AsYa FF-Please Forgive Me-Note PG 82 UPDT 8/18/14 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey just read the last three parts together...
and they were superb... plz keep them longas the way they are...
loving this asad... hope ki something like this als happens in.the serial...love how he is concerned for her and trying to understnd whats bothering her...
asya momnts are too sweet cute and romantic...
arghhh this tanveer... 😡 glad ki her each and every plan backfires...hope she doesn't succeed in creating any sort of MU
their kisses were very hot... ☺️☺️ but tanveer madam ko yaha aake bhi pareshan karna hai...😡
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was really mean but Thank God, Dilshad sorted out everything and Zoya was fine again. I loved how Asad held Zoya when she was crying and how worried he was for her. Whatever Tanveer has planned, I hope it fails just like it failed this time !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh wow... fab update... aab asad itna sensitive hop to kya baat hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was Awesome & Romantic update Ruksar..😳
Hate that Tannu..😡 Evry time she interrupt them..
Loved the update alot..
Continue soon..
Thnx for PM...
Mariam...
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab yr plzz update soon and plzz don't create any misunderstabding b/w the two
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update.. Continue it soon!!!

Dee
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a great update...
it just awesome...
hw could tanveer do such a thing tat totally horible...n nw her plan just hope tat it back fires to her...so tat asad n zoya will be together n hope tat they will also express their love for each other...
thx fr the pm n eagerly waiting fr the next part...
it just great
please contnue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww i LOVED it!!! i can't believe Tanveer can stoop so low as to make a fake phone call about Zoya's Appi and Jeeju, that's sick!! 😡 when i read it my heart sank because i thought they really did have an accident and i honestly felt really bad but i'm glad that Tanveer's plan backfired and Zoya stayed back and that her Appi and Jeeju are fine 😊
i loved the AsYa scene, it was so cute, they have definitely started to realise their love for one another, i just hope all of Tanveer's plans backfire and she doesn't create any misunderstandings between Asad and Zoya
i would love to see more cute AsYa scenes as i think they are adorable and i love reading them...also please don't let any of Tanveer's plans work and make her true colours come out in front of everyone, i don't want Asad and Zoya to seperate, especially now they have just started to get close...please get Tanveer out and then start showing the lovey-dovey side to AsYa and i would also like to see more of a naughty Asad 😆
another good idea would be to include a dance scene between Asad and Zoya, i don't know why but i would love to see them dancing to Saans from Jab Tak Hai Jaan, that would be a cute scene so please consider it...
please update soon and pm me when you do 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! Loved the whole chapter...starting from breaking down with the news of zoya's application and Jiju till the passionate kiss. 😳
I m so looking forward to read further. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mochhug

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OMG OMG OMG OMG I'm blushing! First of all POOR ZOYA! UGH TANVEER! What it must feel like to have someone tell you the two most important people in your life are gone... That's just disgusting. But koodos to you hun, because that is exactly the kind of low life despicable stunt that only that stupid cat can pull.

Second of all, aww Zoya hugging Asad with all her might, feeling safe in his arms. That was just... wow I have no words. And how he slumped with her to the ground, both of them joined by Najma... it was sad and beautiful at the same time.

Thirdly, GO DILSHAD! As always she's there to clear the MU between these two and anyone else :) especially when it's between each other. Poor Zoya was so stressed. I love how he never left her side and how their love for each other and how they couldn't see each other in pain turned to passion and desire. Such a beautiful transition. Not at all too fast or abrupt. Just right.

Fourth, I KNEW IT! I know the flower pot had to that cat. Silly girl. She thinks stopping them from kissing once is going to keep them apart. Go on Cat, do your best. Like Razia said, yeh teri bas ki baat nahin hai 😆

Loved it hun. Emotion packed and beautifully written as always ⭐️ And thanks AGAIN 😳 for the dedication 😛



Lol thanks so much! Well that stupid cat will try to pull more stunts which will slowly lead to her getting caught red handed! and when she does I want the chapter to be so action packed! Lol writing it has got me excited I have been thinking of going ahead and writing several chapters and then post it everyday. I am behind with updates so I am trying to skip through quickly!

I am glad you liked it I was hesitant to put it in and worried if it would be good but thanks so much! I figured they needed some special bonding time with each other and that's what is going to push that evil cat to screw up and get caught.

Lol OMG you can like read my thoughts like an open book! When I was writing that part I don't know why but for some reason I knew that you would comment on that part and say something about the cat having something to do with it. 😃

Your comment is just fantastic! I cant stop my self but reading your comments just brings this big smile to my face! It helps me to write much better knowing that I am meeting up to my readers expectations! Love it thanks so much for the support! 😊

And I am so happy that you like the chapter! 😃

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