AsYa SS: Change My Mind CH. 1 UPDATED PAGE 6

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Posted: 11 years ago


Change My Mind

 

 

I'm back. Again. You must all want to kill me. I know 🤣

For two reasons.

1)   I cant actually write to save mah life;

2)   Its more angst.

 

But it'll get bettah loves!!!

This is a Short Story, which should be finished in about 5 parts maybe? I'm not sure 🤣

Oh, and the titles a song by one direction. (yes, again 🤣)

So here yah go, mah first Short Story!!!

Ps, its really short too. 'bout 100 words maybe?

Dunno 🤣

You'll only waste 2 minutes of your life. And about 1 gazillion brain cells 🤣

oh, and it might be triggering too.

 

 

 

 

-Prologue-

 

 

 

"No Asad! Stop!"

"Why Ammi? I'm useless anyway."

 

***

 

"Bhaijaan, have something, you haven't eaten in days,"

"Najma, I'm pathetic. I don't need food to be wasted on me."

 

***

 

"Asad I've had enough. You are going to start behaving normally from this instant before I end up doing what neither of us want."

"I don't want anything."

 

Except her.

 

***

 

"Zoya, he's not behaving normal, he's not talking, not eating, I don't know what's wrong with him!"

"So?"

"What's wrong with you? This is Asad I'm talking about."

"Why would I care?"

 

Except she did.

 

***

 

"You love her."

"No."

"Then why do you still have her earing, her Ammis akhri nishaani?

"She didn't ask for it back"

"She did."

"Shut up"

 

 

 

 

A story where Asad's suicidal, Zoya's doesn't care (but she does), and Ayaan is rightfully named the Love Guru.

 

 

Stupid I know.

But PLEEJ comment, even if it is to tell that I should seriously stop writing and stick to being retard. 🤣

Love you all <3

Ps.

Comment.

 :)


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Posted: 11 years ago
Great prolouge..would love to read more <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Asad's suicidal? Oh man I'm freaked. :$
But but but, this is awesome! :D yayyy! You have to.continue this soon. Zoya seems like a bitch. :| I hope not. :(
Love ya! xx
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Posted: 11 years ago
You caught my attention dearie...waiting for the first part..😊
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😆 hehe! 
i'm not gonna ask u to stop writing cuz i want the next part ASAP! 😆 
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don't you dare  stop writing,😲

i want the next part sooon 😃😉😆
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AND A BIT LONGER 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Don't you dare to stop writing this!! I mean it😳 You have to continue this. Asad/KSG ki kasam hai aapko😳 Todne ki koshish mat karna warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga. You get that!












Lol meri dhamki bhi funny lagti hai🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago
Great prologue love<3 :) eager for the next part! :):)
Continue super soon! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was beautiful dear! 👏

Please continue soon! 👍🏼