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sslmay11

@sslmay11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#431

This outtake fitted here too aptly RB. Actually i liked the way u tell this story...all incidents and emotions in bits and pieces...underlying the core story...Please don't think of others who r not here...do write for us who r here dear...i'm looking forward...five chapters left...what will happen to all...lots to be told...

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#432

An interesting update. Lavanya really is not what I perceived her to be from the first few chapters. One event caused all of Khushis' friends to re-evaluate a lot of their lives. like dominoes. The orphanage is symbolic to all of these friends because they too just have one another to rely on for support. I really do like the FF an am sorry to learn it will end soon.

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Nice update.
With Arnav and Khushi on my prime focus,i have never pondered much abt Lavanya's character.but this brought new light to her character.

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nnhk

@nnhk

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

Gravity is an addiction, going to re read it!

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#435

yes really.. can understand lavanya much better now...

thanks for pm dear...

please continue soon..

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#436

Thanks for adding this part, letting us know Lavanya's thoughts. It's also a good thing that Khushi knows how she feels.

I'm sad to hear that there are only a few more chapters left, but I'm sure you will do an amazing job with the rest of them!

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Its comforting to know the confidence with which Lavanya voices her opinions and thoughts.

It could have been so awkward talking about the love for the same man between two friends but they way you chalk out these conversations it feels more real than it possibly could be !

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#438

Glad La told Khushi how she felt

I think that the readers want Arnav and Khushi to resolve their problems
and are not to interested in the other characters

but I feel all the characters have a part to play and is important for the growth
of the story

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#439

so dere is dose children nd dese ppl...

d pain of separation is d thing dat connects dem all...

la is a geniniue grl..but fate playd a cruel joke on her..lovin someone who loves someone else... .

khushi seems selfish sometyms...but dats y we r humans...

omg...u're wrappin dis one in five updates but y????????????

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aysh05

@aysh05

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#440

You know I am glad you posted it the now rather than posting it when it was originally meant for... Between Arnav's & Khushi's tug of war this bit of information may have been disolved into nothing...

Thank you for the pm :) as always your ardent fan