[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 107

Just came by to have a peek since you are alone here.

Originally posted by: NushIsh

Just came by to have a peek since you are alone here.

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Thank u for the support but I still hate being here :/ feel so lonely :/

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Thank u for the support but I still hate being here :/ feel so lonely :/

Originally posted by: NushIsh

Well everybody who loves to read this will anyway come no matter where this story is in FF forum or the EHM forum.

True that lol my story shifted in wrong time! Lol new thread new place I'm out of order ahhahahaah

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Originally posted by: virmanhus

me third😃

RES!!

UNRES!!

me third??!! may be befor last to comment..

i am in love with 'secrets of life',, it does deliver alot about virat and manvi,, especially virat.. i can figure out what virat's character is like thru this though i am not at all aware of his character as Faria the great has always kept it a suspense!

now that our lovable couple are together,, the moments thy are having are great!!

virat is DIFFERENT!! very very unique character.. the way he claims himself as 'the bad boy' is awesome!! he does repeat it and i can see he's real and not fake,, may be thats the reason manvi cannot avoid but fall for him very badly..

he's a puzzle right,, at sometimes i feel like i have understood his character 100% but most of the times his actions are very unique.. he is never crazy but his acts are..

so far,, he was a cool guy but has high 'anger issues' and is out of control wen drunk.. he was a confused soul (like me) once and then became a determined hero to get back manvi and ofcoz he did get her back after very smartly proving that he was never at mistake.. and now he's a 'lover boy',, a perfect and a different lover..

the extent of difference is he had made his girl friend to wait so long! i mean ''20 voice messages, 50 texts n 120 missed calls''.. the interesting difference is,, any other guy wud die to get his gf's attention and wud panick to hell at the thought how to passify her,, but this virat,, mahhnnn his way of approaching his love is brilliantly different and hence mind blowing... i just love this carefree and never fake attitude of virat... i can totally sense that he is always him no matter good or bad.. just loved it!!!

Fariaaa you are a philosophical queen girl!!! u made me to miss Helina's fake fiance.. mahnn the philosophies of virat and the most interesting ''that motto doesn't apply on me'' was awesome!!! this again is giving me a different and a unique virat.. i mean the way he explained manvi about expectations, demand, dissapointment, bla bla bla,, made me to think that he is a strict follower of such things may be... but his immediate action and reply for manvi of 'those things are not applicable for me' gave me the interesting virat,, the so called bad boy in him.. one thing for sure, there's no rule wen it comes to 'love' in virat's dictionary..

loved virman's almost encounter being disturbed by the poor waiter and virat telling him to 'trash the food'... lmao at the funny moments..

vihaan is such a sweetheart.. the way he predicted his mumci's bad mood is due to him not sharing his 'butterscotch' was sweet..

"eeewww no cute please... That's so girly",, he's very much like virat!!

oh my dear darling sweet sugar faria,,, plsss give dominance to your super cool good sweet twin and make my mannu's wish at the shooting star to come true... plsss

'' And when we do the same thing with our life by turning a mistake into a sin is a profane task that can't be repented.

'' today I have nothing left to run for the race called life. I destroyed the pure essence of love and I don't deserve this life. Unintentionally doing this mistake paid me back a big time and I know how to solve this matter. There is only one way n I'm heading for this way..''

owkaii Faria,, now u are freaking me out!!! wat the hell is this??? 'evil' faria on strike again??? not giving us the whole of wat he has written??!! I baaadddlllyyy wanna read it!!

this gives me the feeling that the 'one mistake' is yet to be introduced ito the story.. wat does he mean by repeating the mistake and turning it into a sin??? urghhh i think i'll loose my hair if u continue the 'suspense' game...

the fact is,, i love this.. i mean i love the way u stop the things at a cliffhanger.. its so interesting and arousing curiosity to know further.. its helping to read everything carefully.. i love to wait, understand and then cherish things.. so cant praise u and scold u at the same time for giving this suspense torture!

manvi's reaction after reading and recalling the incidents is not sounding that good! especially her numb gone body, her tears and her 'no' are disturbing me..

i dont want anything bad to happen to manvi and virat..

i still am looking forward for virat's return and virman's life together forever ( if ur evil twin is laughing at this,, give her a kick)

virat is missing, manvi's life is at risk!! can this get any worse???

u are teasing us vt the 'teasers' of their moments together aren't u??? sooonnn give them fariaaa,, u shudnt make us to yearn for those moments

one best thing about the teasers is i got the news clear that they are married!!!! ''oh then shall I do it in ur filmy way? Like "manviiio yesss finally we are married?? Wohooo??"

was jumping at this u know!!!

