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Hey my lovelies well as I promised her is chapter 10! Thanks to all you guys that gave me such lovley comments for chapter 9! I really enjoyed reading them and it brought a smile to my face! I hope to recieve more comments just like that for the new chapters that are to come if you want me to continue! So please dont stop showing the love! The more feedback that i get from you guys the better i can write and the more qucikly i will update the chapters! well enjoy reading! 😊


Chapter 10

Precap: Tanveer and Raziya talk to each other regarding the new situation at hand. Zoya breaks down thinking about everything that has happened between her and Asad. She thinks she is a misfit and a musibat for Asad. Asad tries to find out what is wrong with her but Zoya is being strong and not telling him what is bothering her. He keeps trying but Zoya is standing firm on her decision. Asad finally loses it and grabs her and yells at her and tells her he cares for her and hugs her he tries again and then says something to Zoya which shock's her to the core.

Asad: "Zoya please tell me what's wrong. Why are you upset? And why are you ignoring me?"

Zoya looked up at Asad and saw the concern, worry, and pain in his eyes but she also something else which she couldn't describe. She was just about to say something but then decided against it. She looked back down at the ground. Asad saw her reaction and felt hurt that he was still not able to get her to open up to him. He didn't know what was wrong with her and why she was acting like this. His mind wondered through things and then it hit him. He was hesitant on asking her but he thought that was what was bothering her.

Asad: "Zoya… do you love me?"

Zoya heard him she snapped her eyes up to him to see his once hard facial features smooth out. He's face held an innocent expression on it. She didn't know what to say. Her Jahanpana six packs had just asked her if she loved him. She had never expected this to come from him. But she knew that he didn't love her but then she also didn't know if she loved him also. She stood there confused for a while. Her thoughts were running wild inside her mind she didn't know what to say. Asad stood there tensed waiting for Zoya to reply but it had already been 10 minutes and she was still standing there quietly not even saying a word. She had a pained and confused expression on her face. He was getting impatient since she still did not answer his question. Does she not love me? Is that why it's taking her so long to reply back to me? Wait what if she does love me? Do I love her? Maybe I should ask her again.

Asad: "Zoya….do you…love me? Is that why you are so upset?

Zoya snapped out of her thoughts and knew she had to handle the situation before things got out of control and Asad actually started to think that she had loved him.

Zoya: "Allah Miyah what's wrong with you Mr. Khan! How can you ask me that! Do you not have any manners? You always lecture me about tameez and tehzeeb but then look at you know! Why would you ask me that! Please just leave me alone!"

Hearing Zoya's reply to his question broke his heart into a million pieces for some reason. He didn't know why it hurt him so much when Zoya yelled at him asking him to leave. He was also upset for some reason as to why she didn't answer his question correctly. He was confused. His hands slipped from her waist. He stood there and looked at her for a bit longer then turned his back to her and then walked out of her room. On closing the door he banged it shut that it made Zoya jump. Asad quietly walked back to his room with tears threatening to spill out of his eyes any minute. As he was walking he felt someone put there hand on his shoulder. He quickly wiped the new formed tears in his eyes away and slowly looked back to who it was. When he looked up he saw his best friend standing there with a frown, and concerned look on her face.

Tanveer: "Jammy what's wrong? And why was Zoya yelling at you? Did you guys have another fight?"

Asad: "It's nothing Tanveer don't worry about it and just mind your own business. Whatever happens between me and Zoya please do not interfere. Okay."

The tone that Asad replied back to her in pissed Tanveer off and she also realized that he had addressed her by her full name and not her nickname. To say she was shocked was an understatement she was fuming. She had stayed back and heard the whole conversation between Asad and Zoya and when she saw Asad leave her room without saying another word she knew this was her chance to woo him and make a good impression on him. But instead of being appreciated by him and thanked he had scolded her and that was all because of that witch Zoya. She knew now that Asad and Zoya were both developing feelings for each other and had to act fast before she lost her chance at becoming Mrs. Asad Ahmed Khan and getting her revenge on Raziya for the humiliation she had made her face. Tanveer went up to her room to rest for the night and to put her next plan in action in the morning.

