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CHAPTER 37

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They(Kriyansh, swaron, martin , Maria, shikha ,pinky ,Aditya & Dobriyals), all reached ghai mansion.


"I am so happy for you , Kria!!" pinky chirped and hugged her


"so tum mere liye khush nahi ho??" Rey asked


"are nahi tumhare liye toh double khush hu !! you know you are more lucky to have Kria , she is a gem and mind you agar isse pareshaan kiya na toh.."


"bas bas meri maa main samajh gaya" he said joining his hands together


Pinky got a call and stopped to talk, while she was turning she bumped into Aditya whose specs also fell but thankfully glasses didn't cracked..


"am sorry!!" pinky apologized


"it's ok..!!!!" Aditya said with smile


"you are Dobriyal's lawyer right??"


"umm yes.. why??"


"agar mujhe pehle pata hota toh main tumse tumhara chashma le kar khud hi us par chad jaati" pinky said in angry tone and stormed off inside..


Aditya looked at her in bewilderment.


Ghai mansion was very huge, it had a small bar in the living room . Abhishek lighted a cigarette and placed his lighter on the table. He grabbed a glass and filled it with drink for himself, Neha also came inside, Abhishek was eyeing Neha from a long time since the court, he deliberately bumped into Neha while walking , all alcohol fell on his shirt and tie, Neha knew how Abhishek was , hence didn't bothered to say sorry while Abhishek started his pickup lines,


"hey it's ok , I don't mind beautiful lady to bump into mine, you see I am so handsome that no one could resist me..."


he went on boasting about himself..but stopped by smelling something burning, he looked down and to his horror found his tie had caught fire.


"DAD!! DAD!! FIRE!! HELP!!" he panicked seeing his tie burning with fire, still around his neck, Shivam snatched it & threw the tie in a corner .. Neha switched off his lighter and gave it back to him..


"tumne mujhe jalane ki koshish ki??" he asked horrified


"nahi tumhari tie ko" Neha answered


"meri tie ?"Abhishek shouted in anger


"mujhe iska color pasand nahi hai aur na hi tum" Neha said with full attitude.


"YOU BIT*H!!" Abhishek advanced but Vicky came in between them.


"easy dude!!" Vicky warned him, seeing Vicky at her side, Abhishek stepped back and chose to ignore . Vicky took Neha & made her sit on the sofa.

Kria felt her eyes filling with tears but composed herself, seeing her old home, memories of her childhood ran in front of her eyes. Shikha came and placed her palm on Kria's shoulder and blinked in assurance and asked "are you all right??"


Kria was about to answer but Sanjay butted in between

"off course shikha , Kria is happy , today is Sharon's marriage , how can she be unhappy? right Kria ??" Sanjay smirked to which shikha just frowned


"but I am so happy," Shivam came and hugged Sharon from behind and placed his chin on Sharon's shoulder and started nuzzling his nose on her Sharon's shoulder.. "I can't wait for my first night darling" Shivam continued..


Seeing him so close to Sharon , Kria's fingers clutched into fist while Swayam clenched his teeth and was about to moved towards him but Sharon spoke dis-entangling herself from his grip "first night? Kyun aisa kya hai jo tum wait nahi kar sakte.."


"Darling .. today is our first night after our marriage , what do you call it in hindi? ahh !! yes suhaagraat !! I can't wait to spend night with you.."


" Shivam , tumhe ni lagta ki tumhe apni so called first night apni wife ke saath manana chahiye??" Sharon smirked and sat on sofa


Everybody was seeing and listening the conversation of Sharon and Shivam, half were confused and half were trying to analyze what they were saying ,

"but Sharon beta ,ab tum hi toh Shivam ki wife ho..!!" Sanjay stated the fact


"main?? Woh bhi Shivam ki wife?? Yeh kab hua?? Aap log pagal toh nahi ho gaye??"


Now Shivam was fed up of Sharon's attitude, "pagal toh tum ho gayi ho.. pata nahi kya bole ja rahi ho.."


"chod na Shivam lagta hai Sharon ko shaadi ke khushi mein shock laga hai" Abhishek joked clumsily


"arghh!! Lagta hai sab paagal ho gaye hai!! Pata nahi kya baatein kar rahe hai?? & kya shaadi shaadi laga rakha hai and kiski shaadi??aaj toh Kria and Rey ki shaadi hui hai" Sharon shouted getting annoyed


All were confused by seeing Sharon's behavior especially Swayam and Kria.. everybody was hell confused at sharon's behaviour, Maria and martin looked at the Dobriyals , pinky and all others stood at their places.


"but Sharon today only you married Shivam , are you alright ??" Maria asked sitting near her


"oh!! Maria , am fine but I don't understand why everyone is hell bound to getting me married to this looser"


"SHARON ENOUGH!!" Shivam came near her & shouted..


"SHIVAM!!" Kria shouted at him from behind


Seeing Kria , he placed his left hand and placed immediately at his left cheek, remembering the slap he received from Kria in past, he lowered his voice.. "Sharon sweetheart why are you behaving like this ?? just few minutes before we've signed our marriage papers"


"marriage papers?? Oh toh tum in papers ki baat kar rahe the??" Sharon showed him the photocopy of the documents as the originals were still in the court..


"yeh toh !! " Shivam's voice trailed off and paper slipped from his hands

All including Sanjay found it odd , Sanjay picked papers and read it

"WHAT THE HELL!!" he almost roared and looked dangerously at Sharon..


Abhishek took papers from his hand and read it..

"what ?? when did it happened?? When did we transferred their property back?"


"this can't be possible, Aditya can you please read this papers and tell me what is written in this.." Abhishek asked Aditya to read it loudly


"well Abhishek I already know what is written in these papers, the property is back to them as it belonged to them " Aditya said coolly as if it is the universal truth.


Abhishek shouted holding Aditya's collar "you knew about this already? didn't you?? YOU BAST*RD"


"Mr. Abhishek Dobriyal!! Apne haath apne paas sambhaal ke rakho!!" he said shrugging Abhishek's hands out off his collar, I can drag you to the court for holding my collar.


Shivam flared with anger , he looked at Sharon & shouted in anger "YOU BITCH!!" and advanced towards Sharon and caught her wrist and jerked her up towards himself..


He raised his hand to slap but before he could slap her, his hand was caught by Swayam. Fire can be clearly seen in Swayam's eyes, he stood before Sharon as if protecting her and pushed Shivam in such a force that he fell back on the floor..


