Arshi's full Love Story in poem style

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Once I have posted Arshi love story (till kidnapping track) through a poem on IPK anniversary but didn't get response except my friend. I've never expected ending of IPK so soon. It's been 3 months IPK had ended. I tried so many times to complete the poem but couldn't. Only I know how much I cried while writing the finishing point. Not a single word was coming into my mind but at last, I completed it'..but still feeling a silence pain inside of my heart.

Guys, this time I am really expecting some comments from you all... I will post my other poems with edited pics if I get enough response.

Before reading this one, plz read the first one else you won't be able to understand the whole poem '

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3025367/arshis-love-story-in-a-short-note

Khel ke apni jaan paar,

bachake layi apni piya ko issbaar.

Dushman ko jo durr kiya,

Mitne lagi beech ki duriya.

Choti si tufaan se guzarke bhi.

Phir paas aaye yeh do premi.

Zyada na raih payi khushi inki'

Naa jaane kahase agayi inki dadi!!!

Gusse mein aake issbaar

Ladke ne kiya pyaar ka izhaar.

Daadi ne yeh pata lagayi,

Unki shaadi thi adhuri !!!!!!

Utthaya jo ungli ladki paar,

Ladka hogaya shaadi ke liye taiyaar.

Dekh ke apne piya ka pyaar,

Ladki ne bhi kardiya ikraar.

Sagayi huyi, haldi bhi hua.

Mehendi ne bhi khub rang laya.

Phir achanak tufaaan ayaa.

Zindagi jaise tham sa gaya.

Paar bhulake gila shikwa..

Shaadi mein sabne haat bataya.

Dhol bajayi, gana bhi gaya'.

Iss sangeet mein sabne nacha.

Shaadi se pehle hua khuch khaas, 😉

Jisse hum kehte hain suhaagraat 😳

Karke pura shaaj shringar ,

dulhan ko tha apne dulhe ka intezaar.

Waqt guzraa, mauhraat bitaa'..

Dulhe ka na koyi sandesha aaya. :(

Ayaa toh tha dwar pe koyi''

Wos thi dadi, badi sayani.

Aake apna zeher ugla,

Ateet ka sara raaz bataya.

Aab toh who shaadi tha naamumkeen,

Magar dulhan ko tha apne pyaar pe yakeen.

Usne naa suni kissiki...

Baas intezar karti hi rahi...

Unka pyaar jeetgaya..

Jaab dwar pe dulha dikhayi diya.

Chorke peeche ateet apna...

Usne dulhan ka haat thama.

Woh shaadi kinti anokhi thi...

Jakhmi tha dulha toh ladki bhi thodi behosh thi. 😉

Phirbhi saabne puri ki,

Shaadi ki woh rasmein saari.

Hassi khushi beet rahi thi unki zindagi..

Rakhshas durr hua tha toh na jane kahase chudail agayi

Dikhake himmat pati ne apna..

Chhudwaya usne chudail ka peechha.

Patni ko achanak khayal yeh ayaa,

Dundhna hain usse wajood apna.

Uski hausla jo parivaar ne badhaya...

Patine bhi haar daam saath nibhaya.

Jeet jo li usne dill sabka,

Bann gayi woh Mrs. India.

Dhere dhere unnko pata chala...

Adhure hain woh ek dujee k bina.

Yeh thi Arnav Khushi ki kahani.

Jinhone milke haar musbatko paar ki.

Khatam kyun hogayi unki kahani.

Humein toh na yeh ummed thi.

Yaad karke har RABBA VE ko rote hain hum aaj bhi.

Khoke unn sabko jaise biran hogayi zindagi humari.

Saansomein baas gayi hain yeh kahani..

Dill mein chhapgayi inki zubanee.

Dua hum karte hain aaj bhi

Lautado humein humari zindagi.


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Ireena7 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The old post is closed...so here is the edit of that one-

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww. its beautiful my Ireenwa... Loved it ❤️
Edited by NeelVi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!!!!! WHAT CAN I SAY! U ARE TURLY SO GIFTED AND TALENTED DEAR.. TO WRITE A WHOLE SERIAL IN A POEM.. HATS OF... LOVED IT SOOO MUCH!!!!!!! WHEN I WAS READING THIS I WAS REMEMBERING THE SCENES... IT WAS TRIP DOWN THE MEMORY LANE... I AM JUST SO MISSING IPK..

