~First Love With A Bad Guy~SwaRon SS - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Nice cocept
Awesome update
thanks for coming back
plz continue your other ff
 A Marriage with an eligible bachelor and dil hai tumhara

 

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Loved it 
Had awesome fun reading it 
Keep writing like this 
Thanx for d pm
Update soon will be waiting for itπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Awosm Great Start πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Very nice update... do continue and thanx for pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Hello Anindita,i am glad to see u back here...So,first and most of all..A worm welcome on IF once again.


And i am happy that u are back with new SS of swaron..So i only say..keep going and keep updating..

Now,Its new and amazing concept..i really liked it...And i know,its really interesting ahead..So keep updating...

Now moving on to chapter 1.. I really liked u'r starting here with fresh afternoon of sunday...Sharon was reading a novel...I just loved the introduction part of Swaron...Swayam as bad boy...and sharon as a poor one to deal with bad boy swayam...But i like their first meet..

Its great that swaron are enemies from begining..becoz it makes a super twist ahead...really exciting ahead...Then swayam entry part was Oosum..he is back to his home...Sharon was shoked to seeing him...After that swayam nautanki part was amazing to get back his room again...Sharon was shoked to see him dancing...Now sharon was really worried...

So,at last..its Oosum start..Keep updating and if possible then continued u'r previous FF's..becoz i really loved FF "Dil Hain Tumara"..So,keep trying to update soon...And sorry for late comment..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Amazing update
Loved swayam's entry
Plz do continue soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Yay u r back .. was waiting for u..
Aweaome concept .. waiting for the next chappy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

amazing 

loved it

please pm me when you update

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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Nice update...please pm me when u update again! πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha



Hey my cutie pie...πŸ€—

Such an awesome chapter...the beginning was en-thrilling...wooo... 

She looked towards the direction from where the shirt came and was startled to see the sight in front her eyes. She saw a tall boy, shirtless standing in front of her who was unzipping his jeans. She couldn't see his face as he was facing his back towards her.

She didn't know what to do. She started to shout at the top of her voice. The boy turned around and he was also shocked to see a girl shouting at the top of her voice looking at him. He rushed towards her and covered her mouth with his hands.


I was stunned for a moment...i thought may be some kidnapping or something worse will happen...u know very well how to keep the reader waiting for next part


The cute mischievous Swayam...poor sharon...under same roof..its gonna in fun...with ur writing skills..it will be just amazing...

Loved the update baby...


As i said ...so glad to see u back...missed u ..LOVE U 


Luv
Ur DI


Thank you so much Di for ur lovely comment and for ur kind words. N i missed u too like hell. Love u a lot πŸ€—


Originally posted by: zb456789

I m glad that you are back that to with a bang n bang on update
Fadoo wala lovely
Thanks for the pm


Thank you so much dear for ur lovely comment. I am glad u liked the update. 😊


Originally posted by: -shenz-

nice piece of work.. great fun.. loved it..


Thank you so much dear. I am glad u liked it. 😊


Originally posted by: nature2

res til read Done

 
 hurry 1 round n 100 Awosm start ani πŸ‘πŸ‘
 
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
ot mein kya boluπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
 
update soon
 
plz like on fb
https://www.facebook.com/pages/I-Dontwanna-hate-u-anymore/430515850377727


Thank you so much Neeraj.  I guess i updated pretty soon πŸ˜›


Originally posted by: Twinkle_d3

Great start...
Swayam u badmash boy..
Poor sharon ...
Waiting for nxt part


Thank you so much Saloni. Indeed Swayam is a badmaash boy πŸ˜†


Originally posted by: yogini64

cool...😊

itni si age me apna after effect.. hain?? πŸ˜²

swayam is soo irritating πŸ˜‘

poor sharon... ye to gyi kaam se... 

abhi se itna nautanki hai... πŸ˜†

roz ek nayi prank karega fir toh...😳


Hey Yogini! Yes Swayam is and will be really irritating in this SS. Thank you so much for ur lovely comment. 😊


Originally posted by: neeliyer

Swaron's intro can't get any better than this .. kinda liking the cunning nature swayam .. waiting for the next chapter .. 