Zoya felt really bad for yelling at Asad but she knew that was the only way to save her from the heart break that she would face if she had told Asad that she did feel something for him and that she was very happy that she had a chance of becoming his wife. She didn't know why it made her happy but just the thought of being married to Asad made her feel ecstatic about it as if it was something that was meant to be. She vowed that she would talk to Phupi in the morning regarding this issue and tell her that she cannot marry Asad and for her to find someone else to get him married to. The thought of seeing Asad with someone else or even marrying someone else broke Zoya's heart but she knew that she was wrong for Asad and his family. He had made it clear to her many times that she was a misfit for this family and that she could never make a good bahu for any guy she had married. Zoya decided to push it aside and went to bed.

Meanwhile Asad was in his room. Zoya's words kept replying in his mind over and over again. He didn't know what to do. All he knew is that right after his ammi had announced his nikaah with Zoya something had changed inside her. She had become cold and very mean towards him. He decided to give it a rest for the night and decided to go to bed. But little did both of them know that the next morning was about to bring a many big changes in their lives.

Zoya was peacefully sleeping in her bed when the sun rays peered into her room through the curtains. She woke up and stretched. She thought back to all that happened the previous night from what Asad had done at the party to what all had transpired between them during the night. She pushed the thoughts aside and got up to go freshen up and go down to breakfast. She also had to talk to Phupi regarding her supposed nikaah with Asad. She quickly got in the shower and showered and got ready. She was in her usual jeans and was wearing a beautiful red kurti. She looked at herself in the mirror and applied the kohl and decided to head down to the kitchen before her Phupi called her down to come join them. She walked out of the room with a big smile on her face as if last night didn't happen and that she was her same cheerful, chirpy, bubbly self again.

Asad woke up with a slight headache. He had a hard time falling asleep last night after everything that happened. But this morning he woke up with a new resolution and that was to find out what was wrong with Zoya. He knew his Zoya was never like this. Wait his Zoya? When did she become his? He pushed the thought outside and went to go take a shower. He was glad that today was Saturday hence he wouldn't have to go to the office and could spend his time at home dealing with his Zoya. He came out of the shower and got dressed and quickly made his way to the dining table. As he was walking out of his room the same time Zoya opened her room and came out with the biggest dimpled smile ever. He looked at her from top to bottom and couldn't take his eyes off of her. H was mesmerized by her beauty. He realized that her simplicity really made her beautiful. She didn't overdue it like a lot of others girls. Slowly there eyes locked and it felt as if be was drowning in the intensity of her beautiful almond shaped dark eyes. She looked like an angel and she even looked more beautiful in the color red. He looked her down again and saw how her kurti fit against her beautiful curves, she looked amazing. He slowly started to walk towards her. Zoya walked out of the room and the first thing she saw was Asad walking out of his room. She looked towards him and smiled even more. She noticed that he had left his two top buttons open to his shirt and his muscular chest could be seen. God he looked so hot. She smacked the thought out of her head as she felt Asad's intense gaze on her. She looked up at him again and saw him checking her out from top to bottom. She didn't know why but for some reason she like how Asad was observing her very closely. She felt as if he had the right to which didn't bother her. She slowly gulped and looked up again to see him staring right at her. She was getting lost in his chocolate eyes and then realized that he was walking towards her.

Asad walked to her slowly. He stood just inches away from her goddess like body. He had a hard time controlling himself from touching her big luscious lips. He looked down at her and saw her looking at the ground. He went closer to her and lifter her chin up to look at him. He saw her avert his gaze.

Asad: "Zoya look at me."

Asad spoke in barley a whisper. Zoya looked up at him she couldn't help but notice how handsome he looked. Her gaze fell towards his lips as she heard him say the next words which made her blush a bright red crimson shade.

Asad: "Mashallah you look beautiful Zoya. Just like an angel."

Asad saw her lick her lips. He looked down at her lips he couldn't control his urge then. He wanted to taste her sweet plump lips on his own. H e couldn't control himself any longer he slowly started leaning in towards Zoya's lips. Zoya didn't know what was wrong with her either in response she closed her eyes and started leaning in to Asad's touch also. She felt Asad's hands slither around her waist and pull her to his hard chest in response she clutched his shirt. They were both about to close the distance between them the clearing of a throat broke them apart and they flew away from each other as quick as possible.