"Agar aaj ke baad Sharon ke aas paas bhi nazar aaye toh tum kaha gum ho jaoge yeh tumhe bhi pata ni chalega" Swayam barked


Sanjay was also hell angry, he caught Shivam by his collars and shouted "yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua hai!! Tumhari wajah se aaj aaddhi property bhi hath se chali gayi!!"


Sanjay turned to swaron and roared "mai tum sabko chodunga nahi , tum sabne mera sirf acha roop dekha hai , you'll see my bad side soon"


"Kria I'll never let you in peace..you have to deal with real Sanjay Dobriyal" Sanjay said eyeing Kria


"watch out Mr. Dobriyal, you are talking to my wife and about dealing with you , I can only say bring it on!!" Rey answered with a smirk..

Dobriyals left in anger..


Kria stood shocked at what happened just now , she was gulping the incident down her throat , Sharon came towards her and hugged her tightly..


"di !! happy married life.." Sharon gave Kria property papers and hugged her tightly..


Tears swelled up in Kria's eyes, shikha patted her back and said "kaha tha na maine tumhari parvarish mein koi kami nahi hai.."


Kria smiled through her tears..


"haww !! di aapko sach mein aisa laga ki aapki parvarish mein ..??" Sharon said breaking the hug


"nahi mai bas dar gayi thi.."


"meri di kabhi kisi se nahi dar sakti!!" Sharon kissed her cheek


Sharon went to martin ,held her ears and cutely said "sholly!! Kal raat ko maine kuch jyada hi keh diya"


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Martin smiled at her and said " ek shart par"


all looked at him..but Maria interrupted him "ohh!! Come on martin ! how can you be so rude?? Sharon is asking apology but you and your conditions.. arghh!!"


hearing Maria martin meekly said "I was just saying.."


"it's ok Maria , mujhe har condition manzoor hai" Sharon cut him in between.


All chuckled hearing martin's meek voice in front of Maria and waited for martin to say something, "mai toh bas yehi keh raha tha ki mai Sharon ko maaf karne ko tyaar hu ,but meri ek condition hai"


Maria glared at him..he gulped hard and said


"meri condition toh bas yahi thi ki woh mere pyaare kitchen mein toofaan na create kare" martin explained meekly

All burst out laughing at him and his kitchen-puraan..


"Arghh!! You and your kitchen!! Jao ab dinner bhi apne kitchen ke saath hi karna" she said glaring him and added "congrats Kria !! and Rey , am really happy, wish you a happy married life ahead, I have to go to hospital, will catch you all later" saying this she hugged them one by one and left bidding bye..


"Maria listen wait..!!" martin tried to stop her but she stormed off


"hey martin take this flower and give this to Maria, jyaada dur nahi gayi hogi" Sharon took a flower from the bouquet and gave it to him, he immediately hugged Sharon and said "oh Sharon baby you are my life savior"


Swayam smiled at Sharon's gesture, he was much more calm now.


"guys I'll meet you at home.." he hurried to follow Maria .


All chuckled at his condition, Swayam was just admiring Sharon , how she handled everything.. Swayam was very keenly noticing Sharon's expression, her eyes were telling him something which no one noticed.

"Sharon yeh plan tumhara tha??" Kria asked her,


"di is plan mein Vicky ne meri help ki, Aditya bhi unhi ka dost hai"


As soon as Sharon took vicky's name,

"OUCHH!!" all attentions drew towards the sound which was none other than of Vicky's who was screaming because Neha was pinching him on his arm..


"Ouch..ouch!! Neha tum kya kar rahi ho?? Acha am sorry na ..!!"Vicky screamed


Neha took a cushion from the sofa and threw at him "tum mujhe bata nahi sakte the ki tum itna bada plan bana rahe ho??"


Neha felt sad and sat defeated ,shikha came near her and patted her back, "Neha beta ,don't be sad ab dekho sab thik ho gaya na??"

"but aunty ab vicky mujhse baatein bhi chupaane laga hai!?" Neha complained in almost ready to cry state..


Vicky came close to her and side hugged her & said "Neha !! *sigh* baby aisi koi baat nahi hai, woh bas agar main tumhe pehle hi plan bata deta toh tum over excited ho jati and tumhe pata hai na ki tumhare liye over excitement hona kitna harmful hai"


"hmm shayad tum thik keh rahe ho.." Neha smiled and hugged him


All smiled at them, "and the plan was also very risky for Sharon to execute" Vicky added


"agar kiddo tumhe kuch ho jaata toh??" Kria said worrying


"mujhe!! mujhe kya hota? jiju hamesha mere saath the!!" Sharon said


"jiju??" kria asked


"haan R-E-Y J-I-J-U!!" Sharon said stressing each letter..


All laughed at her comment , Kria looked at Rey, their eyes locked with each other for a minute but Rey ignored her and said to pinky "chocolate!! Let's go to the office ,I've some important work to do"


"no way Rey , not today!! Today is your BIG DAY and you should go home & spend some time with your new wife, I'll handle everything at office" pinky replied in a teasing tone oblivious to their contract marriage.


"but.." Rey tried to make excuse


"no partner pinky is right ,you should take rest and spend some time with Kria" Neha suggested unknown of the fact that Kria slapped Rey at night before their marriage.. no one knew what happened at that night except martin, Swayam , Kria and Rey.


"yes I agree, you guys should take rest !! pichle kuch time se hi bahot jyada drama ho gaya" Vicky said supporting Neha.


"haan chalo mai bhi thak gayi hu.." Neha said yawning


"haan haan tum toh thak hi gayi hogi ,akhir kisi ki tie jalaane mein kitni mehnat jo lagti hai.." Vicky grinned only to get smack from Neha..


"ok guys !! am leaving .. bye everybody!! And you two have a nice time" pinky said smiling at the new couple, to which Kria blushed but Rey faked smile.


"umm .. guys I guess I should also leave" Aditya said and added "ok Vicky!! See you soon, Mr. Singhaniya and Mr. Shekhawat nice meeting you guys"


"thanks buddy, agar tum na hote toh yeh plan kabhi execute nahi ho paata" Rey said in gratitude.


"anytime buddy" He shook hand with trio, and left .


"chalo we too are going home, meet you at home" viha added


"acha bua chaliye mai aapko smriti niketan chod deta hoon" Rey offered


"arey nahi mai chale jaungi" shikha said smiling


"Toh phir mai bhi chalta hu" Rey said touching shikha's feet without even glancing once at Kria, "hamesha khush raho!!" shikha blessed him smiling


Kria looked at his diminishing figure , shikha whispered "I think tumhe uske saath jaana chahiye.." , Kria looked at shikha and smiled , she hugged her last time and ran after Rey.