Update soon..


Thank you so much for the lovely comment. N Swayam is lovable in every avatar. 😎


Originally posted by: spongy

SWARON intro was amazing

it couldnt be much better
it was just wow!!!!!  πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

liking swayam nature...  πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
it's different  πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

loved the upate nice start
intro toh aacha tha hi...

thank for the pm
please upate soon
and dont forget to pm me
waiting for the next update  πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š


Thank you much for ur lovely comment dear. I glad u liked it and Swayam is truly different here from his Majnu boy image but he is awesome in any of his avatar



Hey Tina, do unres when u get time 😊


Originally posted by: Neeti96

Di you came back to the forum and started a SS?!😲And I saw it now! Ok first of all, welcome backπŸ˜†Secondly, I LOVED the concept of your SS. Sharon and Swayam shuru se hi dushman?πŸ˜†Hahaha. Your first chapter was very well written. Initially I was a little confused but then the confusion got sorted out after his mom came in😊Seems like a fun SS. Can't wait for Chapter 2!


Thanks for the PMπŸ˜ƒ


Hey Neeti πŸ€— Thanks for ur warm welcome πŸ˜† and about the confusion part, SwaRon's meeting has to be different..right?? πŸ˜‰  I am glad u liked the concept. Thanks for the lovely comment dear πŸ˜ƒ


Originally posted by: SwaRon_rocks

Res..unres after a week..dont stop sending pm's..


Sure dear. I will keep sending u pms. 😊 whenever u get time, unres this post. N I guess u have exams. So all the best. πŸ‘πŸΌ


Originally posted by: basket_101

Heyy Ani!! :  Hope you don't mind me calling you that... :P

Hinal here (:
I got so happy to see another pm from you in my inbox :D
And once again, super interesting concept!
Loved the first chapter!
I totallly love Swayam's character πŸ˜†
Really excited to read more of the SS!
Thanks for the pm!
Eager to read more :)
Take care <3
Hinal 


Hey Hinal. Of course u can call me Ani. There is no need to ask! N thanks a lot for ur lovely comment. I am glad u liked it. Thank you 😊 N u too take care πŸ˜ƒ


Originally posted by: medhasarkar

anindita---first time i have read one of ur writings...


plzzz---do update fast fast bcoz cant wait.

loved it...and the concept---enthralling.

and hee hee sooo different from our bhala boy swayam in d3

love---medha


Medha i am glad u liked the concept and the update. I will surely try to give update as fast as possible. Thank you so much for ur lovely comment. πŸ˜ƒ N yes Swayam is totally different from his Majnu boy image πŸ˜†


Originally posted by: tanhawalaswaron

YAYYY.


it was an awesome update! absolutely! Swayam's character seems like that of Satan's child! :P
He's still adorable though. annddd. Sharon...awww poor baby will have to deal with such a devil!

SO happy that you're back!

Love,
Shagun


Hey Shagun. Thank you so much for ur lovely comment. I am glad u liked it. N is Swayam surely is a shaitan here a big time shaitan 😈


Originally posted by: ...pujan...

FANTABULOUS WORK SIS...πŸ˜› 


Thank you so much Pujan Bhai. I am glad u liked it πŸ˜ƒ


Originally posted by: --NishaGoyal--

Dii πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

missed u β€οΈ
back with a bang😎
Awesome concept..very intriguing..
i so love jerk swayamπŸ˜†
continue soon


Hey Cutie Pie πŸ€— I have missed u too dear. Thanks a lot for the warm welcome. N Thanks for the lovely comment. N yes jerk Swayam is cool 😎 πŸ˜†



Edited by Anindita91 - 11 years ago