FF Love In Death Valley - Part 14 PG 120 20/07 - Page 9

Tho i got confused with d character names it was superb.nice writing style.So Khushi is born?Yes,Arnav will def b under his fairy's clutches.Cant waiting 4 their meeting.

Beautifully written...totally hooked to it

that was an amazing start!! We get the insight into what's the scenario! Update fast! :D Will be waiting! :D

Amazing Jyothi thanks for the pm 

Good beautiful!!

It took me to another fantasy land..it will take time for me to remember the charecter names,maybe 2 or 3 chapters more.The update was beautiful di...waiting to read more.updatewa! thanx for the pm.. 🤗

Awesome start.. It was beautifully written!

wow that was out of this world.. really zapped to read such an interesting and unique start of a beautiful story.. will be looking forward to updates to know how the story unfolds the win of good over evil... 

Nice part...please continue...

Wow it's really different and fresh from the other FF...LUVED IT