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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 5:

Oh, I love you Aman, for ur loyalty... Even in the face of vicious temptations, you stand tall.. And don't give in...

Atta girl, Payal... Take full advantage of that Gupta Singh Raizada surname... It's a power packed egoistic bomb.. Make good use of it..

Shyam is not just a psychopath... He's insane!!!! And walking free!!! What the...!!!!!

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 6:

Hai...mera dil bhar aaya, reading the Manorma- Payal scene... Thats how it should've been from the beginning... And it only took a few matter of fact lines from Payal, for Manorma to realize what a gem she has for a daughter-in-law... Touching!!!!

Finally, Shyam is caught... But, why do I feel this is the calm before the storm???? Maybe Khushi's dream is a premonition???

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 7:

I got this big lump in my throat, which is refusing to go away... The NK-Arnav childhood memories was such a poignant scene... For lack of words to express my self, I shall stop here..

Mental instability, could be manifested in many forms, and there are chances of it being passed in the genes.. Hence, though it might sound inhuman, I'm glad Anjali lost her child.. I feel for her loss..cos for a mother, there could be no greater pain than a still born child... But, in view of the the available facts about Shyam, I feel she's better off suffering a loss now than a greater one later..

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 8:

Is Akaash so insecure that he would prefer a submissive wife over one who can stand shoulder to shoulder with him, and be an equal, rather than a meek follower??? What a loser!!!

NK's such a sweetheart... Even as a child, he was there as a support system for his Nannav!!! A true loving brother...

Anjali's pain is heart rendering.. I feel very sympathetic towards her.. To go through so much pain, and feel dejected so early in life.. Very heart-breaking...

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 9:

I wonder if it's possible for anyone, who had gone through even a fraction of what Khushi had to endure, to ever forget all that and become normal again... I think it's next to impossible... Too much pain, and mental and physical torture can severely damage the mind and shred the self-confidence to pieces... I really hope Arnav doesn't give up on Khushi soon...cos he's all that she needs to the road to recovery, not just physically, but mentally too.. Which is the most difficult task..

Akaash had undergone discomfiture because of his uneducated and loud mother, at the hands of his racist teacher.. It's very sad to happen to a child especially by a teacher he was idolizing... Still, it's not good enough reason for feeling insecure where his wife's success is concerned.. Every child goes through some degree of embarrassment, either with friends, teachers or family members.. There are all kinds of ppl on this world.. Who would not leave a chance to undermine someone, just for thrills.. These should be jotted down as lessons in growing up.. To the path of becoming a strong and successful human being.. And not used as a weakness to dwell on.. I'm disappointed in this Akaash!!!

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 10:

Corruption and fraud is so prevalent in our legal system.. No wonder crime rate is forever on the rise... It's so easy to bribe a havaldar, and the same ppl who are presumably there to protect the civilians, become the enemy!!! So Shyam is planning something nasty against the Raizadas... His unstable mind has yet again contrived something dangerous... Wonder what it is this time???

Anjali, if u think ur going to find solace and strength in the arms of ur brother, like old times, I think you're in for a big surprise!!! You might just need to take up the role of the provider than be the provided for... ( I don't even know if it's the right phrase or diction, don't mind me Vee, I'm sleepy, but I want to finish reading this story first;) )

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 11:

Wow, this is an interesting development... The good doctor and Garima!!! Was she the one he loved?? And lost???

Inspector Arjun Khurana, you would be doing a great service to the Raizadas and ur self, if you can find the reason behind the nagging feeling u r having regarding SHYAM MANOHAR JHA!!! It might just save a lot of lives!!! You r already on the right track, u just need a little nudge...

Oh the ever reliable, and devoted Hari Prakash... Poor thing, couldn't control his emotions having his Khushi Bhabi back to bring the missing bright sunshine back into their lives... Ab bechare ko kaun bataye, that this emotionally broken Khushi, is a far cry from the bubbly happy go lucky Bhabi he was so used to having around...

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emistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

wow! I am so glad I found this story.. and thanks reposting it!!! I have now words.. as to how brilliantly it was written! The roller coaster of emotions you put me through was mind boggling!

Thanks again for sharing this story! Now I am going to go stalk your index!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

This was a difficult story, one that takes a lot of guts to write but you've accomplished this fabulously.

The prologue gave me goosebumps and I couldn't turn away once I started.

Beautifully written Vee! It was a wonderfully thought out story.

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Couldn't sleep last night, was reading this masterpiece 😊

Its quite a different concept I ever read on IF!

Its so dark, yet calming with such reality flicks.

Every character has their own stand in this story. So carefully portrayed with such passion n emotions.

My fav character in 'GLASS' is 'MANORAMA' I dont know, but I Loved her.

And Akash's was no less, with a hint of darkness.

What to say, now? You just nailed it!

Thanks for sharing.

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J

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