Asad and Zoya looked to see Dilshad and Najma standing in front of them with big grins on their faces. Najma tried hard to control her giggles but she was unsuccessful at that. Dilshad couldn't help but control herself either. She looked at Asad who was blushing and looking at everything except them and Zoya was blushing a crimson red and staring a hole into the ground.

Dilshad: "See Najma I made the right decision to make Zoya my bahu."

Najma: "Ji ammi, it was the best decision you could ever take for bhai-jaan. Look at bhai-jaan ammi I mean he is blushing. Have you ever seen him blush because I have not."

Najma said in a teasing voice and then both Najma and Dilshad giggled at her statement. Asad threw her a glare to be quiet but her giggles got even louder. Zoya snapped her head up at the statement and looked at Najma.

Zoya: "You wait tamatar I will teach you to laugh at Zoya Farooqui!"

Zoya took off running after her. Najma realized what was happening and started running around the house. Najma was laughing like crazy and running around the house teasing Zoya even more. Zoya chased her and was blushing even more at Najma's word. Asad stood there shocked as he watched his sister be chased around the house by his Zoya. He couldn't help but smile at their silly antics especially hers. She could always cheer anyone up with her smiles, shayari's, silliness, and her craziness. Dilshad stood there smiling as she saw her two daughters running after each other playing with each other and teasing each other.

Najma: "Bhabi it's not my fault we almost caught you and bhai-jaan kissing." (In a teasing tone)

Dilshad: "Ya Allah these two will never behave. You guys please be careful. And Najma don't tease your bhabi too much. I mean look at the bechari she looks like a red tomato."

At this statement Dilshad, Najma and Asad all started laughing. Even though he was embarrassed at the situation in which is his ammi and tamatar found him he couldn't stop himself now after what his ammi had said. As soon as they heard Asad laughing Najma and Zoya stopped running around and looked at him. He was holding his stomach and laughing so hard that tears had welled up in his eyes. Zoya stood there with her mouth dropping open in the shape of a big O and staring at her Jahanpana six packs. She took in his expression and realized that he looked just like a little child. She couldn't help herself but comment on Asad's behavior which had caught his attention.

Zoya: "ALLAH MIYAH! JAHANPANA SIX PACKS LAUGHS! AND THAT TO SO HARD THAT HE HAS LITERALLY STARTED CRYING!"

Zoya was jumping up and down like a little child while yelling on the top of her lungs.

Zoya: "Phupi did you see Jahanpana six packs is laughing!"

Asad looked at Zoya who had all of a sudden stopped laughing. She saw a mischievous smile spread across his face. The next things she knew was that Asad was running towards her. Her reflexes told her to run and she ran yelling though.

Zoya: "AHHH PHUPI BACHAO!! OR ELSE JAHANPANA WILL EAT ME ALIVE!"

Najma and Dilshad stood there shocked they had never seen Asad act like this and especially not with Zoya. They both broke out laughing and smiling as they realized it was the love that had brought both of them to act like this.

Asad was smiling as he ran after Zoya. He soon caught her as she was to slow for him since he was faster than her. Asad grabbed her and pulled her up in his arms. Zoya was shocked she was struggling to get out of his hold but his hold was too strong for her to get out off. He grabbed her and swung her around in circles. In response Zoya linked her hands around his neck and hide her face in the crook of his neck.

Zoya: "AHHH! ASAD PLEASE PUT ME DOWN I AM FEELING VERY DIZZY!"

But Asad didn't stop his naughtiness; he threw her over his shoulder and started walking towards the kitchen the garden with his ammi and sister following them closely.

Asad: "No way Zoya, you were laughing at me now you have to be punished for your silly mistake and your crazy antics. Besides your Jahanpana will teach you a very good lesson. (He winked and was smirking while saying this).

Dilshad and Najma were shocked at Asad's behavior they had never seen him like this ever. It had brought tears of happiness to both his ammi and sister as they had finally seen Asad actually enjoying himself and having fun and that was all thanks to Zoya.

Asad took her out in the garden. He grabbed the water hose from the ground and switched on the water. He let Zoya go from his hold and looked up at her with a wicked smile and his eyes were gleaming mischievously. The next thing had Zoya screaming on the top of her lungs. Asad had turned the water towards her and had sprayed her. She was now wet from top to bottom. She looked up at Asad who was laughing like a crazy manic.