Shikha turned to Sharon, and kissed her forehead "aaj mai bahot khush hu, aaj meri dusri beti bhi bahot badi ho gayi"


Sharon hugged her tightly and said "thanks bua humare saath humesha rehne ke liye.."


"acha ab mai bhi chalti hoon, orphanage mein bhi sabko khush khabri deni hai, apna aur apni di ka khayal rakhna" shikha smiled


All left but only swaron were left, they looked at each other, Sharon came forward & hesitated to say something

Swayam folded his hands and waited for her to say something.

Sharon sighed and said "I.. I..I'm sor..." but Swayam cut her in between and replied smiling "Sharon , it's ok.."


"nahi Swayam , us din maine tumhe kuch jyaada hi keh diya tha.."


"Sharon us din mai bhi gusse mein tha..and ek taraf se acha hi hua , mere aur Neha ke beech thodi duriyaan kuch hadh tak kam ho gayi woh bhi tumhari wajah se, infact thanks for that" Swayam replied trying to lighten the atmosphere..both just smiled, awkward silence prevailed between them, their heartbeat raised with every minute passing, they both liked each other but expected other one to take first step, they didn't knew whether they could call this feeling as 'love' but surely they were afraid that their feelings would show up on their face.


"I think now we can be friends, right??" Swayam said extending is hand which Sharon gladly accepted.


Their eyes locked with each other, but soon Sharon controlled herself and pulled her hand back to herself.


Sharon smiled and turned to leave .

"Sharon!!" Swayam called , hearing Swayam she stopped at her place, Her back faced him, he made her turn back by holding her shoulders very delicately , he came closer to her, lifted her chin and opened his arms slightly, Sharon shook her head in asking 'what??', he just replied by nodding his head and blinking his eyes saying 'come here' . words didn't came out from their throat but the understanding that they built during their small encounters, teasing and banters were enough to understand each other.


This was just needed, Sharon rushed forward and hugged him tightly, she hid her face in his chest and burst out crying, he kept stroking her hair and back..


"sshh..! ab aur kuch bura nahi hoga.." Swayam tried to calm her, he knew she too had been shaken from inside and didn't showed it to anyone not even Kria, she didn't want to make her worry more .


He eventually with time understood that she is a kind of a person who would show that she is happy from outside and would prefer to bury her worry inside her so that no one could see it on her face at least.


After few minutes Sharon spoke still hiding her face in his chest "swayu, woh Shivam ne.." hearing shivam's name Swayam came slightly out of hug, made her look at him and asked with concerned "usne kuch batamezee ki??" she looked in his eyes and shook her head in no, she again buried her face in his chest ,they stayed in the same position for sometime hugging each other tightly , Swayam waited for her to say something and open up.


"pata hai mai itna dar gayi thi..!!"


"kyun rey tha na tumhare saath??!" concern clearly visible in his voice


"haan woh hamesha mere aas paas hi hota tha, bodyguards ke saath"


"fir dar kyu laga??"


"wo..woh..woh kuch nahi"


Swayam lifted her chin and made her look at him

"tum mujhse keh sakti ho.."


"woh jab bhi main Shivam se milti thi ,toh uski woh gandi nazzrein..mujhe aisa lagta tha jaise ki mai..." her voice trailed off..


Swayam's grip became tighter at her waist as if protecting her from everything around, he knew what she was trying to say.


He cupped her face and kissed her forehead , Sharon closed her eyes taking in the moment..she opened her eyes and looked at him


"ab koi Shivam nahi hai, I promise main use tumhare sath kuch galat nahi karne dunga" Swayam assured her through his eyes


Sharon again hide her face in his chest as if she understood what he said in his mind..they stayed standing close in the same position hugging each other

after sometime when sharon fully calmed down , she said "swayu??"


"hmmm??"


"usne mere haath pe kiss kiya tha us din toh maine dettol hand wash se apna haath dhoya toh mera hand wash khatam ho gaya!!"


"WHAT??" he shouted but jerked her softly , he sighed and nodded hopelessly "tum kabhi nahi sudhrogi??"


"sudhrogi matlab?? Mujhe kya hua jo mai sudhru??"


"tumhe apne hand wash ki padi hui hai?"


"arey toh isme meri kya galti hai? usne mera haath pakda & kiss kiya and I felt so disgusted and YUCK at that time!! maine apna haath baar baar dhoya , and handwash khatam ho gaya" she replied cutely still holding him onto him


He got lost in her cuteness, Sharon shook him and asked "kaha kho gaye??"


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"kuch nahi woh main yeh soch raha thi ki usne us din tumhara haath pakda n kiss kiya toh tumhara handwash khatam ho gaya toh usne aaj toh tumhare cheeks pe kiss kiya toh ab tum kya karogi?"


On mentioning about kiss, Sharon remembered how disgusted she felt at that time and with a very difficulty suppressed her urge to kill Shivam at that time, seeing Sharon lost, Swayam regretted to mention about that , he felt her grip loosening from his body, he didn't wanted that, he shook her

"Sharon!!"


" Huhh!!"


"umm woh hum wahan baithe??" Swayam said pointing towards sofa as he didn't knew why he felt great by holding her in his arms but found very hard to control and restrain himself from nuzzling his nose on Sharon's shoulder and take her fragrance. her small petite body frame fitted so perfectly in his arms as if it was meant to be there always n forever, he didn't want to spoil his new-fresh- friendship with Sharon, he didn't wanted Sharon to think, he is taking her advantage.


On the other hand Sharon really felt comfortable in his arms and felt little disappointed when Swayam suggested to sit, Sharon neglected her feelings and thought she felt comfortable because now they had became friends.


Sharon just nodded in yes but felt a little awkward and they both sat on the sofa , close but at a decent distance ,they felt awkward to start their conversation after their hug.

"woh..sorry..I didn't meant you to remember all those moments.." Swayam continued


"nahi its ok.. mai toh soch rahi thi ki.." before Sharon could come up with any other fake excuse ,Swayam placed his forefinger on her lips, took her hand and intertwined them and said "tumhe mujhe koi fake excuse dene ki jarurat ni hai, itna toh tumhe samajhne laga hoon!"


Sharon just smiled and said "thanks"


They sat like that for a long time, hand intertwined with each others..

"Swayam tum mujhe shopping le jaoge??"


"shopping??"