ARSHI KI KAHANI ITNI JALDI KATHAM HONGI HUM NEHI JAAN TE
BAS HUME HAMARI ARSHI WAAPAS LAUTAKE HAMARI KHUSHI LAUTA DE

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Posted: 12 years ago
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woah you wrote the whole thing in a poem... wonderful dear 😊 it was beautifully written... great job i must say... 👏👏👏 keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pieryrose

OMG!!!!! WHAT CAN I SAY! U ARE TURLY SO GIFTED AND TALENTED DEAR.. TO WRITE A WHOLE SERIAL IN A POEM.. HATS OF... LOVED IT SOOO MUCH!!!!!!! WHEN I WAS READING THIS I WAS REMEMBERING THE SCENES... IT WAS TRIP DOWN THE MEMORY LANE... I AM JUST SO MISSING IPK..

ARSHI KI KAHANI ITNI JALDI KATHAM HONGI HUM NEHI JAAN TE
BAS HUME HAMARI ARSHI WAAPAS LAUTAKE HAMARI KHUSHI LAUTA DE

Thank you 😊

Missing them a lot😭 want them back

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anisha21

woah you wrote the whole thing in a poem... wonderful dear 😊 it was beautifully written... great job i must say... 👏👏👏 keep it up

Thanks 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ITNI PYAARI SE AAPNE YEH POST BANAYA
ISKI VAJESE AAPKE YEH LAFZEN HAMARI DIL KO CHOOLIYA

HAMARE ARSHI KI KAHANI ITNI KHOOBSOORATH SE AAPNE EK POEM KI TARAH LIKI
JAISE MEIN AAJ TAK KABHI NEHI DHEKI

JAB MEIN AAPKE YEH POEM PAR RAHATHA
MUJHE AISA LAGA KI MEIN IPKKND DEK RAHA THA

AAP KE POST KO BEGGNINIG SE END TAK MEIN PALHI THI
PEHELE KHUSH THI, PHIR BOHOT DUK HUI TI

KYUNKI HAMARE ARSHI KI KAHANI KAHTAM HOGAYI
AUR HUM JAANTE HAIN KI YEH WAAPAS NEHI AAYEGI


HAMARI DUA AAPKE JAISE HAI
KI HAMARI ARSHI LAUTKE AAYENGI



AAP BOHOT GIFTED HAI
AUR AAP HAMESHA AISA HI RAHIYE


JAANE SE PEHELE MAIN BOLNA JAANTI HOON THANKYOU
AAPKE AUR POST DEKNE KE LIYE UMMED KARTI HOON


PS: MEIN INDIAN NEHI HOON
BAS AAPKO THANNEVAD KARNE KE LIYE KAR RAHI THI

Edited by pieryrose - 12 years ago
Ireena7 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pieryrose

ITNI PYAARI SE AAPNE YEH POST BANAYA
ISKI VAJESE AAPKE YEH LAFZEN HAMARI DIL KO CHOOLIYA

HAMARE ARSHI KI KAHANI ITNI KHOOBSOORATH SE AAPNE EK POEM KI TARAH LIKI
JAISE MEIN AAJ TAK KABHI NEHI DHEKI

JAB MEIN AAPKE YEH POEM PAR RAHATHA
MUJHE AISA LAGA KI MEIN IPKKND DEK RAHA THA

AAP KE POST KO BEGGNINIG SE END TAK MEIN PALHI THI
PEHELE KHUSH THI, PHIR BOHOT DUK HUI TI

KYUNKI HAMARE ARSHI KI KAHANI KAHTAM HOGAYI
AUR HUM JAANTE HAIN KI YEH WAAPAS NEHI AAYEGI


HAMARI DUA AAPKE JAISE HAI
KI HAMARI ARSHI LAUTKE AAYENGI



AAP BOHOT GIFTED HAI
AUR AAP HAMESHA AISA HI RAHIYE


JAANE SE PEHELE MAIN BOLNA JAANTI HOON THANKYOU
AAPKE AUR POST DEKNE KE LIYE UMMED KARTI HOON


PS: MEIN INDIAN NEHI HOON
BAS AAPKO THANNEVAD KARNE KE LIYE KAR RAHI THI

Thanks a lot...😊

You r also gifted...loved your words... I am also not Indian

pieryrose thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ireena7

Thanks a lot...😊

You r also gifted...loved your words... I am also not Indian



i am not gifted, jut able to write sum nonsense .i just make pic posts... and u r not indian yet u wrote this beautiful poem is like giving u a countless standing ovation

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