EXTREMLY SORRY FOR THE EXTREME DELAY... PLSSS FORGIVE ME!!!!!

thats it,, done finally and looking forward for more turn of events

get going!!

I know I have kept virat's character as secret but no worry from next chapter U will get to know the real virat :)
Try to give him a different touch but don't know if will live upto the expectations or not.. Trying something new :p
Anger issues ahem he got that one weak point which will reflect back later :p
For philosophies I have him my traits soon that will piss manvi a lot
For making her wait? Lol he DON'T HAVE ANY REGRETS just so u know ;)
Oh yes whatever mottos that will apply to manvi won't be implemented on him.. Hahaah u will know eventually

"Vihaan is like virat" lol try to make him like him but he is not his son though :)

Don't mention the sweet twin my evil twin gets irritated lol but yah from next chapter evil twin be stirring back n watch the show

Lol don't freak out not the end of the world just don't expect anything :p

Girl ur feedback always brights my day.. I just love it n appreciate it from the bottom of my heart :) thank u sooo much!! Love u XO

CONGRATULATIONS

Originally posted by: Faria12345

I know I have kept virat's character as secret but no worry from next chapter U will get to know the real virat :)
Try to give him a different touch but don't know if will live upto the expectations or not.. Trying something new :p
Anger issues ahem he got that one weak point which will reflect back later :p
For philosophies I have him my traits soon that will piss manvi a lot
For making her wait? Lol he DON'T HAVE ANY REGRETS just so u know ;)
Oh yes whatever mottos that will apply to manvi won't be implemented on him.. Hahaah u will know eventually

"Vihaan is like virat" lol try to make him like him but he is not his son though :)

Don't mention the sweet twin my evil twin gets irritated lol but yah from next chapter evil twin be stirring back n watch the show

Lol don't freak out not the end of the world just don't expect anything :p

Girl ur feedback always brights my day.. I just love it n appreciate it from the bottom of my heart :) thank u sooo much!! Love u XO

Fabulous Update Dear..

First of all congratulations for the new thread !!! :D

Finally i m here !!!! sorryyy once again for being extremely late !!!!

Part 24 part 2 _ This update was juz mind blowing Faria !! one of my fav updates !!!!! Finally the mystery resolved !!! each n every part of the update was really aweosomeee !!! the way u bring out the truth was Fantastic !!!! i juz feel like watching an superb episodeee !! could visulize everything !!!
determined manvi my god tat was awesomee man !!! the confident gosh !!! ❤️ following by a beautiful hug ❤️
eeekss !! yayyy !!! Finally that jeremy truth is out !!!! tat was smart !!! :P
Lamaao virat dhamkaing Damon !!!! tat was epic !!!😆 lol !!!
The highlight of the update eeeks the last scene !!!! ❤️ it was soo cute lovely n sweet !!!! :D the dialogues everything was juz perfect !!!
n the last part u have written was juz mind blowing !!! each n every word have deep meaning !!! tat was beautifully written !!! Fantastic update :)

Part 25 _ Faria !! wat r u upto now ???? many more things are yet to revealed !!! the more i read the more i get more engaged to ur story !!! i must say suspense wise = fabulous!! i loved the philosophical words n the dialogues is reallyyy really awesomeee!!! the philosophies u gave is juz awesomeee !!! Fantastically written !!! vihaan is such a sweetheart !!! lamaao !!! "ewww no cute plz tat's soo girly !!! Handsome will be fine !! ":P soo cute :D
the virman scenes were cute romantic n sweet !!! ❤️
but the questions is wat make manvi collapse like this !! wat had happen ???
n moreover her life is at risk !! my god !! u need to continue soon Faria !!!! supense really kills me !!!
looking forward for it !!! :) thanks for tags !!!!