"haan woh mujhe dettol handwash ,dettol antiseptic liquid and neem face wash lena hai"


Swayam gave a look of 'are -you -crazy- woman?'


"swayu please na..!!" Sharon asked like a kid..


"Sharon listen to me, chahe Shivam ne ya kisi aur ne tumhe kabhi bhi touch kiya ho ,tum hamesha pavitra rahogi, tumhe kisi bhi handwash ya antiseptic liquid ki koi jarurat nahi hai..!"


Sharon just got lost in him, she tried to read his eyes but her cellphone rang which was enough to wake her up, it was Neha's phone..she picked her phone ,fingers still intertwined with swayam's.


"Sharon are you inside the house?" Neha asked


"huhh!! Haan main aur Swayam ander hi hai"


"toh tum logo ne door kyu band kiya hai??" Neha shouted like a maniac


"Door band kiya hai??"


"aakhir kar kya rahe ho tum dono akele ander?"Neha again shouted


"WHAT ?? no Neha aisi koi baat nahi hai, hum toh bas baithe hai yaha and door humne toh .. ek min" Sharon looked at the door of ghai mansion and added


"Neha ghai mansion ka door toh open hi hai"


"ghai mansion?? Tum abhi bhi ghai mansion mein ho??"


"haan woh mai aur Swayam aa hi rahe the!!"


"jaldi aao yahan problem ho gayi hai"


Sharon cut the call and turned to Swayam

"Swayam!! Hume ghar jana chahiye, lagta hai kuch problem ho gayi hai"


"problem??"


"ha Neha ka phone tha, hume waha jana chahiye"


They headed towards their car..

Outside their home


Viha, Kriyansh and Martin stood in front of their house, Rey didn't even glanced at Kria, Kria looked at him, she tried to talk to him but Rey didn't even face her , swaron soon joined them


"Neha tum car mein jaakar baith jao , tum thak jaogi!!" Vicky suggested


"tum toh chup hi raho, mai kab se yaha khadi hu & tumne door ab tak khola kyu ni??"


Before Vicky could become Neha's victim , swaron joined them

"hey what happened?? Why all of you standing outside ??" Swayam asked


"wait I might have keys in my purse" Sharon said searching for keys in her purse


"Sharon, door is not locked, it is closed from inside!" Vicky informed


"WHAT?? Lagta hai koi chor ghuss gaya hai, we should call police" Sharon suggested


"no Sharon! Its dadaji & Dadima inside" Martin said


Swayam's face hardened, "WOH LOG YAHAN KYA LENE AAYE HAI??"


Swayam's sternness was unexpected to Kria and Sharon, others knew that Swayam was upset with his grandparent and was not even in talking terms with them and it was Rey who would always try to bring Swayam and his grandparent always closer as Neha always craved for parent's love, he won in convincing Swayam to let them meet Neha from time to time but Swayam never let them closer to himself. He would never talk to them , never say any word to them.


They even asked Swayam to live with them but Swayam refused, after meeting Rey and Martin they were convinced that Swayam was in good company & is happy with them, hence they also didn't forced him to be with them but yet they wished Swayam could live with them..


Due to Rey's insistence and little emotional blackmail Swayam's grandparents were allowed to visit them . Neha and Rey liked them and they also never differentiated between Rey , Martin and Swayam, they would treat them as their own grandson..hearing about Rey's engagement and marriage date from Vicky , they came to wish them all the way from India.

"Dadaji Dadima??" Kria asked in confusion


She looked at Rey for an answer but he looked away, she frowned


Martin came beside and side hugged her

"they are our dadaji, Dadima and now yours too"

She smiled





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"and don't worry Rey will be normal soon" he whispered in her ears.


"JAB TUMHE PATA THA TOH TUMNE MUJHE BATAYA KYUN NAHI??" neha shouted holding martin's collar.


Seeing her in this avtaar Martin got scared, he looked at Vicky for help but Vicky enjoying the moment just shrugged his shoulders, Martin looked at Neha and gulped hard but managed to answer her "woh tumhe surprise dena chahte the.."


Hearing of surprise Neha shouted in joy and clapped her hands like a small kid "yayyy surprise!!"


As she was jumping , Kria warned her " Neha sambhal ke ,aisi haalat mein tumhe uchalna kudna nahi chahiye!!"


Neha stopped jumping and saw Vicky glaring at her ,she looked at him and said "sorry!!"


Soon door opened, two elderly but fit figures greeted them

"Dadima!!" Neha jumped with joy.


She was about to rush inside but Dadima stopped her,

"Rey and uski wife ko chod kar sab andar aa jao and be careful, make sure not to sabotage the rangoli and don't let 'lota' fall!" she instructed


They all could see a really beautiful rangoli at the entrance of the door on the floor and a 'lota' filled with rice placed in between the rangoli.


"Dadima aap yaha?? Maine aapko kitna miss kiya" Neha said hugging Dadima


"maine bhi tumhe bahot miss kiya"


"Dadima yeh Sharon hai, Kria ki behan" Neha introduced Sharon


"Namaste!!" Sharon said sweetly


"jeete raho beta , humesha khush raho" Dadima blessed her


Dadaji and Swayam looked at eachother but Swayam said "I've some work to do , I'll meet you all later"


Before he could go Sharon pulled him and said "offo Swayam ruko na !! kaam baad mein kar lena"


"but'"

"tumhara kaam tumhe chodkar bhag ni jayega.." saying this Sharon held him tightly not letting him go anywhere..


Swayam was left with no option to stay back..and kept looking at his hand where Sharon held his hand. All looked at their hand, Sharon saw all looking at her ,she traced their look and immediately left Swayam's hand feeling embarrassed.


Dadaji and Dadima looked at each other and shared a knowing smile.


"aap ab aa rahe ho??" Vicky said in complaining tone breaking their trance.


"hum toh pehle hi aa jate lekin yeh tumhare dadaji hai na sab inki wajah se hua" Dadima complained


"haan haan pichli baar flight toh maine hi miss karwayi thi na ?? padosi ke ghar pe besan ke ladoo kaun maangne gaya tha??"


"acha !! sab meri wajah se?? Agar tum roz dibbe mein se chori chupe ladoo nikal nikal ke nahi khate toh woh kabhi khatam nahi hote, Maine kitne pyaar se baccho ke liye banaye the "


"arrey lekin' !!"


Kria chuckled at them, Swayam maintained straight face.

