Edited by IISHITA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
love this story!!! :D read it all in one go cant wait to find out what happens next :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IISHITA

<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">HEY FARIA!</font>

<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">CONGRATULATIONS ON UR 2nd THRED</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">I KNOW ITS KINDA LATE BUT I M REALLY SORRY</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">U WRITE LONG NA SO I M NOT ABLE TO COMPLETE IN 1 GO AS IT IS I VISITED JST TO CHECK D NO. OF PMS STILL LEFT TO READ...N SLOWLY IT COMPILED INTO A HUGE STACK</font>

<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">BUT...FINALLY I COMPLETED READING IT R8 FROM CHAPTER 22 TO 25</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">THE CHAPTERS HV BEEN SO GR8</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">A PERFECT BLEND OF LUV, HATRED, CONCERN, COMEDY,PAIN, LONELINES,& HUMOR</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">THE EVENTS WERE SO WELL DESCRIBED</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">EACH N EVERY EMOTION WAS SO WELL EXPRESSED</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">EACH CHAPTER OVERFLOWED WITH ASTUPENDOUS BLEND OF EMOTIONS</font>

<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">FARIA U KNOW WHAT MAKES ME LUV UR FF...</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">IT'S NOT D CONCEPT...BUT D WRITING PATERN, THE DEPTH, D MYSTRY BHIND EACH WORD,& OF COURSE D MYSTRY OF D CHAPTERS</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">U HV D CAPABILITY TO CAPYURE ANYONE'S MIND N MAKE THEM FLOW ACCORDING TO N ALONG U</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">UR DESCRIPTIONS HELP IN PICTURISING D SCENES</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">N ...I REALLY REALLY MEAN EACH WORD</font>


<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">D MANIPULATION OF VIRAT'S CHARACTER HAS BEEN JST TOO GD</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">BAD BOY IS BETER DAN GD BOY</font>

<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">N C I TOLD IN D VERY BEGINING JEREMY IS D CULPRIT...BUT U KNOW WAT U PLAYED SO WELL THAT FOR SOMETIME I FELT NOT JER..BUT SOM1 ELSE</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">BUT NEVER SUSPECTED VIRAT</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">
THESECRETS OF MY LIFEIS TOO GD, TOO PHILOSOPHICAL N GR8 DEPTHS</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">SO SECRET REGARDING VIRAT IS GONNA B REVEALED SOON</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">BUT WAT DID UR EVIL MIND WRITE IN DAT PG WHICH LEFT MANVI NUMB</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">VIRAT'S FINE????</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">D SUSPENCE IS KILLING</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">I M A HELL LOT EXCITED TO KNOW</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">THANKS FOR PM</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">TAKE CARE</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">KEEP WRITING</font>
<font color="#006699" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">UPDATE SOON</font>



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