ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread 3* - Page 85

Thank you Juhi, for weaving such a bewitching tale!!!

The minutiae, the impassion, K's fortitude, A's compunction,... were pellucid and, artistically penned.. 👏 looking forward to the next..and, thank you for the PMs ( apologies for the combined comment to both the parts...real life was playing a tough task master)

A heart touching tale! :D 

tht wonderful one dear... Edited by manikka - 11 years ago

sorry... double posting...Edited by manikka - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dj_arshifan

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ok! So firstly my teeny excitement of being first on your update!

I actually blinked thrice to make sure that it did happen.

BACK TO UPDATE-

I read both the parts in a go today!

It was yet again another amazing work of yours! 

It was definitely totally different from other works your which I have read so far. 

In the first meet itself the attraction vibes were their in the air around arshi.

Glad that payal asked khushi to take the first step towards this attraction. 

When I read about sheetal, I thought her to be his sister. But then you surprised by telling that she was no one! Just an excuse.

I loved this selfless arnav. Like always he thought about his di's happiness first, & so was the reason he kept running away from khushi.

Anjali is such a sweetheart! She didn't let her problem overshadow her brother's life. She finally found her someone special at the end!

So overall this was amazing! 

Loved it to the core.

P.S. Please keep writing more & more juhi di. I love your works a lot! Thanks for such amazing stories till now & yet to come :)

P.P.S Semanti di's works are also awesome! She is also a brilliant writer. Waiting for her next tale :)

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
you guys are so good at story telling
i just love them...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
you guys truly have an amazing gift

I tooo am a POTTER-ish FaN😉

Dear ... Have yet to read it ... am out at the moment ... 

Awsome. khushi really loves him.

I loved this story. Finally, the hospital hug. And yeah, I too wished that Sheetal was just a nightmare I was having. More than her, the stupid Mrs India thing. UGH. But coming back to the story- how wonderful :)  And ahem- Khushi pouring water on herself after exercise, and Arnav being mesmerised. Now where have I seen this before? Hahaa. keep up the good work you two :)

And also because once, just once, I wanted Arnav to put his arms around Khushi in that hospital corridor.