"ahem ahem !!" Rey coughed gaining their attention


"guys agar aap logo ka ladna ho gaya ho toh hum ander aayein?" Rey asked


"arr.. Rey beta tum ruko ek min"


"lao idhar do puja ki thali" Dadima took thali from dadaji


After marriage, Kria-Rey were stepping 1st time in the home...So they were made to stand outstand for a while until the arrangements of their 'griha-pravesh' were done...


Dadima came with a 'pooja ki thali' along with neha n Sharon carrying a thali of 'alta'...


Dadima performed their aarti & asked Kria to gently stroke the lota with her foot & step in the alta thaali...


Along with Rey she stepped in their house..


'Thats our indian tradition ' Dadima beamed happily..


But as soon as Kria remembered contract, her face saddened..

these rituals are like blessings for the newly wed & here she felt like cheating on them too but felt really happy to be a part of it.


Rey noticed her gloomy face & understood the reason...

'damn Can't even console her..Screw your stupid mind for acting fake- angry Rey' he cursed himself...


"Now carry Kria in your arms" dadaji ordered Rey..


"WHAT??!?" everyone shouted not believing that out of all, he would say that...


"mujhe kya purane khayalon wala buddha samajh rakha hai? Arre, main zamane ke sath chalne me yakeen rakhta hun" dadaji retorted back..


"wah wah dadaji too gud.." Sharon clapped happily & Swayam smiled at her..


"aur court me ja kar love marriage kar sakte ho.. Yahan apni biwi utha kar ghar me lane me sharm aa rhi hai" dadaji mocked..


"LOVE MARRIAGE??" Kriyansh asked in confusion..


Vicky mocked "arre, Rey kya tu itna natak kar raha hai.. Ye bhi apna new tradition hi hai.. Chal utha Kria ko"


"arey naya nahi purana tradition hai.. maine is budiya ko uthaya tha na, mujhe aaj bhi woh din yaad hai!! Meri kamar akad gayi thi!!"


"kya kaha tumne ?? mai budhiya?" Dadima glared at dadaji


"arey nahi tum aur budhiya?? Nah!!, tum toh meri mumtaj ho" dadaji said buttering Dadima.


Sharon really found them cute and chuckled seeing them

Neha teased "han han partner , jaldi karo na.."


everyone suppressing their laughs waited for Rey's action... Rey turned to look at a shocked Kria, he bit back a laugh & got a glare in return..


"Fine..." he said & picked her in bridal style in a swift movement like he is a pro in this..


She wrapped her hands around his neck for support..She knew he would be quick, 'jerk'


"smile please!!" Sharon stopped him from walking ahead & got busy in clicking pictures in their 'oh-so-romantic' pose..


Kria blushed & asked him through her eyes "put me down"


Rey raised his eyebrows asking "hmm??"


"Reyansh neeche utaariye sab dekh rahe hai" Kria whispered


Rey was about to make her stand but Sharon chirped


"jiju hold on!! You both look so cute with each other"


*click*

Sharon clicked their pic in the same pose..


"chal ab bahu ko living room tak le chal" dadaji said


He glanced at the beauty in his arms, she wore a beautiful red sari, looked like an angel, She fitted perfectly here, & her adorable face, her bright eyes, tiny nose, quivering rosy lips..He forcefully pulled himself out of his thoughts, before he would lean & do something he shouldn't do..


"uff... You are so heavy.. Poor me" he gave her a disgusted look..


"good for you" she smirked & pulled more into him, trying to make him feel heavier weight than before, 'dare you call me heavy again..' least did she knew, her face was more closer now n she aroused him more than before...


"Rey kya kar raha hai?? Be in character, don't give into her so easily"


He groaned & walked faster & made her stand in hall, ignoring all requests from Sharon... He just wanted to keep her away, damn he was restless now..

Everyone clapped as he finally completed this ritual..


Kria turned to dadaji and Dadima & touched their feet , dadima kissed her forehead and said "bilkul chand ka tukda hai, dudo nahao puto falo" Dadima blessed


Kria touched dadaji's feet "khush raho, Rey maan na padega ki teri pasand hai bahot achi" dadaji complimented


"chalo acha hua jo Kria ne isse shadi kar li warna toh pata nahi kis gori ko pakad lata" Dadima said


"arey kya matlab Kria ne mujhse shadi ki, maine Kria se shadi ki hai!"


"chal chal jyada apne aapko important mat samajh.." dadaji said making face


"kya karu Dadima mai toh aapka wait kar raha tha but dadaji aapse pehle hi shaadi kar chuke, toh mai kya karta" rey said dramatically



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"chup kar badmaash" Dadima twisted his ears


"arey sorry mai majak kar raha tha"

All laughed at his condition


"ab ho gaya hai toh , mai chalta hu office mei bahot kaam hai mujhe"


"arre bhaag kahan raha hai abhi to rasmein shuru hui hai" Martin caught him by arm & made him sit with Kria who was chuckling on his grumpy face...


"oye chup chap baith idhar bahu ke paas, kya office office laga rakha hai"


Kria very well knew why he was eager to go , he wanted to go away from her, she felt sad.


"are jaane do ise waise bhi kal reception hai, kal bhi office ki chutti karni padegi" Dadima suggested


he sighed in relief & turned to leave "Rey ruk mai bhi chalta hoon tere sath" Swayam said accompanying him...


Martin brought coffee for everyone but juice for neha


"yeh kya hai??" mujhe nahi peena yeh mujhe bhi coffee chahiye!


"Neha tumhara yeh juice peene ka time hai and tumne tablets li??" to which Neha nodded sheepishly, Vicky shouted "WHAT?? Tumne abhi tak?? he gave her a dissapproving look but didnt shouted in front of all. they all sat , Kria found dadaji Dadima very sweet and lovable, dada and dadi made kria to sit in between them


"so Kria beta aur batao ki ghar mein tumhare kaun kaun hai?" Dadima asked unknown to the reality that she is all alone but Kria didn't felt bad , she replied meekly.


"ji main aur Sharon hi hai, ek accident mein mom and dad ki death ho gayi thi"


All became silent but dadaji broke the silence.

"Kria beta don't worry we are here for you, chalo ab kuch aur baatein karte hai!! Tumhari Dadima toh bas boring baatein karti rehti hai.." dadaji said lightening the atmosphere


"tum toh chup hi raho, I am sorry beta mujha nahi pata tha.." Dadima said


"arey nahi Dadima , aap mujh se kuch bhi puch sakti hai, aap ka haq banta hai"


Kria said smiling..