Asad: "Ahahahahaha that will teach you to laugh at me Miss Farooqui!"

The next that happened had Asad shutting his mouth and looking at Zoya with shock written all over his face. She had grabbed the hose from his hands and sprayed him and now he was completely wet.

Zoya: "There now we are even, besides that will teach you to mess with Zoya Farooqui."

Zoya turned to Najma and smiled at her mischievously.

Zoya: "Aur tum tamatar this is all your fault!"

With that Zoya turned the hose towards Najma and sprayed her also. Zoya started laughing like crazy. Not realizing what was about to happen with her.

Najma and Asad both stared at each other. Then both their faces broke into a smile they both grabbed the hose and called for Zoya.

Najma: "Zoya please look over her nah!"

Zoya turned around to look at them and yelled and started running around as if she was on fire both Asad and Najma ganged up on her and were spraying her with the water. Zoya ran towards Dilshad and hid behind her but that was too late because in the process both Asad and Najma had sprayed their ammi and now she was all wet and glaring at them.

Zoya in the meantime couldn't help but laugh at what Asad and Najma did.

Zoya: "AHAHAHAHA! YOU GUYS SPRAYED PHUPI!!! BUAHAHAHAHA! YOU GUYS ARE DONE FOR!"

Zoya and Dilshad both exchanged glances amongst each other and then both of them ran after Asad and Najma throwing more water on them and getting them even wet. After a while they stopped and they all stared at each other and broke out in laughter. Asad looked around and for the first time in a long time he saw his ammi and sister happy. They were laughing and smiling and that was all thanks to his musibat magnet. After a while of laughing Dilshad went towards Zoya cupped her face smiled and kissed her on the forehead. Zoya was so happy that she flung herself and hugged her Phupi soon Najma came and joined them also. Asad was just standing there and looking at the three most important people in his life happy and smiling. Dilshad called him over and soon all four of them were in a group hug. Dilshad then pulled back and smiled lovingly at Zoya.

Dilshad: "Okay enough of this we all have to go inside and change before we catch a cold. Now hurry along all of you."

Dilshad and Najma started to walk off and saw Zoya coming behind them slowly after looking back at Asad and smiling. Asad slowly trailed behind Zoya as soon as he saw his ammi and sister out of sight he ran up to Zoya and grabbed her hand and turned her towards him.

Zoya: "Mr. Khan what are you doing? Please let me go we have to go change or else we will catch a cold."

Asad pulled her in for a hug and settled his face in the nape of her neck. His hot breathe tickled Zoya on the neck and it sent cold shivers down her spine and gave her goose bumps all over her body.

Asad: "Thank you Zoya for today. I haven't seen ammi and tamatar this happy in a very long time and that's all thanks to you. I have always said that you were a misfit for this family but I was wrong Zoya. All the time I was wrong about you and I always misjudged you. No one in this whole world could make ammi and tamatar that happy as much as you can. Thank you Zoya for making this day special for them. I will always cherish this memory forever."

Zoya was shocked at Asad's behavior. She didn't know what was wrong with him but whatever he had said to her right in this moment made her feel very special. Her eyes welled up with tears of happiness. As Asad pulled back he saw the tears in her eyes and saw them spill out.

Asad: "Zoya why are you crying? Did I say something to hurt you? I am sorry if I hurt you I didn't mean to. Please forgive…"

But before Asad could continue Zoya had put her finger on Asad's lips to stop him from apologizing.

Zoya: "Asad you don't have to apologize to me. You didn't do anything wrong. These tears are tears of happiness and not sadness. Asad this just wasn't me you made them happy also. I haven't seen you this carefree and happy ever since I came here I have always seen you in your Akdu Khan mood. I didn't make today special for Phupi or Najma you did. So thank you for making this day special for them and me Asad."

