AsYa FF-Please Forgive Me-Note PG 82 UPDT 8/18/14

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Alveena12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

awww...i absolutely loved this chapter, at the beginning i thought it was going to be upsetting and a sad update but as it progressed and from the point that Asad and Zoya were caught by Dilshaad and Najma, i had a MASSIVE smile on my face 😃

When Zoya was running after Najma and Asad started laughing, that was so funny, especially what Zoya said after that...and when Asad ran after her and spun her arund then said she had to be punished, that was just so cute...i loved the water fight part...they are like a small, cute happy family...now just Tanveer needs to get lost and Asad and Zoya need to get married...

it was so cute when Asad and Zoya kissed and i'm glad that the b***h Tanveer saw them because now she knows they both love each other...but i hope everyone find out her truth before things start to get ugly 😕

i also hope that this mysterious caller isn't someone bad who will cause problems between Asad and Zoya

all in all this chapter is AMAZING...i really loved it, please update soon and keep making the chapters long, i love long updates and also include more cute and hot AsYa scenes please 🤗

please pm me when you update and update sooon 😊

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webuser7

@webuser7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Amazing! I so wish to see Asad laugh out aloud in the show too!

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

hey tis is really awesome...

such a lovely update...

thx fr the pm...

its really amazing...

cnt wait fr the next part...please continue soon...

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: rockstarrfn786

Okay I won't! I am excited to see that you actually enjoy reading my FF! It makes me so happy! Thanks for the support! Ahaha I just wish we had much more asyalicious scenes in the episodes itself! 😃

Ohhh wow thats a wonderful idea!!! I just have to find a way to incorporate that into a new FF or SS. I'm not sure yet though if I want to do an FF or SS. I am in like a big dilema 😕

I know same here. They confess and then it ends. I want to read to a point were they get married and how there married life works out after that. It would be very interesting to read! 😊

I know what you mean and I will try my best to make it work!

Thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it! Since your the first one to comment Chapter 9 will be dedicated to you! Also since you asked for long updates!! 😊😊

Thanks for commenting

Ruksar 😃

Aww you're so sweet! I read both of them in one go! Actually I read chapter 10 because I didn't realize you had update chapter 9 so quickly =P but my god... woman you will make me fall! I'm weak at the knees... seriously Asad's behaviour in Chapter 9.. was just... the poor baby.. and Zoya my love so broken... I LOVED THE CHAPTERS And chapter 10! I was shocked! Out of no where Akdu Ahmed Khan, LAUGHING!? It was breathtakingly beautiful! And the way he got so lost in her beauty when she came out of her room, was just... I could literally picture it :) Thanks again for the dedication :) And I'm SOOO sorry I didn't read Chapter 9 earlier! I'm an idiot! Do you forgive me

SOOO I didn't realize this posted (my connection died after I pressed Post Reply) but oh well! You deserve double the praise :D

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: rockstarrfn786

Okay I won't! I am excited to see that you actually enjoy reading my FF! It makes me so happy! Thanks for the support! Ahaha I just wish we had much more asyalicious scenes in the episodes itself! 😃

Ohhh wow thats a wonderful idea!!! I just have to find a way to incorporate that into a new FF or SS. I'm not sure yet though if I want to do an FF or SS. I am in like a big dilema 😕

I know same here. They confess and then it ends. I want to read to a point were they get married and how there married life works out after that. It would be very interesting to read! 😊

I know what you mean and I will try my best to make it work!

Thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it! Since your the first one to comment Chapter 9 will be dedicated to you! Also since you asked for long updates!! 😊😊

Thanks for commenting

Ruksar 😃

First of all I AM SO SORRY! I didn't realize you had update chapter 9 so quickly and therefore ended up reading chapter 10 first haha. And then I realized that you DEDICATED IT TO ME!? Then I went back to check my last comment and read your reply and OMG You are a sweetheart!! I feel like an idiot for not commenting sooner!