"acha ab hato mujhe Kria se kuch important baat karni hai" dadaji said making everybody quiet


Kria looked at him, he side hugged her and asked

"acha Kria beta tumhe khaana banana toh aata hai na??" dadaji asked


"fir toh fikr not dadaji , di toh world ka best khana banati hai" Sharon said clapping her hand.

Dadima smiled at her.


" fir toh theek hai ,Is martin aur tumhari dadi ne mil kar mujhe boiled and tasteless khana khila khila kar mera jeena dushwaar kar diya hai, ab agar mujhe kuch khaana hoga toh Kria ko hi bolunga, beta banaogi na mere liye?" Dadaji asked


"ji" Kria said sweetly


"Acha !! toh humne tumhara jeena dushwaar kar diya hai?? Hai??"

Dadi said getting angry


"dadaji hum toh bas aapki sehat ka khayal rakhte hai" Martin said cockily


"ha ha ha !! dadaji aap toh bhul hi jao acha khaana Kria toh mere peeche padi rehti hai, yeh mat khao and yeh khao" Neha said like a child


"sach mein!!ab toh Kria hamari team mein hai" dadi beamed with happiness


"koi baat nahi dadaji!! Mai aapki team mein hu" Sharon said taking dadaji's side


"tumhe bhi khaana banana aata hai??" dadaji asked sweetly


Martin gulped hard, Vicky blinked his eyes twice

"nahi but kaun kaun se area mein acha khaana milta hai , woh mujhe pata hai" Sharon said proudly

All burst out loudly


Seeing it sharon felt little low but dadaji said

"fir toh hamari khub jamegi!! Waise bhi bahot time se main date pe nahi gaya,is budhiya se shadi karne ke baad toh bilkul bhi nahi,from now onwards you are my girlfriend,right girlfriend??"


"sure boyfriend !!" sharon replied happily


"lo ab tum bachi ke saath date par jaoge? I tell you Sharon yeh date pe bahot bore karte hai..inse acha toh woh hamare padose mein mishra ji rehte hai na unke saath date mein jaane pe mazaa aata hai"


All looked at Dadima with "hawww" including dadaji.


Dadaji stood up to go to his room.

"ab tum kaha chal diye??" Dadima asked suppressing her laughter


"tumhe kya padi hai?? Jao tum us mishra ke saath hi date pe jaana" dadaji said getting jealous and added "Sharon beta we will now definitely go outside for date" and stormed off to guest room.

Sharon giggled at him.


"dadi aap sahi mein ..?? I mean..mishra ji ke..saath.. date pe..??" Martin asked hesitating


"are nahi maine kab kaha ki main mishra ji ke saath date pe gayi thi, woh toh mishra ki patni bata rahi thi .. main toh bas tumhare dadaji ko jara jala rahi thi"


All burst out laughing listening to it and Neha was loudest of them..

Dadima hi-fived with Neha.

they all talked for some time and retired to their respective room to take rest as in evening small party was arranged only for close friends like shikha, Maria, pinky and Aditya were invited..


Kria was about to go to her room but Dadima said "Kria tumhe ab apna saamaan shift kar lena chahiye Rey ke room mein"


Dadima left to guest room.

Kria totally forgot about that, she thought as everyone knew about their contract in the house, she doesn't need to shift her things but now since dadaji n Dadima are here and they are oblivious to the situation , she have to share room with Rey ..


Viha smiled at eachother , Martin too smiled and Sharon just wished that Kria and Rey to be together..


"mai tumhara saamaan nikalti hu" Sharon ran to her room as if waiting for an opportunity"


"mai Sharon ki help karti hu" Neha too went inside


"Kria baby tum saaman set karo tab tak mai tumhare liye kuch bana ke lata hu" Martin said and ran to his kitchen


Kria looked at Vicky expecting him to say something

"dekho Kria , I know what you are thinking now but jab tak dadaji and dadima yaha hai , tab tak tumhe Rey ki wife ban kar rehna padega..tum samajh rahi ho na??" Vicky asked


Kria just nodded in yes


"Chalo jao ab tum Rey ke room mein araam karo , mai Sharon and Neha ko bol dunga woh tumhara saaman pahuncha denge"

Kria sighed and left to Rey's room


As soon as she left for Rey's room, Martin sneaked out of his kitchen and ran inside sharon's room along with Vicky where Neha was already present..

They all laughed,


"Vicky tumne bahot acha kiya jo dadaji amd Dadima ko yaha bula liya" Neha said happily hugging him


"well Kria aur Rey ko paas lane ka isse acha mauka nahi tha" Vicky answered


" you are right warna Kria baby toh Rey baba ke room mein kabhi shift nahi hoti" Martin stated


"woh toh hai!! Waise Neha I must say tumhara husband kaafi smart hai" Sharon said

Neha smiled proudly


"acha guys the important thing is hum chaaro ke alawaa yeh baat kisi ko pata ni lagni chahiye ki dadaji and Dadima ko yaha bulana ek plan tha, khaas kar Rey , Kria and Swayam ko.


"Swayam ko kyu nahi? Uska isse kya lena dena?" Sharon asked innocently


"actually Sharon, Swayam & my grandparents don't get along, Swayam bhai is upset with them for something, I don't know what but he never talk to them, I've never seen bhai talking to them, dadaji and Dadima hamesha se bhai ke saath baat karna chahte hai ,ek normal relationship rakhna chahte hai but bhai hai ki.." Neha sighed


"don't worry Neha , sab thik ho jayega!!" vicky consoled her..


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"hope woh din jald hi aaye" Martin sighed


"Swayam jaisa dikhta hai waisa bilkul nahi hai, there is something really more to swayu" Sharon thought but her trance broke by Vicky's voice


"acha chalo baatein bahot hogayi warna Kria yaha aa jayegi, Sharon tum uska saaman jaldi se pack karke pahuncha do, and Neha chalo doctor ke paas chalte hai tumhara checkup hai aaj" Vicky said


"haan main bhi Kria baby ke liye chai banane jaata hu, fir Maria ko bhi pick karne jana hai ,aaj raat ke get-together ke liye" Martin said

All dispersed to do their work..


Kria opened the door of the washroom and came out in a bathrobe and sat on the bed, she recalled all the events that took place in last few days. Things happening from a few days were shocking... But what happened today was unbelievable...


Kria was in trance, thinking when her nightmare suddenly changed to a perfect dream...


When Her little kiddo turned so responsible, she never got to realize that...


All she could do now is, to be proud of her...


But why did she need to hide all this from her... It was a surprise... Duh!!


but she could be in danger . . . . Wait . . . . Danger??