Asad was smiling his rare dimple wala smile. He saw a lone tear make its way down Zoya's cheek and he leaned in and kissed it away. He felt Zoya stiffen in his arms but then he felt her body relax against him. Asad pulled back to see Zoya blushing and wouldn't even look up at him he lifted her chin up and made her look at him. Her eyes spoke volumes to him he was so mesmerized by her beauty. Water droplets were dripping from her hair onto her face. Asad pulled back a little and took in her state. Her clothes were stuck to her body like a second skin. He could see her perfectly shaped curves and he couldn't resist himself. He started rubbing circles on her waist. Zoya looked up at him and clenched his shirt and pulled Asad closer. Asad couldn't help himself and he leaned in and placed hot wet kisses on her neck working his way up to her chin. He kissed near her chin and worked his way up to the corner of her lips. Zoya was so lost in the moment that she started running her hands all over his body. She wanted to feel his body and especially his six packs which she could drool over every day. Asad was losing his self control once Zoya's hands had touched his body. His body was burning with a different type of desire which he could not explain. He trailed more kisses back to her neck and then bite down hard on the nape of her neck. She let out a small gasp but to asad it had sounded more like a moan. He lost the tiny bit of self control that was left and took Zoya's lips in for a deep passionate kiss.

He sucked on her lips and nibbled on them. He couldn't get enough of her she tasted so amazing. At first he didn't feel Zoya respond to the kiss and was about to pull back when he felt her responding to him. He was just about to probe her mouth open with his tongue when someone's presence interrupted them. He heard someone clearing there throat and the both of them pulled away from each other. They both looked up to see Tanveer standing there staring at them with a different type of look on her face.

Asad: "Uhh Tanveer? What are you doing here? Did you want something?"

Tanveer: "Umm no Jammy I just came to talk to you but its okay I'll come back later sorry I disturbed you."

Tanveer turned around but soon her smile was replaced by a look of anger.

Tanveer: "I have to do something about Zoya fast. She is getting to close to Asad. And now Asad, Khala, and Najma are all worshipping her like she's some kind of goddess. Now wait and watch Zoya how I turn this family against you and I'll make sure that Asad kicks you out or my name is not Tanveer."

She hurried up to her room to put her plan into action. In the meantime Asad and Zoya were still standing in the garden. Zoya started to go inside after mumbling that she was getting cold. Before she could leave Asad grabbed her hand and turned her towards him once more.

Asad: "Thank you Zoya."

With that Asad placed a kiss on her cheek and walked off with a smirk on his face. Zoya stood there flabbergasted at to what had just happened between her and Asad. She trailed her fingers over her lips remembering the kiss. She smiled to herself and walked to her room to change. As she walked in she got a phone call.

Zoya: "Hello…"

…..

No reply

Zoya: "Hello? Who is this?"

She heard someone on the other end breathing but wasn't saying anything. Zoya was getting scared. She didn't know who it was and why they weren't saying anything. She hung up but right when she did her phone started ringing again. She looked at the caller ID and it was an Unknown caller. She hesitated to answer but she did. When she picked and said hello the only thing she heard was the breathing of another person on the other end of the line. As she was about to hang up again the next words out of that man's mouth left her shocked and scared to death.


Hey guys so that was chapter 10 i hope you enjoyed reading it cause i have no idea what the heck i just wrote. This chapter came out differently from how it turned out to be so my apologies if you don't like it. So please give me feedback of how it was and if you liked it and if i should continue on with chapter 11.

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Posted: 12 years ago
I looovvved it sooo much❤️
who called zoya and what had that person said...?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww that was so so cute and sweettt! Jahapanah laughing and playing with water, awww. Tanveer 😡
What is she upto now? Update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Excellent Update!

OMG... The KISS was HAWT! ☺️ ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice post..
You're awesome with ur cliff hangers.
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My favourite part of the update had to be the Asad, Zoya, Dilshad and Najma playing with the hose in the garden. I'm happy that Asad and Zoya are showing that they are attracted to each other, hopefully whatever Tanveer plans doesn't work. Looking forward to finding out who called Zoya and what they said that it scared her so much !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cliff hanger again... How much you love to do that , huh!!!! I just loved there small fun time together. All four of them together are so cute and make a perfect family. Lovely chapter.

Can someone please kill tanveer , she is really very annoying. They were doing so well. Pehla romantic scene and use ake bigadna tha... I hope she doesn't succeed to her plans...
Keep smiling and keep writing!!!

Continue soon!!!

Dee
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Posted: 12 years ago

continue continue continue

or else i will really go mad

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IT WAS SUPER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I LUVED IT 👏 👏 👏

WAITIN 4D NEXT PART...
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Awesome update!! Really loved how Asad, Zoya, Dilshad and Najmah played with each other 😊 Please do continue soon 😊

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