Chapter 9:

So sweet. Their place in the garden. Asad give her coffee in her mug. I actually wish they would show something like that again.. but you know Zoya thinking about her Abbu and Asad comforting her :D But this was sooo sweet and made up for that :) You seem to know my soft spots when it comes to Asya moments <3

Chapter 10:

Whoa! Asad so bold! Loved his antics though, both serious and funny. So nice to see him lively and smiling and LAUGHING! 😲 for once! The way he looked at Zoya and was so consumed by her when she walked out of her room, not worrying about who else was around... was simple mesmerizing 😳

I literally blushed reading about their kiss after they wet each other with the hose

Again sooo sorry for not reading them again! Forgive me

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rockstarrfn786

@rockstarrfn786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

HEY GUYS!!!!

Thank you sooo sooo sooo sooo sooo much for all the lovely comments!!! IT WAS JUST AMAZING I LOVED YOUR GUYS FEEDBACK! ESPECIALLY TO ALL OF YOU THAT WROTE A LONG DETAILED DESCRIPTION!!

I have started to write chapter 11 but I am sorry to say it will not be done or posted until monday sometime late at night. I am sorry I wont be free during the weekend since I will be out of town. 😭

I really wanted to update but just did not have the time to do it.

An also for all you guys that love my writing I am starting a new FF as well. I will start writing it most likely when i get back. So I will try to update both chapter 11 and the new FF at the same time. 😊

Thanks for all the love and support guys!!! I really appreciate it so much! An I am so sorry that the update has to wait till monday. I will take my laptop with me and if I have wifi or internet connection I will upload okay but thats only if you guys want me to do that.

I will write the chapters but wont upload them unless you guys want me to so let me know what you guys want and I will do exactly that. 😃

Hope to hear from you guys soon! 😊

Ruksar 😃

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rockstarrfn786

@rockstarrfn786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: mochhug

Aww you're so sweet! I read both of them in one go! Actually I read chapter 10 because I didn't realize you had update chapter 9 so quickly =P but my god... woman you will make me fall! I'm weak at the knees... seriously Asad's behaviour in Chapter 9.. was just... the poor baby.. and Zoya my love so broken... I LOVED THE CHAPTERS And chapter 10! I was shocked! Out of no where Akdu Ahmed Khan, LAUGHING!? It was breathtakingly beautiful! And the way he got so lost in her beauty when she came out of her room, was just... I could literally picture it :) Thanks again for the dedication :) And I'm SOOO sorry I didn't read Chapter 9 earlier! I'm an idiot! Do you forgive me

SOOO I didn't realize this posted (my connection died after I pressed Post Reply) but oh well! You deserve double the praise :D

AWWW THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT!!!! Your comments make my day like seriously!! Reading your updates brings a huge smile to my face thanks so much!!!

I forgive you!! I totally understand that you were to caught up in the moment to realize that you read chapter 10 before 9 but its totally okay!! You gave me such a wonderful comment that it made me smile while I was reading.

Ruksar 😃

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rockstarrfn786

@rockstarrfn786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: mochhug

First of all I AM SO SORRY! I didn't realize you had update chapter 9 so quickly and therefore ended up reading chapter 10 first haha. And then I realized that you DEDICATED IT TO ME!? Then I went back to check my last comment and read your reply and OMG You are a sweetheart!! I feel like an idiot for not commenting sooner!

Chapter 9:

So sweet. Their place in the garden. Asad give her coffee in her mug. I actually wish they would show something like that again.. but you know Zoya thinking about her Abbu and Asad comforting her :D But this was sooo sweet and made up for that :) You seem to know my soft spots when it comes to Asya moments <3

Chapter 10:

Whoa! Asad so bold! Loved his antics though, both serious and funny. So nice to see him lively and smiling and LAUGHING! 😲 for once! The way he looked at Zoya and was so consumed by her when she walked out of her room, not worrying about who else was around... was simple mesmerizing 😳

I literally blushed reading about their kiss after they wet each other with the hose

Again sooo sorry for not reading them again! Forgive me

Yes I dedicated that chapter to you and I will also do the same for chapter 11!!! 😃 Your comments have just been so amazing and wonderful!! I really appreciate it! 😃

IT'S OKAY I FORGIVE YOU!!!!!! 😃😊

By the way since you gave such nice comments I am open to ideas of anything you want to see happen in the FF! So let me know and I will input and trust me you'll enjoy reading it for sure!😊

While writing about it AsYa moments I was so excited and nervous I was just hoping you guys like it and enjoy reading it!

Thanks for reading! 😃

Ruksar 😊