Not at all, she was always in safe hands, fully protected by Rey...


He assured her, not to worry about her little sis, that she made a decision with conscious mind...


But he was actually implementing the whole thing,, never pushing her kiddo in any danger & getting everything back to normal...


'And what she did? Slapped him? & he still didn't complaint...Coz, he did'nt want to ruin the master plan as well as not to hurt me in anyway...Oh god! what I've done...' Kria hold her head in frustration..


Sharon knocked and came inside with a big suitcase , she saw Kria lost somewhere and sat near her. Sharon shook her, Kria came out of her thoughts.


"di kaha kya soch rahi ho?" Sharon asked


"kuch ni" Kria faced her and smiled


Sharon held her in a bone crashing hug...


"di di . . . Sab thik ho gaya.. Humein sab wapas mil gya" she chirped..


"haan" Kria smiled wide..


"di aap mujhse naaraz ho na?I'm sorry..maine aapko itna hurt kiya . . " she made a sad pout..

Kria kissed her forehead & nodded no..


"nhi kiddo!! meri bhi galti hai..Mujhe hi samajhna chahiye tha...tune itna bada kaam kar dikhaya..aur maine Tujhe itna daant diya ... Aur itne slaps bhi.." she kissed her both cheeks for hurting her & smiled meekly...

both smiled heartily... they've got back all their property n happiness..


"chalo ab aap araam karo, raat ko get-together hai na" Sharon smiled and left


Kria thought to take a nap for some time.she was so tired that she slept with her wet hair and in bathrobe only


*******************

On the other hand

Reyam ordered a take away pizza from 'pizza hut' on their way and instead of going office, went to their favourite place "beach" . they sat on the bonnet of their car and enjoyed the view of sunset.


they ate in silence, Rey broke the silence


"ab kuch bolega bhi ya mujhe force karna padega?" rey asked


"kya bolu?? tu sab kuch toh jaanta hai!! Dadaji and Dadima yaha aa gaye, koshish karunga ki kam se kam mai unko face karu" Swayam said drinking cold drink.


"swayam tu unke saath aise behave kyu karta hai? Woh kitne acche hai , tujhse kitna pyaar bhi karte hai"


"yaar tu fir se shuru ho gaya??"


"acha chal ab yeh sab chod aur dusri baat bata"


"dusri baat??" Swayam asked in confussion


"ha dusri baat, bhaai sahab yeh batayenge ki aap mr. Shekhawat se 'kidnapper Shekhawat' kaise ban gaye?"


"oh woh .. woh toh teri biwi ne mujhe daraya tha" Swayam laughed

"really ??"


"or nahi toh kya?? Sahi ladki palle padi hai tere , tum dono plan toh aise banate ho ek se badhkar ek..kidnapping ka plan pura usi ka tha, bahot jugadoo bhi hai"


"jugadoo??" rey asked


"I mean "i-can -use -anything" !! han ek belan se abhishek ko behosh kar diya tha usne"


"belan??"


"abe rolling pin,jisse roti banate hai usko hindi mein belan kehte hai"


"kya baat kar raha hai?" Rey asked in amusement


"haan yaar mai toh hairaan tha, kaise ek belan mein usko sula diya"


" waise plan tu bhi sahi banata hai" Swayam added


"woh toh hai..thanks.." Rey smiled sheepishly


"thanks ke bache!! Mujhe bhi ni bataya!!" Swayam put his arm on Rey's neck & gripped..


"abe chodh saale maarega kya??"


Swayam left his neck.


"yaha toh biwi ki yaad mat dila & rahi baat plan mein shaamil karne ki toh agar tujhe plan batata toh tu kidnapping mein Kria ke sath nahi jaata, aur agar tu use rokta toh woh akele hi rani ki jhaansi ki tarah nikal padti kidnap karne,pata tha mujhe mere samjhane ke baawjood woh wahi karegi jo uska dil kahega and use us waqt koi chahiye tha uski dil ki baat kehne ke liye"



"kya baat hai aaj bada biwi biwi kar raha hai??itna sochta hai uske baare mein?? Not bad singhaniya"


"aisa kuch nahi hai!!" Rey blushed


"acchha??"


"Swayam tu ek baat bata , tu sach mein Kria ke daraane par Shivam ko kidnap karne gaya tha??"Rey asked chuckling


"matlab??"


"tu achi tarah jaanta hai ki main kis baare mein baat kar raha hu!! Sach bata tu use pasand karne laga hai na?"


"kise??"


"are use jiske liye tu kidnapper banne ke liye tyaar ho gaya!!"


"main kuch samjha nahi"


"chal ab ladkiyon jaisi baat mat kar, mai kuch samjhi nahi types, us ki baat kar raha hu , bata na tu use pasand karne laga hai na??"


"pata nahi yaar , but just itna jaanta hu ab uski aadat si ho gayi hai, pasand ya naa-pasand pata nahi, shayad shivam uske liye thik nahi hai yeh mai jaanta tha isliye is shaadi ko rokna chahta tha or jyaada kuch nahi hai"

Swayam clarified and added

Rey smiled at Swayam , he could clearly see his confused feelings about Sharon in his eyes..


"waise ek baat bata ??" Swayam asked


"haan puch??"


"teri biwi ka chaanta bahot zor se padta hai kya?" Swayam giggled


"saale tu mera majak uda raha hai??" rey said gripping swayam's neck.


"arey nahi yaar aaj Kria ke chilaane par Shivam ka reaction tha aisa laga jaise use Kria ne peet rakha ho"

rey laughed leaving his neck.


"haan yaar woh toh hai, dikhne mein bholi bhaali si dikhti hai, but jab marti hai toh boxers ko bhi peeche chod de" Rey said placing his hand on his cheek

Both laughed ..


