ArHi FF! Gravity - Thread 2 - [Completed]

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

I'm reading, though I normally stay away from despair. This story is despair rendered beautifully: like watching a beautiful face that should be smiling be full of tears instead, I can't look away.

I know there is the possibility of acceptance or even happiness for these characters, should they find peace, but it will still be a sombre affair considering the heartache everyone has gone through...especially when it could have all been avoided if Khushi had talked to Arnav, if Akash had shown up at the wedding, so many what ifs.

Still, it's a beautiful story and I'm really glad you're writing it. I do miss 'We, the People' though...😉

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

A brilliant and heart felt update, yet very emotional. Loved the fact you showed how Lavanya has been feeling and the conversation between her and khushi was much needed. Her feelings for Arnav were quite deep and very strong and she even thought she might have a chance with him when khushi had gone away. The following sentence is spot on "Inevitability is constant because irrespective of what one wants or wishes or pines or desires, the inevitable outcome always prevails" Beautifully written. I do agree with you this chapter would have fit in the story abit earlier, especially when khushi had just come back, but however the update was amazing. I can't believe this wonderful story is going to end in 5 chapters, is that even possible? There are so many questions to be answered. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Awesome Update...amazingly written...

Both Lavanya and Khushi have accepted reality...

lavanya has accepted the reality of her and Arnav's relationship...understanding that she can never be anything more than a friend for him...Feel bad for her...

Khushi accepting the reality that her one rash decision has caused so much pain and suffering to her loved ones in more than one way...most of it to Arnav and herself...

"Inevitability is constant because irrespective of what one wants or wishes or pines or desires, the inevitable outcome always prevails" ...So very true and beautifully penned...knocked me speechless...

Eagerly waiting for the next update...

PS: I am loving this story and the way u write it is beautiful...U have potrayed all the characters, their feeling, emotions, pain, suffering and most importantly Arnav and Khushi so beautifully...

i look forward to ur PM everyday...Looking forward to reading more of Gravity and your other stories in the future...😊

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Beena

@honeygirll277

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

i just started reading your story and finished it in one sitting! you are a fantastic writer, you wonderfully present each aspect of what everyone is going through love it! :)

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#455

Very well written update...khushi and lavanya convo is very touching...Thanks for the PM

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

Outtake was a surprise...
Its commendable to see how lavanya has moulded herself into what she is today. ...despite knowing that arnav will never love her the way she wishes him to...
Well yes...inevitability is constant...

I dont want u to abruptly wrap the story please... give us everythng that u originally planned to. ..I love gravity.period.

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Frida

@Frida

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#457

Nice update!

You have brilliantly explained the past & also the current state of every character in this story. All of them have evolved so much.

I agree that it's a sad story but it is very gripping at the same time.

Pls do not end it in a rush.. I request you to continue it as you must have had planned initially.

I am waiting to read about the new guy Aman & his upcoming interaction with Payal. Also, what's going on with Arnav & Akash?

Keep up the great work 👏

Thanks for the PM.

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katunkka

@katunkka

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Lavanya is very mystery to me. Even more than arnav and the fact that she stood for arnav and was there for him makes me feel a little bit uncomfortable and maybe she desrve arnav more than khushi but I sympathize forever for khushi because even though she made mistake first I feel like everybody holds her responsible for their misfortune and because of that she is unable to forgive herself.

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#459

You're ending this? Please please please make it happy. Please. My poor heart just cant take anymore. Communication. There's a reason that people stress on it. Had all the parties communicated their feelings years ago, this wouldn't be Broken-Hearted Central.