"haan but aise hi usne Sharon ki parvarish nahi ki hai, kaafi strong bhi hai and kaafi acchi parvarish ki hai" Rey said proudly


"hmm.." Swayam smiled


"Sharon bhi kaafi strong hai, bahot brave bhi hai, pura plan usi ka tha, maine toh bas uski help ki thi" Rey stated and Swayam smiled proudly

"chal ab bahot ho gaya ghar pe sab aa gaye honge" Swayam said






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Edited by crazysky - 12 years ago
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Resd 😳

unres😳

me 1st

Chap-37

wowww all dis was a plan😃

Bravo sharon!!!!👏👏

mindblowing update👏

shivam 😡 😡

wowww rey,adi,vicky helped sharon n this😃

and d swaron part was damn cuteee😊

loovveedd d way he consoled her😊

d old sharon s back🤣

loovviinngg dadaji and daadiji😉


rey carrying kria n bridal styleee

looovveedd d krisha and reyam part😃

waiting for d nxt part
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frstly i was shocked that u guyzz update vch is big one 4 mee to overcum...😭 luk muje 2 din lag gye...🤣

bt finally i m out of the shock...🤣
nd i m partying...🥳 nd dacing...
4 two reasons ek toh i m second one ...😃
nd other is yogini didn't cheat,...😆
" chetna plzz save mee frm ur partner...😉"
nd chetna ... tu mri hlp kyun ni leti...????
tuje frst line likhne ki jarurat ni pdegi...🤣
nw abt update...🤔 updates...😆
frst a tight hug to bth of u for this long updates...🤗
pinky nd aditya convo was hilarius guyz,...🤣

"agar mujhe pehle pata hota toh main tumse tumhara chashma le kar khud hi us par chad jaati" pinky said in angry tone and stormed off inside..


these dialogues r damn gud... i must say jiska b idea tha wrld best tha...😉

nw abhishek nd neha's encounter is lyk...🤔
tumne mujhe jalane ki koshish ki??" he asked horrified


"nahi tumhari tie ko" Neha answered


"meri tie ?"Abhishek shouted in anger


"mujhe iska color pasand nahi hai aur na hi tum" Neha said with full attitude.


SUPRRR COOLLL...😎😆

DIMAAG H YA HILARIUS IDEAS KI DUKAN...🤣
suhaagraat wo bhi shivam k saath...?????😡😡😡😡🤬
bt he got a gud treat frm swayam bt kam bt v can adjust wid that...😉
thn possessive rey is back to mood...😳
Kria I'll never let you in peace..you have to deal with real Sanjay Dobriyal" Sanjay said eyeing Kria


"watch out Mr. Dobriyal, you are talking to my wife and about dealing with you , I can only say bring it on!!" Rey answered with a smirk

i m soo dead 4 that dialogue...🤪
thn martin nd maria's part r also cracking guyzzz nd...
martin and his kitchen-puraan...
viha r totally made 4 each other...😳😆
thn one of my fav. scene...

"agar kiddo tumhe kuch ho jaata toh??" Kria said worrying


"mujhe!! mujhe kya hota? jiju hamesha mere saath the!!" Sharon said


"jiju??" kria asked


"haan R-E-Y J-I-J-U!!" Sharon said stressing each letter..


All laughed at her comment , Kria looked at Rey, their eyes locked

kriya's concern 4 her sis nd
jiju puran... loved it...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
thn swaron's cutee convo ... nd hilarius too...lyk...

"usne mere haath pe kiss kiya tha us din toh maine dettol hand wash se apna haath dhoya toh mera hand wash khatam ho gaya!!"


"WHAT??" he shouted but jerked her softly , he sighed and nodded hopelessly "tum kabhi nahi sudhrogi??"


"sudhrogi matlab?? Mujhe kya hua jo mai sudhru??"


"tumhe apne hand wash ki padi hui hai?"

i m lyk...🤣
nd again their concern + lov unknw to them...😉
bt agn...🤣

"Swayam tum mujhe shopping le jaoge??"


"shopping??"


"haan woh mujhe dettol handwash ,dettol antiseptic liquid and neem face wash lena hai"


Swayam gave a look of 'are -you -crazy- woman?'

i mean srsly she is mad...😆😃😆😆
thn dadaj nd daadimaa's entry,...😃
this old +cutee couple is totally rocking...😉
in few minutes they came to kne swaron's lov vch swaron himslf dnt knw...😛
that's called experience...😉
nd
hua" Dadima complained


"haan haan pichli baar flight toh maine hi miss karwayi thi na ?? padosi ke ghar pe besan ke ladoo kaun maangne gaya tha??"


"acha !! sab meri wajah se?? Agar tum roz dibbe mein se chori chupe ladoo nikal nikal ke nahi khate toh woh kabhi khatam nahi hote, Maine kitne pyaar se baccho ke liye banaye the "


"arrey lekin' !!"

wahhh/...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kya scene tha...😆😆

thn kriyaansh's frst entry aftr marriage... i was lyk i m...
kr scences kam the bt
suprbbb
osssooommm
fantastic
cuteee
nd lov in the air typs the...😉
thn rey's flirt wid daadi maa is too gud guyz...👏
thn their family scene esp. sharon nd daadaji...koi baat nahi dadaji!! Mai aapki team mein hu" Sharon said taking dadaji's side


"tumhe bhi khaana banana aata hai??" dadaji asked sweetly


Martin gulped hard, Vicky blinked his eyes twice

"nahi but kaun kaun se area mein acha khaana milta hai , woh mujhe pata hai" Sharon said proudly

All burst out loudly

it was damnnn grttt...😆
mishraji's part is also grt...😆😆😆
iss part k baare m i m only day dreaming for nxt update...
bt bt bt top of it they r going to stay in same room...☺️
nd i m waiting fo rnxt part wen rey came home nd see her in his room on his actually their bed in bathrobe he'll be dead watching this sleepy beauty of his... ☺️
thn reyam part ...
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
asusually...
nd u guyzzz did justice wid reyam part...
it was suprbbb...👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
iss baare i wont cmnt mra stomach pain kr ra hans hans kr...😆
nd update khtm...😊
nd mine too...😉
nd i m shocked yeh mra cmnt h...😲😲
loved d update...👏
nd lov u guyzzz for updating...😃
continue pretty soon plzzz...😊
nd kr part thoda jyada plzz...😛
nd thanxxx 4 pm😉
vch indeed wasnt needed...😉
nw enough...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nd guyzz u enjoyed my update,...???
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Dreams feel real while we're in them. It's only when we wake up that we realize something was actually strange. ~Inception MY STORIES ARE NOW...

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Posted by: desidillse · 3 years ago

[NOCOPY] [MEMBERSONLY] Tags Credits to Quantum-Dot Hello people! This is Adv. Aditi Jain aka Adi or AJ. I am a writer and here is the...

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Posted by: zajedno · 3 months ago

new morning, new day. what does the new day bring us. what will the morning be like after the storm that rages in my heart all night. What is...

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Posted by: sarveshjoshi42 · 8 years ago

Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

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Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 3 years ago

The plot of this story is inspired from the Hollywood movies Beastly 2011 movie (which in itself is an adaptation of Beauty and the Beast) and...

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